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1、广东卷2023年高考英语满分作文(六篇)第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)【作文题目】你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇科技报道。【写作内容】请依据以下信息，介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术，内容包括：*唾液样本：saliva sample【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构精确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。范文1：A new study appeared in the foreign medical field where researchers completed a project called DNA Test. Researchers have mad
2、e great progress in the study which depends on analyzing a person’s saliva sample. If you would like to have a try, you will have to spend 125 pounds and the analysis will be completed in 4 to 6 weeks. The result will help to predict some major and severe diseases and your preference for diet
3、and remind you of suitable ways to exercise. When it comes to the effect, it will help you to enhance the sense of keeping fit but it may cause you to be overly anxious.译文：国外医学领域出现了一项新的探讨，探讨人员完成了一个叫做脱氧核糖核酸(DNA)的测试项目。这项探讨取决于一个人的唾液样本分析，探讨人员已在该探讨中取得了长足的进步。假如你想尝试一下此测试项目，你将必需花费125磅，其分析过程将在4到6个星期内完成。其结果将有
4、助于预料一些重大疾病，以及你的饮食偏好，并提示你合适的熬炼方式。其测试效果会帮助你提升强身健体的意识，但它可能会导致你过度焦虑。范文2：Recently a new technology, DNA test, has turned up in the foreign medical industry. This kind of DNA test is made by analyzing saliva sample, lasting four to six weeks, which will cost 125 pounds. As is said, this DNA test mainly ai
5、ms to predict some serious diseases, foresee one’s food preference as well as suggest some suitable ways of exercise. According to the technology, there are some good influences, such as improving people’s sense of health. However, it may also lead to too much anxiety among people if peo
6、ple receive the test.译文：最近国外医疗行业出现了一项新技术DNA检测。这种DNA检测是通过分析唾液样本进行的，其费用为125英镑，检测时间持续4到6周。该检测的主要用途是预料重大疾病，预知食物偏好以及提示合适的熬炼方式。这一科技内容，它有好的方面，例如增加健康意识;但是一旦人们接受了这项测试，它也会导致人们过度焦虑。范文3：DNA DetectionWe can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular abo
7、ut food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.译文：DNA检测我们可以用唾液样原来检测人们是否有重大疾病，预料人们是否对食物比较挑剔，提示人们进行适当的熬炼。人们应当为该项检测支付12
8、5英镑。须要四到六个星期完成报告。检测后，我们可以意识到我们应当加强我们的身体。它可能会导致过多的担忧。其次节 读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)【作文题目】阅读下面短文，然后根据要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。On the first day of her work, Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her. Six teachers had quit before her. When she walked into the classroom, it was chaos: two boys were fig
9、hting in the far corner, yet the rest of the class seemed not to notice them; some girls were chatting and some were running about; paper, food packages and other garbage were littered around…. Just when she was about to speak, a student rushed in and pushed her aside! He was twenty minutes l
10、ate!Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: Rule 1: We are family! All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3… In the following weeks, Sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom.
11、 She patiently explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students. Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class. At the graduation ceremony, just as she e
12、xpected, she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.题目译文：在萨莉工作的第一天，她发觉一个充溢问题的班级在等着她。已有六位老师在她之前辞职了。当她走进教室时，教室里混乱不堪：两个男孩在远角打架，但班上的其余学生好像没有留意到他们;有些女孩在闲聊，有些人跑来跑去;纸、食品包装和其它垃圾被扔得到处都是。就在她刚要说话的时候，一个学生冲进来，把她推到了一边!他迟到了二非常钟!萨莉走到讲台上，拿起一支粉笔，在黑板上写下到：规则1：我们是一家人!全部的学生都停下来看着她。她接着写规则2、规则
13、3……。在接下来的几周里，萨利制定出了10条班规，并把它们贴在教室的墙上。她耐性地向学生们说明了全部的规则，并要求每个人都遵循这些规则。令人惊异的是，萨莉并没有像以前的老师那样被赶走。相反，她赢得了学生们的敬重。在过去的一年里，她目睹了课堂上的渐渐改变。正如她所期盼的那样，在毕业典礼上，她特别骄傲地和一个具有关切、礼貌和自信的班级站在一起。【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.用约120个词就班规谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) 你们班最突出的问题是什么?(2) 针对该问题你会设计一条什么班规?(3) 你认为班规会带来什么影响?【写作要求】1.作文中可以
14、运用亲身经验或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得干脆引用原文的句子。2.作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括精确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。范文1：According to the above passage, we know when Sally found there were so many problems among her new students, she didn’t lose heart. She made some rules full of love and respect to manage her students. In re
