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1、高考英语记叙文基础写作如何写人第一讲 记叙文：如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态经常用一般现在时和一般过去时，详细的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要留意以下几个方面的问题：1.人物写作通常须要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经验、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作须要严格根据写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，支配好写作依次，突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经验，新闻报道要重点突出事
2、迹，介绍自己的老师、挚友要突出他们的特点，等等。3.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。4.留意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、爱好等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的诞生、教化背景、经验、事迹常用一般过去时。二、常用词语外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking， pretty，short，strong, tall， thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 m
3、etres tall, etc.性格特点：absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independent, kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，talkative， warm-hearted，wise，etc.诞生年龄：a
4、 twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , during his childhood, in ones fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.爱好爱好：be angry with sb for sth, be angry a
5、bout, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in ones work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do,
6、look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put ones heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教化背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a masters degree, get on well with ones lessons, give sb.
7、 a passing grade, go abroad to further ones study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctors degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an a
8、ctive part in class，when at college, etc.经验事迹： become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneself to ones business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up ones life
9、 for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up ones mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try ones best to do sth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gol
10、d /silver/ bronze medal, etc.他人评价：an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most importa
11、nt persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.三、实例分析【例1】 李华自我介绍假设你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作，你须要用英文给人事部经理写一封信，介绍自己的基本状况，简介信包括下表所列内容：姓名 李华 诞生年月 1981年8月诞生地 广东省佛山市学历 199420xx 佛山第一中学20xx20xx 广州高校计算机系20xx至今
12、 在一家计算机公司工作所学主要课程 计算机、中文、数学、英语、体育特长爱好 游泳（曾获得过高校游泳竞赛一等奖），音乐写作要求：1. 简介必需包括以上全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经写好）；2. 运用5个句子。Dear Manager,I am waiting for your reply.Thank you.Yours Truly,Li Hua写作指导：文体 记叙文，用第一人称信息组织 写信目的，到贵公司工作；姓名、诞生地点、日期； 学习简历；学习内容，现在状况；爱好和特长时态 现在进行时，一般过去时参考范文：Dear Manager,I am writing you a letter in or
13、der to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 20xx, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years. I studied computer
14、science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E, and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank you.Yours Truly,Li Hua【例 2】介绍姚明和刘翔假设你是李华，正在美国参与学习，课堂上老师要求你简要介绍我国的名人，你选择
15、了姚明和刘翔，两位体育明星，他们的基本状况如下：姓名 姚明 刘翔诞生 1980年，上海 1983年，上海事迹 世界闻名篮球运动员，现在美国NBA火箭队效力，球队主力队员之一，多次进入美国全明星队。 多次获得世界110米栏冠军，20xx年雅典奥运会冠军，不久以后还打破了世界记录。爱好 听流行音乐 音乐，唱歌写作要求：1. 简介必需包括以上全部内容（开头已经为你写好）；2. 运用5个句子。3. 参考词汇：火箭队 Rocket， 110米栏110-metre hurdling，雅典奥运会the Athens Olympic GamesHi, everyone. I would like to int
16、roduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang._Thats all. Thank you!写作指导：文体 记叙文，用第三人称信息组织 有两条线索：一是分别对比两人的各项状况，二是先介绍姚明，再介绍刘翔。其次条线索比较好。姚明，篮球运动员，诞生；主力队员，明星队； 刘翔，110米栏世界冠军；04雅典冠军，打破记录；两人的爱好。时态 一般现在时，一般过去时参考例文：Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang.
