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1、2023年高考英语写作高分秘籍一:开头句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最终再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。原文We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.修正Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.原文The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.修正Hearing the b
2、ad news, the young man couldnt help crying.二:经过2.在整篇文章中,避开只运用一两个句式,要敏捷运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。强调句原文I met him in the street yesterday.修正It was in the street that I met him yesterday.It was yesterday that I met him in the street.由with或without引导的短语。如:He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.分词短语。
3、如:Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment.倒装句。如:Only in this way can we achieve our goal.Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.省略句。如:If so,victory will be ours.You can make some cha
4、nges wherever necessary.3.通过分句和合句,增加句子的连贯性和表现力。原文He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.修正He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.原文We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.Some told stories. Some played chess.修正Aft
5、er a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.留意运用不同长度的句子,要结合运用,不能只用短句或只用长句。4.学会运用过渡词。如:递进: then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反), after all(终归)等。总结: finally(最终), at last(最终), in brief(总之), in con
6、clusion(最终)等。强调: indeed(的确), certainly(肯定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one handon the other hand(一方面另一方面)等。相像的比较: similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, com
7、pared with ,5.留意运用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:原文A new railway is being built in my hometown.修正A new railway is under construction in my hometown.6.避开重复运用某一单词或短语。如:原文I like reading while my brother likes watching television.修正I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.I like reading while wa
8、tching television appeals to my brother.三、 结尾1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that(比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)2、 Therefore, its not difficult to draw a conclusion that3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必需实行一些有效的措施来做些什么)4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that 5、 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others