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1、Learninggoals1.Toknowhowtowriteadiary.2.Tobeabletowritelongsentencesusingconjunctionsinwriting.Work in groups and discuss:1.What is a diary?2.What is a diary for?3.What should we think about when we write a diary?Leading in Adiaryisarecordofwhathashappenedoverthecourseofadayorotherperiod.(form,perso
2、n,tense)The form of a diaryDate,weatherDate,weatherThe body of the diaryThe body of the diaryDate,weatherDate,weatherDate Date WeatherWeatherHeadingDate Date Person(first,second)Language(tense,useofwordsSentences(short&longsentences)Paragraphs(3ormore)Reflection.Event(order)Readastudentsdiaryandfind
3、outitsproblemsGroupwork2018 July 7 A Traffic AccidentHere is my account for it.It happens at 5 p.m.at the school crossroads when I was on my way back to my school.A taxi ran into a cycling boy who was riding across the road near the crossroad.Five minutes later,an injured boy was taken away by an am
4、bulance.When the taxi pulled up suddenly after the stupid driver realized what had happened,the boy was already lying on the ground,bleeding and crying loudly.No one knows how it came about.ItcanbeomittedHere is my account for it.ItisnotagoodbeginningWednesday,July 7,2018HOW TO START:With a phrase t
5、o focus the reader on the main event:“What a terrible day it is!”With an opinion:I have never felt so terrible!With a rhetorical question:How could I have imagined things could be so terrible?Wednesday,July 7,2018A Traffic AccidentHere is my account for it.It happens at 5 p.m.at the school crossroad
6、s when I was on my way back to my school.A taxi ran into a cycling boy who was riding across the road near the crossroad.Five minutes later,an injured boy was taken away by an ambulance.When the taxi pulled up suddenly after the stupid driver realized what had happened,the boy was already lying on t
7、he ground,bleeding and crying loudly.No one knows how it came about.It happens at 5 p.m.Thetenseisnotproperlyused-A note of verb tenses:Pasttenses(yesterday,lastweek)“I felt weary yesterday,but exams are over.”Perfecttenses(eventswhoseconsequencescanstillbefelt“Todayhasbeenwonderful.Ihave discovered
8、 thetruenatureofthescience.”However,therecanbemorethanonetenseinadiary.Inadiary,wewritedowntheexperiencesofaday,andalsothethoughtsoftheday.Generally,weusethepasttensesforourexperiences,andpresenttensesforourthoughts.Wednesday,July 7,2018A Traffic AccidentHere is my account for it.It happens at 5 p.m
9、.at the school crossroads when I was on my way back to my school.A taxi ran into a cycling boy who was riding across the road near the crossroad.Five minutes later,an injured boy was taken away by an ambulance.When the taxi pulled up suddenly after the stupid driver realized what had happened,the bo
10、y was already lying on the ground,bleeding and crying loudly.No one knows how it came about.away by an ambulance.Five minutes later,an injured boy was takenThedetailsarenotstatedinalogicalway.Narrative driven:chronologicalorder.When the taxi pulled up suddenly after the stupid driver realized what h
11、ad happened,the boy was already lying on the ground,bleeding and crying loudly.Five minutes later,an injured boy was taken away by an ambulance.Wednesday,July 7,2018A Traffic AccidentHere is my account for it.It happens at 5 p.m.at the school crossroads when I was on my way back to my school.A taxi
12、ran into a cycling boy who was riding across the road near the crossroad.Five minutes later,an injured boy was taken away by an ambulance.When the taxi pulled up suddenly after the stupid driver realized what had happened,the boy was already lying on the ground,bleeding and crying loudly.No one know
13、s how it came about.stupidThelanguageisinappropriateRelativelyinformal(notslang/colloquial)Wednesday,July 7,2018A Traffic AccidentHere is my account for it.It happens at 5 p.m.at the school crossroads when I was on my way back to my school.A taxi ran into a cycling boy who was riding across the road
14、 near the crossroad.Five minutes later,an injured boy was taken away by an ambulance.When the taxi pulled up suddenly after the stupid driver realized what had happened,the boy was already lying on the ground,bleeding and crying loudly.No one knows how it came about.No one knows how it came about.Th
15、ecommentisnotclearlystated.HOW TO ENDWith a final thought:a.A concluding statement about the events in the diary entryb.A question like“Iwonderwhatwillhappennext”PLEASE DO NOT USE:“In conclusion,”“To sum up,”Canyou think of a good ending for this diary?vWordsandexpressionsoftimevExpressionsoffeeling
16、sandopinionsvUseofconjunctionstomakelongsentencesFeelings:Pleased,fantastic,disappointed,surprised,Opinions:I wonder I suppose I think I imagineI hopeI doubtIt happened at 5 p.m.at the school crossroads when I was on my way back to my school.A taxi ran into a cycling boy who was riding across the ro
17、ad near the crossroad.When the taxi pulled up suddenly after the stupid driver realized what had happened,the boy was already lying on the ground,Note:thesimplestwaytojointwoormoreclausesiswithconjunctionslike:and,but,or,so,as,andso,andthen,because,notonlybutalso,AdverbialclauseAttributiveclauseNoun
18、clause(objectclause)vWordsandexpressionsoftimevExpressionsoffeelingsandopinionsvUseofconjunctionstomakelongsentencesvAimtowriteatleastthreeparagraphs.TipsonhowtowriteanentryofdiaryAspectContentTipsStructureHeadingEventReflectionLanguageCompletely and correctly writtenFactual,logically organizedPerso
19、nal,properly statedInformal,proper tensesDiscussionWritingTask Suppose your class teacher asked whether you could be in charge of the class wall newspaper,write an entry of diary.vFour steps to write a diary1.Date,the first person,tense 2.Write down key phrases3.Combine the use of short sentences an
20、d long sentences4.Write a diaryWritetheheadingandthefirstparagraphofyourentryofdiary.Thendiscussingroupseachothersfirstdraft,askingyourselfthefollowingquestions.Istheheadingcompleteanddirectlystated?Isthepurposeofyourdiaryclearlyexplained?ExampleJuly4,2018SunnyMyclassteacherassignedmeatask.ButIhatet
21、otalkwithher.Thismorningmyclassteacheraskedmetobeinchargeofthewallnewspaperofourclass.HewantstoknowifIamwillingtoacceptthetaskandwhatIplantodoforit.Wednesday,July4,2018Finishtheentryofdiarybyyourself.Thenreviseitaccordingtothechecklist.Items Yes/No/NumberHaveyouwrittenthedatecorrectly?Haveyouusedthetensecorrectly?Howmanyexpressionsoftimehaveyouused?How many sentences have you used to expressyourfeelingsandopinions?Howmanyaspectsofaneventhaveyoucovered?Howmanyconjunctionshaveyouused?Haveyouspeltallthewordscorrectly?Reviseyourwritingafterclass.Payattentiontothestructureofyourwriting.Homework