17、 Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre
18、hurdls. He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music whilst Liu Xiang likes singing.四、即时练习1. 介绍同学假设你是李华，学校网站英文版通讯员，最近学校网站打算宣扬一些优秀学生，请你用英文为李敏同学写一篇简介，李敏同学的基本状况如下：姓名 李敏 职务 高二（1）班班长特点 健康、
19、活泼 爱好 体育活动，唱歌跳舞事迹 她各科成果都好，但她刚进校时，英语学习有困难，经过努力，成果上去了。20xx年参与全国物理奥林匹克竞赛并获得一等奖。她严于律己，乐于助人。写作要求：1. 简介必需包括以上全部内容；2. 版面有限，只能运用5个句子。写作指导：文体 记叙文，用第三人称信息组织 姓名、职务、特点；爱好、成果； 英语学习困难；04物理竞赛；她的品行时态 一般现在时，一般过去时2. 介绍两位年轻人假设你是李华，正在伦敦的一条街上购物，突然有两个年轻人匆忙走过，引起了你的留意，你就向不远处的一位警察反映，正好他在找寻两名小偷，他请你书面描述一下那两位年轻人的特征，你所看到的基本状况如下
20、：年轻人之一 年轻人之二身高 约1.90米 约1.65米长相 高鼻子，大嘴巴，秃头 小鼻子，小眼睛，卷头发衣着 蓝上衣，旧皮鞋 黑色的裤子，运动鞋神色 匆忙忙忙，四处张望，每人手上都拿着一个塑料袋。逃离方向 沿着这条街，在红灯处左拐弯。写作要求：1. 书面描述必需包括以上全部内容；2. 运用5个句子。参考词汇：秃头 bald head ，卷头发 curly hair写作指导：文体 记叙文，用第三人称，侧重描写这两个人的外表特征。信息组织 信息组织可以有两条线索，一是分别逐项对比，二是先描述一个，再描述另一个。选择第一种比较简单辨别。身高对比；长相对比； 衣着对比；神色；方向时态 一般现在时，现
21、在进行时，一般过去时，现在完成时参考范文1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress
22、in her English language study. In 20xx she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to help other people.2. One is about 1.90 metres tall, and the other is only about 1.65 metres
23、, quite short. The taller has a big nose, a big mouth and a bald head, whilst the shorter one has a small nose, small eyes and curly hair. The taller is wearing a blue jacket, a pair of old shoes, and the shorter is wearing black trousers with sports shoes. Each of them took a plastic bag in their h
24、ands while going in a hurry and looked around sometimes. They ran away down his street and turned left at the red light.其次讲 记叙文：如何叙事？一、写作指导叙事类记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事务、缘由和结果等六个要素交代清晰。好的记叙文具有描述事务详细、人物逼真形象、故事生动感人、材料表现中心和写作主旨明确等特征。高考英语基础写作中的叙事类短文也须要具有记叙文写作的一般特点，但要求相对比较低，其考查重点在语言运用正确、句子连贯穿顺、信息点表述完整等方面。写作时要留意以下
25、几个方面的问题：1. 严格根据基础写作的要求完成各个信息点，不要为了文章的生动而随意添加信息。2. 信息点的表述不要完全根据题目所给的依次，要适当重组信息点。3. 记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般过去时，但也要留意敏捷运用其它时态。4. 叙事类记叙文的话题通常和中学生的生活阅历有关，如校内生活、旅游、交通、交友等，平常要留意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。二、常用语句1. 表达时间a long time ago, at six oclock in the morning, at the end of, at the weekend, before he came here, by the end of
26、last term, during the summer holidays, in a few years time, in the past, in the old days, in the past ten years, in August 20xx, in winter vacation, in weekdays, last month, next week, on Sunday morning, on October 1st, since early in the 20th century, so far, up to now, notuntil, while , etc.2. 表达地
27、点at the crossing, at the end of the street, at the airport, at the village, at the foot of the mountain, at the bottom, at the top of, be located in, behind the park, be situated in, five kilometers to the north of Guangzhou, in the south of Guangdong Province, in the middle of the park, in Class 3
28、Grade 2, in the front of the bus, in front of the bus, in the tree, in Guangdong, in China, lies to the west of Sichuan, on the other side of the street, on both sides of the road, on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean ,on the right, etc.3. 表达因果as, as a result, because, because of, for, in the end,
29、 cause, result in, consequently, originate from, since, so, therefore, It is clear that , It turns out to be , The primary reason is , etc.4. 事务话题(1)学校生活及学习成果be active in class, be interested in, be interesting to sb., be fond of, be good at , be poor at , be tired of ones work, be weak in, do ones
30、homework, do sports after school, do well in; education for all-round development(素养教化), examination-oriented education system(应试教化), fail in the test, get a doctors degree, get on well with English, get an “A” in the exam, get 90 marks for English, give sb. a passing grade, have a good command of t
31、he language, have eight classes every day, help with each other, lay a good foundation in, learnby heart, major in history, make friends with sb., make progress in, put ones heart into, pass the examination, study in groups, succeed in doing sth., take an active part in the activity, take several co
32、urses at school, work out a problem, work on a maths problem , work hard at, etc.(2)师生关系及其活动be friendly to sb., be kind to sb, be a strict teacher, be strict with ones pupils, be strict in ones work, be satisfied with , blame sb. for sth, correct the students homework carefully, devote all ones time
