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1、研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part2读后续写（二）1. （2020 新高考全国卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help ea
2、ch other meet the challenges.Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a fam
3、ily she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,“ she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. He i
4、s such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don*t see what he can do.”After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,“ said Clara. His family is suffering so much.”“So do IJ said Harry. We really should
5、 do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）.The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. I tell
6、you what we can do, “ said John. You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn（爆 米花）,and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.” 注意：1 .续写词数应为15。左右：2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was
7、a good one, too.（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.【答案】Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I
8、held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, Hold on!” All of a sudden the horse began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the t
9、rack.We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the so
10、und of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!【详解】读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇 短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考 生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也 很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。根据第一
11、段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse .这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从 rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。 第二段首句是 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文 Uncle Paul 的叮嘱不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运 用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左
12、右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。6.（2017 浙江卷）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they w
13、ould catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled （骑行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. Man, thats a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw
14、 instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute
15、later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase （追赶）。Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He s
16、aw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that zxxk once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their b
17、ike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards a
18、way now. 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。【答案】The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help. With nothing in the hand, they didnt dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still a
19、pproached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They foun
20、d the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac*s friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, th
21、e wolf might feel the peoples threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容（Paul和Becky勇救Mac,试图赶走狼，但没有成 功）以及（越来越多的人加入到救援之中，最后成功地赶跑了狼）。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇读后续写：本文主要讲述了 Mac在骑自行车前往阿拉斯 加的途中，被一只狼追赶的故事，第一段要求续写车上下来两
22、个人帮助Mac,但他们势单力薄，并没能赶 走狼，双方陷入僵局；第二段要求续写越来越多的人加入到救援之中，众人合力将狼赶走。时态以一般过 去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求，不要过多，关键词列出5个以上，需要均匀分 布在两段中。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化并结合给出的内容提示进行合理构思。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；immediately （立即），dangerous （危险的），howl （嚎叫）, threat （威胁），join （加入），bravely （勇敢地）及 deadlock （僵局）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致
23、和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的 整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有fight against （对抗），runaway （跑掉）,get out of（从中出来）,be ready to do （准备好做某事）,dare to do （M做某事）以及approach to （靠近），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf.”，倒装
24、句 Then came the deadlock.，非谓语动词 At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. ，全文没有语法错误，上下句转 换自然流畅。With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.【答案】When Mrs. Meredith heard of John s idea, she thought it was a good on
25、e, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernards home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and hi
26、s parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore,
27、 he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Merediths family, and he also did what he could to help t
28、hose in need.【分析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。【详解】1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社区里，他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。 那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情，生 活十分困难。后来，Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意-制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。2 .根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助Bernard 一家摆脱困境的。3 .续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合 乎情理
29、。4 .根据第段首句 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.（当 Meredith 太 太听到John的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意）可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思；根据第二 段首句 With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.（一切准备就绪后，Bernard 开始了他的新 生意）可以针对Bernard如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。5 .续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的
30、一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句 型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇， 以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。2. （2020 浙江卷7月高考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Pm going to miss you so much, Poppy, said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He sto
31、od up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions（IW绪）get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye f
32、or now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. I guess this is it, “he said. Ill see you back home in a month, okay? ”His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the
33、crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy*s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didnt seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sa
34、d too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didnt.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasnt her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. What should we do to cheer Poppy up? Hasked Da
35、d. Weve tried everything.“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, smiled Mom. Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Lets get a little dog for Poppy.nIt didn*t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them ho
36、me as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1. Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appea
37、red.Para 2. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.【答案】Para 1.Dad put the box on the ground and opened the top. A shiny little wet nose popped up. Then two fluffy paws. Next the box tipped over sideways, and out tumbled a mass of wiggly golden silliness. Poppy was amazed. She wagged
38、 furiously. She barked with joy. She smiled, her tongue lolling out as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was not shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping around the older dog. That didnt take long,“ remarked Mom, as both dogs went roaring around the house in an impromptu game of
39、chase. Dad laughed.Para 2.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He had missed Poppy and was looking forward to seeing her. When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing up to lick his face too. ct0h my gosh, who is this?” he
40、exclaimed. His parents laughed at the look of shock on his face. Thats Pee-wee,“ said Dad. I cant believe you got yourselves a puppy!” We didnt, replied Mom. This puppy is for Poppy!,【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Poppy道别。而没有了男孩在 家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸打开盒子，一条可爱的小狗
41、出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的 小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况；第二段开头是：几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男 孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应，以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Poppy的。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当 的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用 的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：a mass of, with joy, look forward to等高级 词汇； 非谓语动词的运用 The litt
42、le pup was not shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping around the older dog.；时间犬语从句 When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing up to lick his face too.等高级句式。3.（2020 浙江卷1月高考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One fall, my wife Elli and I
43、had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe di
44、stance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic brea
45、d.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired bla
46、nk shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arr
47、ived. Making the best of this close encounter（相遇），I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn t last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them. So I approached our uninv
48、ited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（用L口U）, the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraphl:A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.Paragraph!
49、:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.【答案】A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp, then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw