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1、公开课短文改错解题技巧公开课短文改错解题技巧-全国卷全国卷Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?1.看不出句子有错。看不出句子有错。2.看出句子出错的地方看出句子出错的地方,但答案不正确。或无法但答案不正确。或无法改正。改正。“改错改错，越改越错改错改错，越改越错”。因此了解改错的。因此了解改错的题型特点，并在此基础上加以一定分项训练，题型特点，并在此基础上加以一定分项训练，掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要。掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要。ProceduresofthelessonRightorWrong?增加增加beenIhave
2、offeredascholarshipatauniversity.Ihaveofferedascholarshipatauniversity.beenIhaveofferedascholarshipatauniversity.beenXXXXXIhavegotagoodnewstotellyou.Ihavegotagoodnewstotellyou.Ihavegotagoodnewstotellyou.RightorWrong?删除删除XXRightorWrong?修改修改ThreeweeksagoIboughttheelectronicandictionaryatashop.Threewee
3、ksagoIboughttheelectronicandictionaryatashop.ThreeweeksagoIboughttheelectronicandictionaryatashop.以以上上为为不不规规范答范答题题,均不均不给给分，分，不能手下留情不能手下留情E.g.:Whats more,he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.So the next day,he posted the message on the poster-board When he left for home the next morning,at the en
4、d of the drivewaytoa forIcanreturntohomenow.theinIlikeplayingpiano.ImajoratEnglish.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中文中共有共有1010处语言错误，每句中最多有两处处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下，并在其下面写出该加的词。面写出该加的词。删除：把多余
5、的词用斜线删除：把多余的词用斜线 划掉。划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。修改后的词。注意：注意：1.1.每处错误及其修改均仅限每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；一词；2.2.只允许修改只允许修改1010处，多者（从第处，多者（从第11 11处起）处起）不计分。不计分。年度年度介介词词动动词词形或形或容副容副词词词词代代词词名名词词连连词词冠冠词词关关系系词词201421311110201312211111201223121001201123102110测试点测试点三步三步五原则五原则四不改四不改1.1.通读全文通读全文,理解文章理
6、解文章.2.2.先易后难先易后难,找出明错找出明错.3.3.对照考点对照考点,深入审读深入审读.1.以改变实词形式为原则.2.以单词形式变化最小为原则.3.以添删或更换虚词为原则.4.以多“改正”少“添删”为原则5.以保持原意不变为原则1.1.标点符号不改。标点符号不改。2.2.大小写不改。大小写不改。3.3.词序错误不改。词序错误不改。4.4.单词拼写不改单词拼写不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。在句中不可能用错。NextIt was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas,but he rode
7、it every day.One morning,he suddenly found the bike gone.Ran to his front yard,he saw a man loading it into his car.He shouted,but the man drive off.As a devoted Christian,he told his dad he real forgave the thief.Whats more,he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.andrunningdrovethatreallytoSothene
8、xtday,hepostedthemessageontheposter-boardandputitinthebeforeyard.Tothepersonwhostolemybike:Youhurtmyfeelings.ButIamaChristianandIforgivehim!Whenheleftforhomethenextmorning,attheendofthedriveway,thebikewasbackwithnewbrakesfrontyouaBack得法者，事半功倍得法者，事半功倍 I从词法和逻辑错误分析从词法和逻辑错误分析:II从句法的角度去分析从句法的角度去分析:动词形，名词
9、数，动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副还要注意形和副;非谓语，细辨别，非谓语，细辨别，句子成份多分析句子成份多分析;代词格，细领悟，代词格，细领悟，介词短语要牢记介词短语要牢记;冠词连词常光顾，冠词连词常光顾，逻辑错误须关注逻辑错误须关注.四四.短文改错口诀：短文改错口诀：I词法和逻辑错误词法和逻辑错误:1.For all these years,we had been allowing tomatoes to 1.For all these years,we had been allowing tomatoes to selfself seed where they please.(2014 s
10、eed where they please.(2014年新课标年新课标I)I)2.My father took me out camping for the first time.2.My father took me out camping for the first time.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.hunting.(陕西卷陕西卷)3.Share with others makes me feel h
11、appy.3.Share with others makes me feel happy.havecame 1.动词的动词的时态时态和和语态语态错误错误.2.主、谓不一致主、谓不一致的错误。的错误。3.非谓语动词形式非谓语动词形式的误用的误用Sharing4.One evening at sunset,4.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.barbecue.(陕西卷陕西卷)5.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at u
12、s from the 5.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky.(sky.(陕西卷陕西卷)6.Amazing at how skillful they were,I was determined 6.Amazing at how skillful they were,I was determined to be just as good.to be just as good.7.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every 7.It is difficult to
13、 understanding why she barks every minute shes outside.minute shes outside.（辽宁卷）（辽宁卷）wereAmazedunderstandhaving8.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are 8.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.often up all night with the baby
14、.9.Not only it provide the students with basic courses,but also it 9.Not only it provide the students with basic courses,but also it manages to encourage them to participate in colourful campus manages to encourage them to participate in colourful campus activities and social practice.activities and
15、 social practice.10.Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet and 10.Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet and calm.calm.11.Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes,especially 11.Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes,especially for the ones in
16、volved in the pedestrians.for the ones involved in the pedestrians.doestrybeenhas1.Last Saturday,as usual,he went to several class.1.Last Saturday,as usual,he went to several class.2.He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive 2.He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and s
17、ometimes death around me.and sometimes death around me.deadclasses 1.1.可数可数与与不可数不可数名词的混用。名词的混用。2.2.可数可数名词的名词的单复数单复数的错用。的错用。3.3.名词的名词的格格的误用的误用 4.4.词性的转换词性的转换3.The man said,“my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on 3.The man said,“my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on the floor.”the floor.”4.Were
