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1、新高考读后续写之环境描写&修辞手法一、环境描写烘托情感气用温暖阳光表现01.When I was bathed in the sunlight,it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.当我沐浴在阳光下，那感觉就像是琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我每一寸肌肤。02.When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in.当我拉开窗帘，阳光倾泻而入。用蓝天白云表现01.The clear blue sky was dotted with flutterin
2、g（飘舞;振翅）larks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩飞舞。be dotted with意为“星星般点缀着” .a butterfly fluttering its wings. 一只拍动着翅膀的蝴蝶。The paper fluttered to the floor.纸飘落到地板上。02.White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in broad ocean.朵朵白云飘在蓝天中，就像安静的鱼儿在广阔的海洋中畅游。用徐徐微风表现01.A gust of wind blew and parted the droo
3、ping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain.一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。02.There are many kinds of flowers blooming in the corner of the park, even in autumn. I smell the fresh scent with cool breeze. How sweet!即使在秋日里，公园里都开满了各式各样的鲜花，香气伴着微风四处弥漫。多么香甜啊！03.It was Saturday morning, and all the summer
4、 world was bright and fresh, and filled with life.There was a song in every heart.There was cheer in every faceanda spring in every step.The air was filled with the pleasant smell of flowers.夏日周六的早晨，阳光明媚，空气新鲜，处处洋溢着生机。每个人的心中都荡漾着一首歌。每个人脸上都洋溢着欢乐，每个人都迈着跳跃的步伐。空气里弥漫着芬芳的花香。04.Colorful flowers were blooming
5、 beneath the blue sky, and the sunshine reflected on the lake, making it shine like diamonds. But Susan just couldnt focus her attention on the breathtaking beauty.蔚蓝色的天空下，百花盛开，阳光洒在湖面上如同铺上了一颗颗闪耀的钻石。但是苏珊并没有被这令人窒息的美景所吸引。用风雨天气来表现1.The frosty air blew in,cutting like knife.寒冷的空气吹进来，如同刀割般的感觉。2.There was
6、adeathly stillnessin the house.房子里一片死寂。3.The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house.雨倾盆而下，洪流猛涨，狂风在肆意地冲击着房屋。4.On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling.在那个狂风暴雨的夜晚，海浪在肆意地拍打着，劲风在愤怒地咆哮着。5.The boys were frightened as
7、 the wind blew several trees on their side and the light continued to come and go in the sky. 风猛刮着身侧的树木，闪电在空中持续乱舞，孩子们吓坏了。6. The night was very quiet, so even the slightest sound made the boys jump from fear.夜晚非常安静，所以即使是最轻微的声音也使孩子们惊得跳起。二、修辞手法修辞手法(1)明喻(simile)like1.The smile on her face shone like a d
8、iamond.（情感描写）她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。2.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.（情感描写）我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。3.The scenery along the journey is just like a breath-taking landscape painting.(景物描写) 沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。4.The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(景物描写) 寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的
9、脸。5.Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.(景物描写) 繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。as.as1.The smile on her face was as vibrant as the sun on a summer day.（情感描写）她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。2.I reached out to touch her face, which was as cold as the ice.(人物描写) 我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。更多搭配as busy as a
10、bee 忙忙碌碌as hungry as a wolf 饥肠辘辘as proud as a peacock 傲如孔雀 as easy as ABC极其容易as brave as a lion 勇猛如狮as pretty as a picture 美如画as if1.Mrs Sather looked at my eyes as if (she were) seeing my inner self locked away inside.Sather老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。2.Her hair grew greyer and greyer, as if( it were
11、)covered with snow and frost.（肖像描写）他的头发越来越白了，简直像盖了一头皑皑的霜雪。3. She felt as if her heart had been ripped from her body.（情感描写）她感觉自己心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。(2)暗喻(metaphor)be1.Her hair was a flowing golden river streaming down her shoulders.（肖像描写）她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。2. The beautiful park was a scented carpet of col
12、or.(景物描写) 美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。3.Life is an unexplored river full of twists and turns.(哲理) 生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。(3)拟人(personification)把自然现象当作人来描写1. The wind stood up and gave a shout .大风凛冽，发出怒吼。2. The breeze gently kissed her cheeks.微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。3. The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making
13、a beautiful picture.鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。4.The mist swallowed him up.薄雾把他包围起来。5.The icy wind started howling, stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。6. Stars winked at me in a darkening sky.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。7. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.顷刻间，黑暗统治了森林。8.我拾起头，望见两只红色的风筝，带着长长的蓝色尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞动着
14、，飞越公园西边的树林.Then I glanced up and saw a pair of red kites with long blue tails, soaring in the sky. They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park.把含蓄抽象的概念当作人来描写1. Fear seized/swallowed him.恐惧把他吞噬了。2. Anger choked my words.我气得说不出话来。3.A good idea suddenly struck me. 我突然想到一个好主意。4. Smile t
15、ook hold of him.他笑容满面。5. Anxiety torn him into pieces.她焦虑不安，十分崩溃。6. Courage/Confidence deserted him.他没信心了。7. Excitement deprived me of all power of speech. 我兴奋的啥也说不出来了。把动物当作人来描写1.In the dead of night, the crickets played on the terrace of the house.寂静的夜，蟋蟀旁若无人地在房子的阳台上玩。2.Birds on the tree are singing a beautiful song.树上的小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。3.The frogs are giving a concert-mixed chorus.青蛙在举办音乐会-混声大合唱。4.Fireflies patrol the grass with small lanterns.萤火虫提着小灯笼在草丛中巡逻。学科网（北京）股份有限公司