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1、读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The school day rolled slowly away. The moment the bell indicating the ending of the class rang, the students streamed out of the classroom, among who was Andy. A few moments later, Andy was on his bike, riding on his way home and day-dreaming about the fishin
2、g trip that his father had promised him. He was so glued to dreaming about all the fish he would catch that he was unaware of everything else around him.He rode along until a strange sound drew him to the present. He came to a stop and looked curiously up to the heavens. What he saw shocked and terr
3、ified him. A huge flood of bees filled the sky like a black cloud and the buzzing mass seemed to be heading angrily towards him.With no time to waste, Andy sped off in the opposite direction, riding as fast as he couldbut without knowing how to escape the swarm. With a rapidly beating heart and his
4、legs shaking, he sped down the rough road. As the bees came closer, his panic increased. Andy knew that he was sensitive to bee stings（蜇）. The last sting had landed him in hospitaland that was only one bee sting! He had been forced to stay in bed for two whole days. Suddenly, his fathers words came
5、to him. “When you are in a tight situation, keep your head and think your way out of it.” On a nearby hill, he could see smoke waving slowly skywards from the chimney of the Nelson family home. “Bees dont like smoke,” he thought. “They couldnt get into the house. Andy raced towards the Nelsons house
6、, but the bees were approaching. Andy knew he could not reach the house in time. He estimated that the bees would catch up with him soon. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly, out of the corner of his eyes, Andy saw a small pool used by Mr. Nelson to water his vegetable garden. . In a sho
7、rt while, Andys mother showed up. . 如何续写该文：原文概要：下课铃一响，Andy骑上自行车飞奔回家，一路上，他的脑海里只有第二天他和爸爸的钓鱼约定，而他是多么地痴迷于钓鱼啊！他全然没料到，一群黑压压的蜜蜂朝他飞过来。心头一惊，他吓出一身冷汗，上一次一个蜜蜂盯了他一口，让他住院二天二夜，如果这次被蜂群蛰到，那后果不敢想象。他于是调转车头，疯狂逃串，但蜂群紧咬不放，就在千钧一发之际，他来到了Nelson家附近，他家的烟囱里冒出的股股黑烟让他想起了烟熏驱虫法。可是，蜂群咬的太紧，留给他的时间不多了写作思路：1.分析原语篇和要续写段落的所给提示首句后，知道接下来，A
8、ndy应该是放弃了跑到附近小山边的Nelson家。只能就地取材：池水隔绝法。那么第一段就应该写他见到水池后，Andy的心理活动和及时采取的行动。这个行动后被证明是行之有效的。但是，之后还是要写到通过某种方式（如打电话）与自己的妈妈取得联系，让她接他回家。为了节约本部分的篇幅，最好不在电话里说明发生在自己身上的一切故事。 2.妈妈赶到后，见到的最好是一副一切均好的场面：如他坐在客厅沙发上看钓鱼电视节目，吃着饼干喝着热咖啡，旁边的Nelson夫人在给他烘烤湿衣服感谢之余，感动不已，Andy是怎么做到这一切的？原来惊慌失措的儿子哪里去了？通过对话了解到，他自己的潜水技能、父亲平时的教导等让他的儿子长
9、大了、长智了。但是，为了作文的风格前后一致，可以取原文Andy钟情于钓鱼的一节放开放大来写，加上一些细节的构造，让妈妈开始担心小孩Andy感冒而建议取消他第二天与他爸爸的钓鱼之旅活动，而俏皮活泼的Andy完全忽视了他妈妈的唠叨，独自沉浸在自己的白日梦里 3.原文作品里有很多精彩的句子，如第一段末句He was so glued to dreaming about all the fish he would catch that he was unaware of everything else around him.(他全神贯注地幻想着他会钓到所有的鱼，而没有注意到周围的一切。) 我们可以在原
10、文的结尾巧妙地用上类似的句子，突出Andy的淘气孩童本色。第二段末句A huge flood of bees filled the sky like a black cloud and the buzzing mass seemed to be heading angrily towards him. (一大群蜜蜂像乌云一样布满了天空，嗡嗡作响的蜂群似乎正愤怒地朝他飞来。)我们可以借用作者的这一拟人手法写蜂群没有吸到Andy的血而悻悻离去。第三段末句Suddenly, his fathers words came to him. “When you are in a tight situati
11、on, keep your head and think your way out of it.” (突然，他想起了父亲的话。“当你身处困境时，要保持头脑清醒，想办法摆脱困境。”)我们可以利用Andy想起他爸爸平时教育他的话来回应续写时妈妈再见平静的他时的惊鄂。另外，由于续写时的第一段结尾要提到Andy在Nelson家求救避难，故续写第二段一定要对Nelson一家表示感谢。典型错误： 1. Andy直接跑进了Nelson家里求救，他们合理赶跑了蜂群； 2. Nelson听到呼救后跑出房子挥动树枝前来救援； 3. Andy的妈妈在自家询问。参考答案：Suddenly, out of the co
12、rner of his eyes, Andy saw a small pool used by Mr. Nelson to water his vegetable garden. An idea sprang to mind. Off his bike and into the cool water he dived, disappearing below the surface and away from the insects. After holding his breath for as long as he could, Andy came up for air and notice
13、d the bees had gone. Dragging himself out of the pool, he struggled up the hilly slope and rang the doorbell. Mrs. Nelson took him inside, asked him to take off his wet clothes and wrapped him in a blanket. When Andy came back to his sense, Mrs. Nelson rang his mother. (92)In a short while, Andys mo
14、ther showed up. At the sight of his mother, Andy was possessed with comfort, and tears streamed down his cheeks. “Youll really need that fishing break to help you recover, comforted his mother with relief, adding “thank goodness you didnt panic! “Having thanked Mrs. Nelson, they went home. On the wa
15、y, his mother praised him again, but Andy did not hear her. He was dreaming once again of the fish he would catch tomorrow. (68)下水文：Suddenly, out of the corner of his eyes, Andy saw a small pool used by Mr. Nelson to water his vegetable garden. Suddenly an idea struck him. “I can dive into the water
16、 and hold breath for a minute!” Just before the bees swarmed over and stung him, he threw aside his bike and jumped into the pool. Having hovered over where he was hiding for half a minute, the bees left with regrets. Guessing the bees had gone, Andy stuck his head out of the water for air. As expec
17、ted, the crisis was over. But now he was all wet, cold and hungry. He dashed to the Nelsons for help, where Mrs. Nelson brought him a cup of hot coffee and dried up his clothes. And Andy himself rang his mother. (110) In a short while, Andys mother showed up. Finding her son, safe and sound, watchin
18、g TV over coffee, she was greatly surprised. Knowing about his exciting experience, she couldnt help praising him for his wits. Immediately they left the Nelsons house with thanks, a gentle wind blew over. Andy shivered and sneezed. Andys mother panicked, suggesting her son quit the fishing trip . But no word came to Andys ears - His mind was totally occupied in fish-catching the next day. (73) 考场阅卷佳作学科网（北京）股份有限公司