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1、第三讲让亮点词汇添彩层级十 /不落俗套的“高级词”在写作中，考生如能在正确使用基本词汇的基础上，将一些基本词汇升级为高级 词汇，就会为自己的高考作文增加得高分的亮点。美句输入在使用高级词汇时，我们可以尝试如下方法。一无重复原那么求雅变异写作时应尽量防止重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的词汇 水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是词汇高级用法的表达。1.1 like reading while my brother likes playing football.-*I like reading while my brother prefers playing football.2.W
2、e may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may also have different ways to deal with such a situation.-*We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may also have various ways to deal with such a situation.二 具体化原那么生动贴切所谓词义具体化原那么是指，写作中尽量防止使用意义宽泛、模糊的词，而要根据 语境使用
3、具体生动的词。1 .He is a good teacher.f He is a kind/patient/knowledgeable teacher.2 .He goes to work every day.-He rides/drives to work every day.三、 晚词优先原那么新颖高级为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，尽量用高年级阶段学到的词汇 代替低年级阶段学到的词汇。1.1 am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.flam extremely/more than delighted to k
4、now you are interested in Tang poems.2.1 should be free any time after school next week.I should be available any time after school next week.四短语优先原那么凑词增色用短语代替单词不仅会使文章增加亮点，而且如果关键时刻思维短路，用短语凑 字也是一个很好的选择。1 .形容词变短语的方法：0f+同根名词Taking regular exercise is very beneficial to our health, f Taking regular exer
5、cise is of great benefit to our health.形容词对应短语very importantof great importancevery usefulof great usevery valuableof great valuevery beneficialof great benefitvery helpfulof great help2 .动词变短语的方法：同义短语替换I like playing football in my spare time.动词对应短语thinkhold the viewknow/realizebe aware ofusemake u
6、se of/take advantage of-Im fond of playing football in my spare time.一Im interested in playing football in my spare time.f Im crazy about playing football in my spare time. Im addicted to playing football in my spare time.(2)1 sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.f I sincerely hope t
7、hat you will take my suggestions into account/consideration.佳句输出I .用高级词汇替换加黑词汇.He should have driven more slowly.He is supposed to have driven more slowly.1 .Most of the students are short-sighted.The majority of the students are short-sighted.2 .Jack is very clever, who often thinks of new ideas.Ja
8、ck is very clever, who often comes up with new ideas.4.Some students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.f Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.5 .Fm very glad to learn that you are coming in September.f Im more than glad to
9、 learn that you are coming in September.6 .Would you please help me to turn down the radio?f Would you please do me a favor to turn down the radio?n.根据提示用高级词汇改写以下句子l.As a result, the plan was a failure.(turn)f The plan turned out to be a failure.1.1 believe that our country will become stronger and
10、stronger.(convince)fl am convinced that our country will become stronger and stronger.3 .He spends all his spare time in reading.(devote) f He devotes all his spare time to reading.4 .As soon as he arrived, he began his research.(介词短语作状语)f On his arrival, he began his research.5 .Developing a good h
11、abit is also important.(of + n.)-Developing a good habit is also of importance/significance.6 .More and more Americans are curious about Chinese culture.(number)A growing/An increasing number of Americans are curious about Chinese culture.完美文章(电子邮件/普通书信)用高级词汇升级下面考生作文中的加黑词汇并背诵【题目要求】(2020淮北高三模拟)假定你是李华
12、，想给英国朋友Jason写一封信，介绍你的家 乡泉州，内容包括：1.泉州的开展情况；2.泉州面临的问题。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【考生作文】Dear Jason,Im 1 .very (extremely/more than) happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for pe
13、ople to live in.Its economy has been developing 2.fast (f rapidly) during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been 3.built (constructed) with high-rise buildings standing in many parts of the city.4.More and more L growing/An increasing number of) schools and hospitals are 5.useful (f of g
14、reat use) for the native people.lt is developing into a modern and 6.beautiful (attractive) city.7.But (f Nevertheless, ) there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and 8.serious (f severe) air pollution, which have a bad 9.effect (f influence) on peoples daily life.10.1 thin
15、k (-1 hold the view that) Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua常用表达I .首段常用语1.1 am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.我非常高兴 收到你两周前寄给我的信。2.Im very g
16、lad/pleased to tell you that.我很高兴告诉你n .中段常用语l.The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.这个活动的目的是培养我们在英语学习 方面的兴趣和在听说方面的实际能力。2.It offers teenagers, like you and me, a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese cul
17、ture.它给像你和我一样的青少年提供了一个享受运动和了解中国文化的机会。3.In my opinion, the most important duty for you today is to learn knowledge and learn how to deal with different difficulties at home and at school.依我看来，当今对你来说最重要的职责是学习知识以及学会如何处理家中和学校 中出现的不同困难。4.Therefore, I think it quite necessary to take action to relieve the growing pressure. 因此，我认为很有必要采取行动缓解日益增长的压力。III.尾段常用语.How I wish I had read and replied to your e-mail as soon as I received it!我多么希望我一收到你的电子邮件就阅读和回复啊！1 .Pm looking forward to your reply.我盼望着你的回复。3.If so, please e-mail me in response.如果这样，请给我回复邮件