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1、高考英语新教材高三一轮应用文写作： 告知信告知信是指一方告知另一方某一信息的信件。常考的话题有告知活 动或比赛安排、突发情况、报名事宜、个人近况、上课计划等。告知 信的语言简洁明了，在高考英语全国卷和各省的高考试卷中，不时出 现以告知活动或比赛安排、个人近况、上课计划为主题的作文题。主 要考察的要点如下：1.首段一一说明写信目的；2.段中一一告知具体 事项，包括时间、地点和活动/比赛/学习的具体内容等，有时还包括前 期准备/注意事项；3.尾段一一告知报名方式/表达期待/询问对方是否 还有其他想了解的信息。A.来源书本的词句翻译（加部分拓展）.表示欢迎+写信目的告知：inform通知某人某事：表
2、示欢 迎：相关信息：以下细 节：我写信向你表示诚挚的欢迎，并通知你以下细节。1 .告知的具体内容举办/举行：各种有意义的活动:为期两周:报名参加：为提供一个平台：范围从倒:3表示期待（翻译句子）期待你的早日回复。B.运用上面的表达写一封感谢信。（2020嘉兴一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Alex即将来你校参加国 际中学生汉语夏令营，请写一封电子邮件告知其相关信息。内容包括： 1.表示欢迎；2.介绍活动内容；3.你的期待审题：体裁主要时态主要人称交际对象要点构思：Para.l ： Para.2:Para.3:句子信息拓展句：1 .表示欢迎+写信目的Learning that youll par
3、ticipate in the Chinese summer camp, Im writing to extend my cordial welcome and inform you of some relevant information.（现在分词作状语表写作背景，使用短语extend my cordial welcome , inform sb. of）.介绍活动内容（可适当增加活动时间、地点等细节）Appreciating classic Chinese movies and poems will also add fuel to your enthusiasm.（动名词做主语，并使用
4、add fuel to短语）.表达期待I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.（简洁恰当，rewarding有亮点）中等作文习作呈现 7-9分左右Dear Alex,I am Li Hua. Im happy to learn that you will participate in the Chinese summer camp. Im writing to welcome you and tell you some relevant information.In or
5、der to offer a platform for foreign students to develop an interest in Chinese, various activities will be arranged, ranging from appreciating Chinese paintings to enjoying Chinese calligraphy. By taking part in these activities, Im sure youll have a deeper insight into the Chinese culture.Looking f
6、orward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua点评：1 .句子比较简单，有语言错误。2 .漏了最后一个要点。题干中的最后一个要点：你的期待，应指期待 对方的参加，而不是期待回信。3 .无关信息较多。如：开头不需要自我介绍；活动的意义表述过 多。4 .活动内容展开还欠细致。可以介绍下活动时间地点，具体活动内容。高分作文：习作呈现 （12分以卜.）Dear Alex,Knowing that youve signed up for the Chinese summercamp held in our school, Im writing to extend my heartfe
7、lt welcome and inform you of the following details.Themed on traditional Chinese culture, the summer camp will be held on July 6th in the lecture hall, lasting for two weeks. A wide range of meaningful activities, including Peking opera performance, calligraphy lessons and ink painting shows, are bo
8、und to appeal to enthusiasts like you. Appreciating classic Chinese movies and poems will also add fuel to your enthusiasm.I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.Yours,Li Hua点评本文覆盖了所有内容要点，准确运用丰富的词汇及句式结构如定语从 句、被动句、现在分词作状语、过去分词作定语等；层次分明，结构 紧凑、衔接到位，语言表达比较丰富又不拗
9、口，内容完整。高分作文、高分作文条目式标准四、学生评价（对照高分作文标准）+反思自己的作文、再次修改作文高考模拟题链接（2021浙江衢丽湖4月联考）假定你是李华，你所在的城市将举办马 拉松赛事，你的英国朋友Tony有意参赛，来信咨询相关事宜。请你给 他写封回信，内容包括：1 .时间、地点2 .注意事项3 .表达祝愿词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tony,Knowing you intend to run the marathon in my city, I am delighted to share with you some relevant informatio
10、n.The event is scheduled to start at 7:30 am on April 25th. Runners will gather at the gate of The Central Park at around 7 a.m., when you have to register and get ready for the event. Before the event, regular training is necessary, which will guarantee you a good performance. Whats more, with a lo
11、ng distance to cover, youd better wear comfortable sneakers and suitable clothes.Wish you an unforgettable experience.Yours,Li Hua 构思：Para. 1 ：表示欢迎+写信目的Para.2:介绍活动内容Para.3:表达期待 句子信息拓展句： 1.表示欢迎+写信目的 Learning that youll participate in the Chinese summer camp, Im writing to extend my cordial welcome an
12、d inform you of some relevant information.（现在分词作状语表写作背景，使用短语extend my cordial welcome , inform sb. of） News reached me that you will go for a Chinese summer camp to our school next week, and I can hardly wait to express my sincere welcome to you.（使用无灵主语） Delighted to learn that you have signed up fo
13、r the Chinese summer camp. Im writing to extend my heartfelt welcome to your participation.（形容词作状语，使用短语 sign up for, extend my heartfelt welcome）.介绍活动内容（可适当增加活动时间、地点等细节）Appreciating classic Chinese movies and poems will also add fuel to your enthusiasm.（动名词做主语，并使用add fuel to短语） Not only will you hav
14、e wonderful courses about abundant Chinese festivals, customs and culture, but you will be invited to engage in several excellent activities where you can make more friends. （Not only 彳到装句， 并使用 be invited to, engage in 等 词组） A wide range of meaningful activities will be held in the lecture hall, inc
15、luding Peking opera performance, calligraphy lessons and ink painting shows, which are bound to appeal to enthusiasts like you.（使 用定语从句，描述了活动的吸引力）.表达期待I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.（简洁恰当，rewarding有亮点） I firmly believe that summer camp will live up to your expectation. Earnestly anticipating your arrival!（简洁恰当并使用 了 短语 live up to） Your presence is highly anticipated and hopefully, you will enjoy your stay here!（期待对方到来的表达简洁自然贴切）