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1、2006年高考英语(江苏卷)书面表达讲评2021/8/11 星期三1据报道：据报道：20082008年北京奥运会将选拔年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名志愿者为之服务。请你以约十万名志愿者为之服务。请你以“Dos and Donts for the 2008 Dos and Donts for the 2008 Olympic Volunteers”Olympic Volunteers”为题，用英为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么。短文应包括什么，不应该做什么。短文应包括下表中的内容：下表中的内容：2021/8/11 星期三2注意注意l对所给要点，
2、不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥。对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥。2词数词数120左右。短文中已写好的部分，不计入词数。左右。短文中已写好的部分，不计入词数。3参考词汇：形象参考词汇：形象image2021/8/11 星期三3第一步：审题选择要点1.据报道，据报道，2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名年北京奥运会将选拔约十万名志愿者为之服务。志愿者为之服务。2.（阐述该做与不该做的事，可分开阐述，亦（阐述该做与不该做的事，可分开阐述，亦可一起阐述）可一起阐述）待人礼貌友好；待人礼貌友好；坚守岗位；坚守岗位；介绍中国历史和文化；介绍中国历史和文化；不忘履行自己的职责；不忘履行自己的职责；避免不得
3、体的言行；避免不得体的言行；不损害祖国的形象。不损害祖国的形象。2021/8/11 星期三4如果如果我我成为志愿者，成为志愿者，我我还应该做还应该做什么，不应该做什么。什么，不应该做什么。比如比如:如果我成为志愿者，一定会努力如果我成为志愿者，一定会努力学习，一定会遵纪守法，一定会学习，一定会遵纪守法，一定会与外国来宾交朋友，使奥运会圆与外国来宾交朋友，使奥运会圆满成功。满成功。2021/8/11 星期三5第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型据报道据报道It is reported that 被选为被选为的志愿者的志愿者be chosen as volunteers for20
4、08北京奥运会北京奥运会 the Olympic Games in Beijing.应该做什么，不应该做什么应该做什么，不应该做什么 What should do and what should not do?2021/8/11 星期三6对对友好友好be polite and friendly to sbtreat everybody politely与与相处融洽、关系好相处融洽、关系好get along well withbe on good terms with避免避免avoid(doing)sth来自世界各地来自世界各地from all over the world坚持岗位坚持岗位sti
5、ck to ones own posts履行职责、做分内之事履行职责、做分内之事do ones bit/do ones dutyfulfill ones own responsibility of the post 2021/8/11 星期三7提供优质服务提供优质服务offer good services满足合理需求满足合理需求satisfy any reasonable needs；乐意做乐意做be/get ready to do/be willing to do向向介绍介绍introduce to/make known to sb对对有危害有危害do harm to2021/8/11 星期
6、三8有幸有幸have the honor to do 努力做努力做make every effort to do 遵纪守法遵纪守法follow the law and disciplineobey the law and regulations与与交友交友make friends with尽力做尽力做do all sb can to do 抓住机会抓住机会take the opportunity to do 2021/8/11 星期三9第三步：扩展成句It is reported that about 100,000 people will be chosen as volunteers fo
7、r the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing.What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?They should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world,and avoid improper behavior.They should treat the athletes and visitors from all over the world in a polite and friend
8、ly manner,without any improper behavior.（不同表达法）（不同表达法）They should avoid any improper behavior,treating the athletes and visitors from all over the world in a polite and friendly manner.（不同表达法）（不同表达法）2021/8/11 星期三10They should stick to their posts,offering good services,satisfying any reasonable need
9、s and ready to help those in difficulty,and never fail to do their duty.They can offer good services,satisfy/meet any reasonable needs,and get ready to help those in difficulty.（不同表达法）（不同表达法）2021/8/11 星期三11They should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know Chin
10、a better and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland.They should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners,instead of saying or doing anything that harms the image of our motherland.（不同表达法）（不同表达法）2021/8/11 星期三12If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer,be
11、sides the above,I will work hard and creatively,but never be lazy.I will follow the law and discipline,but never break them.I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors,and help make the 2008 Olympic Games a great success.2021/8/11 星期三13第四步：连句成篇加上有关过渡句及过渡词汇,连句成篇It is re
12、ported that about 100,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing.What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?2021/8/11 星期三14Firstly,they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world,and avoid improper behaviour.Se
13、condly,they should stick to their posts,offering good services,satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty,and never fail to do their duty.Thirdly,they should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better,and never say or d
14、o anything that harms the image of our motherland.2021/8/11 星期三15If I have the honour to be chosen as a volunteer,besides the above,I will work hard and creatively,but never be lazy.I will follow the law and discipline,but never break them.I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors,and help make the 2008 Olympic Games a great success.2021/8/11 星期三16结束2021/8/11 星期三172021/8/11 星期三18