15、turn, her students took on a completely new look.When it comes to my class, I have to say that I can’t stand some classmates’ selfishness. They like to study on their own. They won’t help the others, so I explain to them that when you help the other classmates, you can also revise
16、the knowledge at the same time and you are sure to benefit from it. Besides, every student may have different weak and strong subjects, so they should learn from each other so that they can have more advantages than disadvantages. Thus, I urge to make it a rule to learn from each other, hoping that
17、they will learn more knowledge and make more friends by helping each other.I hope every student can make great progress by cooperation. In the same class, we are brothers and sisters.译文：依据上面的文章，我们知道当萨莉发觉在她的新学生中存在许多问题时，她并没有失去信念。她制定了一些充溢爱和敬重的规则来管理她的学生的。作为回报，她的学生们呈现出了一个全新的面貌。至于我的班，我不得不说我不能忍受一些同学的自私。他们喜
18、爱独自学习，他们不愿帮助别人。所以我向他们说明，当你帮助其他同学时，你也可以同时复习学问，你确定会从中受益。此外，每个学生都会有不同的强弱科目，所以他们应当相互学习，这样他们的优势就会大于劣势。因此，我剧烈要求将相互学习成为一个规则，希望同学们能学到更多的学问，并通过相互帮助来结交更多的挚友。我希望每个学生都能通过合作取得很大的进步。在同一个班级里，我们是兄弟姐妹。范文2：Confronted with the misbehavior of her new class, Sally emphasized the idea of we are family and afterwards work
19、ed out 10 rules to regulate the students’ behaviors. Amazingly, she earned respect from her students, all of whom later grew to be confident, considerate and well-behaved.The most obvious problem with our class is lack of interaction or teamwork. Everyone is interested only in his or her own t
20、hings without paying the slightest attention to the people around, thus giving rise to inefficiency in their study and even putting a limit to the fulfilment of their potential.To address the issue, I would make it a rule that every Friday a project of a certain subject should be assigned by teacher
21、s and completed by every study group consisting of four students. The final presentation on the following Monday will be a result of group work.From where I stand, this rule will definitely exert a profound effect on students’ academic performance. First and foremost, a harmonious but competit
22、ive interaction in a group will help everyone’s learning. Additionally, we can combine our skills and knowledge as well as motivate each other’s greater accomplishments. Last but not least, studying in group, we can share our experiences in solving problems more efficiently. It is for th
23、ose reasons that I firmly believe that this rule will promote the learning atmosphere and our teamwork spirit.With continuous efforts, our class, a big family, will compose an extraordinarily harmonious symphony.译文：面对新班级同学的不良行为，萨莉强调我们是一个大家庭，然后制定出10条规则来约束学生的行为。令人惊异的是：她赢得了学生们的敬重，他们后来渐渐变得自信、爱护、表现良好。我们班
24、学生最明显的问题是缺乏互动和团队合作。每个人都只管自己的事，从不留意四周的人，从而导致学习效率低，甚至他们的潜力也受到限制。为了解决这个问题，我将制定一条规则：每周五某一科老师应当给学生布置一项任务，这项任务由四名学生组成的学习团队来完成。最终将会在接下来的周一公布团队合作的结果。从我的角度来看，这项规则确定会在学生的学习成果方面发挥重大而深远的影响。首先，在一个团队里，和谐而有竞争的互动对每个人的学习都会有帮助。此外，我们可以把我们的技能和学问结合起来，彼此激励以取得更大的成就。最终但同样重要的是，团队学习可以更有效地共享我们解决问题的阅历。正是基于这些缘由，我坚信，这个规则将会提升我们的学
25、习氛围和团队精神。在我们的不断努力下，我们的班级，我们的大家庭将会谱写一曲特别和谐的乐章。范文3：Sally was a teacher who taught some students full of problems. The students didn’t follow the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.In our class, some students don’t work hard and often fight
26、with each other. I will tell them some stories about hard-working people. I will make a study plan to encourage them to study hard. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so. I will explain to them that studying hard is very important. They aren’t allowed to fight at school. I
27、n this way, students have a good habit. Most of the students follow the school rules and study hard. They will respect teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get better grades.译文：萨莉是一位教一些有问题学生的老师。这些学生不遵守校规。因此，她为他们制定规则。之后，他们取得了很大的进步。在我们班上，有些学生不努力学习，常常相互打架。我会跟他们讲一些有关勤劳人们的故事。我将制定一个学习安排来激励他们努力学习。我把一些谚语张贴在墙上来提示他们这样做。我将会向他们说明努力学习是特别重要的。他们不允许在学校里打架。通过这种方式，学生们有了一个好习惯。大多数学生遵守校规和努力学习。他们会敬重老师和其他同学。他们会有好的举止和自信。以后，他们会取得更好的成果。