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1、Writing a Composition Describing Pictures重庆大学版重庆大学版重庆大学版重庆大学版高一高一高一高一(4)(4)Unit 4Unit 42021/8/11 星期三1 Look at the picture and discuss with your partner the following questions.2021/8/11 星期三2Who are these people?Where are they?What is happening to them?When does it happen?They are classmates.In the c
2、lassroom/at school.They just got exam paper and knew the test result.At the end of the term/On the first day of new term.2021/8/11 星期三3 Some of them got a high mark and others were not glad to see their poor performances.Some students are expecting a reward from their parents;while others were worri
3、ed about the incoming parents meeting.Why are some of them crying while other are laughing?2021/8/11 星期三4Reference words and expressions:test results score exam paper parents meeting notice reward punishment bless 2021/8/11 星期三5 What do you think would happen after they go back home?Make predictions
4、 with your partner and then draw a second picture to show your idea.2021/8/11 星期三6Choose some appropriate expressions to make a natural transition from the first picture to the second one:A.After they go back home,B.When they are ready,C.As soon as they hear about the news,D.Before they tell their p
5、arents about the meeting,E.In the evening,F.On the way home,What may they say in the situation?_2021/8/11 星期三7summary看图作文的写作从整体上可分为五个环节看图作文的写作从整体上可分为五个环节:一、一、“抓抓”为抓主题。首先为抓主题。首先,根据图片内根据图片内容确定好题材与体裁容确定好题材与体裁-是写人还是写景，是写人还是写景，是说理还是叙事是说理还是叙事,是书信还是日记或其他是书信还是日记或其他应用文体。应用文体。二、二、“列列”为列要点。结合图片中的情景为列要点。结合图片中的情
6、景用自己熟悉的结构与词汇列出用自己熟悉的结构与词汇列出,忌用生疏忌用生疏的结构与词汇按汉语思维盲目罗列的结构与词汇按汉语思维盲目罗列,原则原则“不求难不求难,不求异不求异,唯求准唯求准”。2021/8/11 星期三8三、三、“变变”为变要点为句子。将第二个环为变要点为句子。将第二个环节中所罗列的要点节中所罗列的要点,先按一定的时间、空先按一定的时间、空间及逻辑顺序排列；然后选定恰当的主语间及逻辑顺序排列；然后选定恰当的主语与人称，再根据动作发生的时间与主谓关与人称，再根据动作发生的时间与主谓关系拓词成句。系拓词成句。四、四、“连连”为连句成篇。要在句与句以及为连句成篇。要在句与句以及段与段之间
7、加一些表转折、递进和因果等段与段之间加一些表转折、递进和因果等关系的关联词与过渡句关系的关联词与过渡句,使文章前后照应，使文章前后照应，行文流畅。行文流畅。2021/8/11 星期三9五、五、“检检”为文章检查：为文章检查：1、文章的体裁格、文章的体裁格式是否正确。式是否正确。2、要点有无遗漏。、要点有无遗漏。3、句子、句子(人称、时态、语态、主谓一致、结构、词人称、时态、语态、主谓一致、结构、词语搭配等语搭配等)。4、词汇、词汇(意义、拼写、时态语意义、拼写、时态语态，形容词与动词的形式，名词单复数态，形容词与动词的形式，名词单复数)。5、标点符号是否有遗漏与错误。标点符号是否有遗漏与错误。
8、2021/8/11 星期三10假设下面六幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历。假设下面六幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇100字左右字左右的日记。的日记。Sample 2021/8/11 星期三11今天下午我去看电影。今天下午我去看电影。在路上在路上,我看到一个手提箱我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来。从一辆自行车上掉了下来。I went to the cinema this afternoon.I went to see a film this afternoon.On the way,I found/saw a case f
9、all down from/off a mans bike.2021/8/11 星期三12我捡起箱子我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大并向骑车人大声喊叫声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了。但他却已经骑远了。于是于是,我拦了一辆出租车去我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主。追赶失主。I picked up the case and shouted at the man,but he had already rode away.I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.2021/8/11 星期三13我终于追上了失主我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给并把箱子还给他。他。失主非常的感动失
10、主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱他拿出一些钱来感谢我来感谢我,但被我拒绝了。但被我拒绝了。我又乘车返回了电影院我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被司机被我的行动所感动我的行动所感动,不收我的车费。不收我的车费。I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.The man took out some money to thank me,but I refused.I went back to the cinema by taxi.The driver was very moved and didnt accept my money.202
11、1/8/11 星期三14 One afternoon,I went to see a film.On the way,I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I picked up the case and shouted at the man to stop.But he didnt hear me and rode away.2021/8/11 星期三15 What should I do?Then I had an idea.I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case.And we caught up with
12、 the man.I gave the case back to him.The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money.But I refused.2021/8/11 星期三16 Then the driver took me to the cinema.When I paid him,the driver wouldnt accept the money.He said he was very moved at what I did.2021/8/11 星期三17一、合并为简单句一、合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短
13、语把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语二、合并为复合句二、合并为复合句三、把复合句改为简单句三、把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语 四、避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒四、避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.五、注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以五、注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。增加文采。六、适当的联想与发挥。六、适当的联想与发挥。2021/8/11 星期三18I went to see a film this
14、 afternoon.One the way to the cinema,I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didnt hear me and rode away.After picking up the case,I shouted at the man lo
15、udly,but he rode too fast to hear me.2021/8/11 星期三19Loudly as I shouted at him after picking it up,the man was riding so far away that he couldnt hear me.I shouted at the man the moment I picked it up,however,he was riding too fast to hear me.Suddenly,I had an idea.I stopped a taxi to catch up with
16、the man.I caught up with him at last.Suddenly,an idea flashed into my mind.I held out for a taxi and got into it with the case.Of course,it didnt take me long to catch up with the man.2021/8/11 星期三20I was wondering what I should do when an idea suddenly struck me.I stopped a taxi as quickly as I cou
17、ld so as to catch up with the man.I gave the case back to the man.The man took out some money to thank me.I refused.Getting the case back from me,the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward.But I refused him politely.2021/8/11 星期三21The driver took me the cine
18、ma.He was very moved.He didnt accept my money.With the help of the driver,I went back to the cinema.When I was paying him,he pushed my hand away and said with a smile:“Never will I accept your money.”I went back to the cinema by taxi.To my surprise,the driver didnt accept the money because he was ve
19、ry moved at what I did.How proud I was!2021/8/11 星期三22 I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.After picking up the case,I shouted at the man loudly,but he rode too fast to hear me.Suddenly,an idea flashed into my mind.I held out for a taxi and
20、 got into it with the case.Of course,it didnt take me long to catch up with the man.Revised version2021/8/11 星期三23Getting the case back from me,the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward.But I refused him politely.I went back to the cinema by taxi.To my surp
21、rise,the driver didnt accept the money because he was very moved at what I did.How proud I was!2021/8/11 星期三24Discussion and homework1.You are going to write a short story about migrants in the Three Gorges.Discuss in groups to decide the following aspects.You can get the information from the readin
22、g passage.When:Where:Who:What:Why/How:2021/8/11 星期三252.The following pictures are about migrants and their new homes.Write a composition about 100-200 words,with the help of the words and phrases given.2021/8/11 星期三26(settle down,adapt to,improve)(see off,leave for,pull out)(beat drum and light firecrackers,invite)(set apart,hot pepper,arrange)2021/8/11 星期三272021/8/11 星期三28