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1、-How to describe a placeLook at the following passage and find out the useful expressions about describing a place:Our school is located in the east of Zhaoqing.It stands at No.3 on the second Duanzhou Road.There are two buildings in it.It covers an area of 22,000 square meters.The teaching building
2、 stands in the middle of our school.There are six floors in it.Our classroom is on the sixth floor.And it is 3 meters high,8 meters long and 5 meters wide.“位于位于”方位方位面积面积长、宽、高长、宽、高1.“某物位于某物位于”sth.lie/stand/be located/be situated+in/at/on+某处某处e.g.国家游泳中心位于奥林匹克公园内。国家游泳中心位于奥林匹克公园内。The National Aquatics C
3、enter lies/stands/is located/is situated in the Olympic Park.Relevant expressions2.“面积面积”的表达的表达The area of+某地某地+is+square meters某地某地+covers an area of+square meterse.g.国家游泳中心的建筑面积有国家游泳中心的建筑面积有79,532m2。The area of the National Aquatics Center is 79,532 square meters.=The National Aquatics Center cove
4、rs an area of 79,532 square meters.Relevant expressions3.“长,宽,高长,宽,高”的表达的表达 sth.is+数字数字+量词量词+in length/width/height sth.is+数字数字+量词量词+long/wide/highe.g.国家游泳中心的高度是国家游泳中心的高度是31米,宽是米,宽是177米,米,长是长是177米。米。The National Aquatics Center is 31 meters in height,177 meters in width and 177 meters in length.=The
5、 National Aquatics Center is 31 meters high,177 meters wide and 177 meters long.Relevant expressions4.“东,南,西,北东,南,西,北”的表达的表达sth.is+in/to/on the east(south)of+某处某处1)Guangdong is _ the south of China.2)Beijing is _ the north of Guangdong.3)Guangdong is _ the east of Guangxi.intoonBABABAA is in the eas
6、t of B(A在在B的范围之内的范围之内)A is to the east of B(A在在B的范围之外,且不接壤的范围之外,且不接壤)A is on the east of B(A与与B相邻接相邻接)Relevant expressions Sentence Integration(句子整合句子整合)将简单句转为较复杂的句子将简单句转为较复杂的句子方法方法运用运用“插入结构插入结构”或或“with的复合结构的复合结构”可用作插入结构的有:过去可用作插入结构的有:过去/现在分词短语,介词现在分词短语,介词短语或从句,等等。短语或从句,等等。e.g.1.Our school is locate
7、d in the east of Zhaoqing.It stands at No.3 on the second Duanzhou Road.There are two buildings in it.Our school,_,stands at No.3 on the second Duanzhou Road _ two buildings in it.located in the east of Zhaoqing(过去分词短语过去分词短语+with复合结构复合结构)with2.National Aquatics Center covers an area of 79,532 square
8、 meters.It is 31 meters high,177 meters long and 177 meters wide.There are 17,000 seats in it.National Aquatics Center,_,is 31 meters high,177 meters long and 177 meters wide _ 17,000 seats in it.withcovering an areaof 79,532 square meters(用现在分词短语(用现在分词短语+with的复合结构)的复合结构)Sentence Integration(句子整合句子整
9、合)Sentence Integration(句子整合句子整合)3.Water Cube lies in the Olympic Park.It is in the north of Beijing.“Birds Nest”is next to it.Water Cube,_,lies in the Olympic Park _“Birds Nest”next to it.4.Water Cube,_,lies in the Olympic Park _“Birds Nest”next to it.in the north of Beijingwith(用介词短语(用介词短语+with的复合结
10、构)的复合结构)which is in the north of Beijingwith(用定语从句(用定语从句+with的复合结构)的复合结构)Relevant expressions:1.“位于位于”:sth.lie/be located/be situated+in/at/on+某处某处2.面积:面积:The area of+某地某地+is+square meters某地某地+covers an area of+square meters3.“长,宽,高长,宽,高”:sth.is+数字数字+量词量词+in length/width/height sth.is+数字数字+量词量词+long
11、/wide/high4.方位:方位:sth.is+in/to/on the east(south)of+某处某处Sentence Integration:方法方法运用插入结构,运用插入结构,with的复合结构的复合结构1.过去分词短语过去分词短语(past participle phrase)2.现在分词短语现在分词短语(present participle phrase)3.介词短语介词短语(prep.phrase)4.定语从句定语从句(attributive clause)请根据下面的信息提示写一篇请根据下面的信息提示写一篇短文短文。假设你是李华,应你的朋友假设你是李华,应你的朋友Bob的
12、要求,写一封信介的要求,写一封信介绍绍“国家游泳中心国家游泳中心”的基本情况。(满分的基本情况。(满分15分)分)场馆名称场馆名称国家游泳中心国家游泳中心(“水立方水立方”“Water Water CubeCube”)场馆地点场馆地点北京市北部,奥林匹克公园内,与北京市北部,奥林匹克公园内,与“鸟巢鸟巢”(BirdBirds Nests Nest)毗邻而居)毗邻而居规模规模面积面积7979,532m532m2 2;高高3131米;长米;长177177米;宽米;宽177177米米座位数座位数1717,000000奥运会期间奥运会期间比赛项目比赛项目游泳、跳水游泳、跳水(diving)(divin
13、g)、花样游泳、花样游泳(synchronisedsynchronised swimming)swimming)赛后用途赛后用途举办国内外比赛或向公众开放举办国内外比赛或向公众开放写作要求写作要求1.用用5个句子表达以上表格中的相关信息;个句子表达以上表格中的相关信息;2.将将5个句子组织成连贯的短文个句子组织成连贯的短文;;3.开头已给出开头已给出,不包括在不包括在5个句子内。个句子内。Dear Bob,National Aquatics Center is one of the most advanced stadiums in the world.It is also known as“
14、Water Cube”1.认真审题,明确要求。认真审题,明确要求。1)写出的短文必须是写出的短文必须是5个句子,不能多也不能少;个句子,不能多也不能少;2)短文必须包括短文必须包括全部信息内容全部信息内容,不能遗漏任何一点;,不能遗漏任何一点;3)确定短文的确定短文的主题和格式主题和格式;主题:主题:格式:格式:4)确定短文的确定短文的人称和时态人称和时态。人称:人称:时态:时态:2.划分划分信息块信息块,列出写作要点,明确写作的先后次序。,列出写作要点,明确写作的先后次序。3.确定可能用到的短语、主要句型。确定可能用到的短语、主要句型。4.扩展成句,连句成篇扩展成句,连句成篇,至少用上至少用上3种插入结构种插入结构。国家游泳中心的情况国家游泳中心的情况书信书信第三人称第三人称一般现在时一般现在时基础写作基本步骤基础写作基本步骤