33、 to work, form a good habit of, get on well with sb, give advice on, give sb a lot of work , help sb with sth , make ones lessons lively and interesting, praise sb for sth., prepare for tomorrows lesson, question sb on, teach sb. English , teach sb how to do sth., etc.(3)课余活动及周末生活do some reading, en
34、joy a family trip, enjoy doing sth., go swimming, go for an outing, go to the cinema, have an outing at the seashore, have a swim, have dances on weekends, have a picnic at the weekend, have a party, hold a sports meeting, Internet bar, net friend, online love affair(网恋) , play the piano, play chess
35、 (basketball), see the sights of Beijing, spend ones time in many different ways, teach in a family, etc.(4)交通状况a big traffic jam, a traffic accident, be very crowded in the street, be seriously injured, by bus (train / ship / boat), drive a car, flight No. 2130, in a small boat, give sb. a lift, ke
36、ep right, lie on the street, meet sb. at the station, on the bus ( train), on board, on ones way to London, on the journey, one way only , pick up sb., ride a bike, ride a horse , see sb. off at the airport, self-service ticket , take a flight to New York, traffic light, travel through China, turn r
37、ight, etc.(5)度假旅游New Years Day, Womens Day, May Day, Youth Day, Childrens Day, Teachers Day, Mid-Autumn Day, National Day, valentines Day, the Spring Festival, a hot spot, a place of interest, a tourist destination, a five-star hotel, a good restaurant, a return ticket, a single ticket, a city with
38、a long history, a quiet village, a three-day tour, an experienced guide, Beijing 20xx Olympic Games, beautiful scenery, in peak tourist seasons, natural attraction, on ones way to France, on the back way , one of the great wonders of the world, spend ones holidays on the sea , the 11th Asian Games,
39、travel agency, the tour route, the inner-ring road, travel to England, the Great Wall , the Summer Place , Zhongshan Park , etc.(6)环境爱护a good environment, area pollution, air pollution, air quality standard, Antarctic Circle, atmospheric chemistry, a heavy rain, a heavy snow, be polluted, be hot, be
40、 cold, be cool, be cloudy, be rainy, be sunny, be flooded, climate, carbon dioxide(CO2), chemical change, chemical cleaning of coal, climate change, dirty, drought, dry, flood, early warning system, environmental behavior, environmental quality, feel comfortable, global warming, minus 20 degrees cen
41、tigrade(-20), 30 degrees above zero(30)，sea level, warning center, wastes, water surface , water treatment, water pollution control, weather, windstorm , etc.三、典型例文【例1】介绍学校假设你是李华，你的笔友Jane打算暑假来你校参观，想请你介绍一下学校状况。下面是你校的基本信息，请依据以下内容给Jane回一封信，并表示欢迎她来参观。学校名称 广东第三中学地理位置 离大海约15公里的一个小镇上学校历史 80多年历史的老学校师生人数 老师2
42、00多人，学生3000多人，中学学段校内环境 占地近15万平方米，学校很美，有花草，大树，三座教学大楼，6座宿舍楼学习课程 中文、数学、科学、英语、计算机、体育、美术等写作要求：(1)必需包括以上全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经写好）；(2)只能运用5个句子。参考词汇： 宿舍楼dormitory buildingDear Jane,I am very glad to tell you something about our school, Guangdong No. 3 Middle School._Best wishes to you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua审题：文体 记叙
43、文，用第三人称信息组织 名称、位置、历史；师生人数，校内面积； 校内环境；学习课程；邀请时态 一般现在时特殊留意 1.邀请的内容不再方框内出现的，不能忽视。2.中学学段：可以和人数一起结合起来说3000多中学生。参考范文：Dear Jane,I am very glad to tell you something about our school, Guangdong No. 3 Middle school. It lies in a small town about 15 kilometres away from the sea and it has a history of over 80
44、 years. Our school, covering an area of nearly 150 thousand square meters, has more than 200 teachers and 3000 senior students It has three teaching buildings and six dormitory buildings, with many flowers and tall trees all around, so its very beautiful. In our school we learn Chinese, maths, scien
45、ce, English, computer, PE, arts and some other subjects.We warmly welcome you to visit our school in the summer holidays.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【例 2】介绍春节假如你是李华，你校的外教要在中国过春节，请你依据以下内容，用英文写一篇短文介绍我国的春节，并祝他们节日开心。时间 一般在二月份，中国农历正月初一，前后要持续半个月风俗 1. 12生肖命名，如狗、猴、虎等，今年是鼠年2. 春节前人们要大扫除，大年夜全家人在聚集一起吃年夜饭3. 年初一、初二走访亲友，给孩子们压岁钱写作要求：(1)必需包括以上全部内容（题目已经写好）；(2)只能运用5个句子。参考词汇： 农历Chinese Lunar Calendar 压岁钱lucky money审题：文体 记叙文，用第三人称信息组织 新年时间；12生肖； 大扫除，聚餐；初一、初二走亲戚、给利市；祝福。时态 一般现在时特殊留意 祝福的内容不在方框内出现的，不能忽视。参考范文：A brief Introduction of the Chinese Spring FestivalThe Chinese Spring Festival