18、 called several time about Cleos early morning barking.4.Were called several time about Cleos early morning barking.5.Im deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more 5.Im deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English.attentions to practis
19、ing my spoken English.6.The police soon tracked the calls to a barber shop.6.The police soon tracked the calls to a barber shop.attentionbarbersteethtimes1.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!1.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!(新课标新课标I)I)2.My uncles immediate jumped up and s
20、hot their arrows 2.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.(on the bird.(陕西卷陕西卷)3.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with 3.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.people.（浙江卷）（浙江卷）immdiatelynoisywonderful1.1.形容词形容词、副词、名词等、副词、名词等词性词性
21、的误用。的误用。2.2.原级，比较级和最高级原级，比较级和最高级的误用。的误用。4.Li 4.Li MingMing enjoyed himself,competing and chatting enjoyed himself,competing and chatting with his father,and felt relaxing in the open air.with his father,and felt relaxing in the open air.5.I really take proud in this experience.5.I really take proud
22、in this experience.6.There are more than 200 excellent teachers and 56.There are more than 200 excellent teachers and 5，000 lovely students studying hardly in our school.000 lovely students studying hardly in our school.7.I hope I can practise my spoken English there as 7.I hope I can practise my sp
23、oken English there as more as possible.more as possible.pridehardmuchrelaxed1.The survey also shows that libraries are where 1.The survey also shows that libraries are where students get most of his books.students get most of his books.2.My uncles immediately jumped up and shot 2.My uncles immediate
24、ly jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.the target.nonetheir1.1.前后人称不一致。前后人称不一致。2.2.人称代词人称代词，物主代词物主代词,反身代词反身代词的误用。的误用。3.3.不定代词不定代词的误用及混用。的误用及混用。3.Though situations are tough today,a lot of we post80s are 3
25、.Though situations are tough today,a lot of we post80s are making great efforts to live a good life.making great efforts to live a good life.4.It has been repaired and strengthened several times over its 4.It has been repaired and strengthened several times over its past one hundred years history.pa
26、st one hundred years history.5.I think important to learn the computer well.5.I think important to learn the computer well.6.Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for 6.Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for me.me.itsitus1.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at
27、 the door and wait 1.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.(your teacher to lead you outside.(四川卷四川卷)2.Then we made him breathe using the mouth-to-mouth 2.Then we made him breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way.After the boy came to himself,we sent h
28、im hospital way.After the boy came to himself,we sent him hospital at once and telephoned his parents.at once and telephoned his parents.tofor主要考查主要考查介词短语介词短语和和习惯用法习惯用法的搭配的搭配。3.Nearly five years ago,with the help by our father,3.Nearly five years ago,with the help by our father,my sister and I plant
29、ed some cherry tomatoes(my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果圣女果)in our back garden.(in our back garden.(新课标新课标I I卷卷)4.I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him.4.I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him.5.Soon they came up a good idea.5.Soon they came up a good ide
30、a.6.The woman was angry and said the man,“What 6.The woman was angry and said the man,“What are you doing,sir?What are you looking for?are you doing,sir?What are you looking for?fromwithtoof1.Today I can still remember how I became good table 1.Today I can still remember how I became good table tenn
31、is player.tennis player.2.But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat.2.But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat.3.Besides,Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.3.Besides,Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.theaan.冠词冠词a,ana,an和和thethe的错用或少用的错用或少用 连词连词but,
32、andbut,and，or,so,because,although,or,so,because,although,therefore,howevertherefore,however的错用的错用4.Now many girls prefer to marry a man who owns a house and a 4.Now many girls prefer to marry a man who owns a house and a car.Therefore,I dont think love built on houses and cars is true love,car.There
33、fore,I dont think love built on houses and cars is true love,and I doubt how long it will last.and I doubt how long it will last.5.On Monday,Li Ming was energetic but active in class.5.On Monday,Li Ming was energetic but active in class.6.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?6.“Should
34、 I choose a good major and a good university?7.They had expected to find a free place to live in,so they 7.They had expected to find a free place to live in,so they experienced a hard winter.experienced a hard winter.andorbutHoweverOurEnglishteacherbegintoteachusin2012.ShehadbeenteachingEnglishformo
35、rethantwoyear.Shelikeswe,andsheisverystrictinallofus.Althoughsheisabitshortandnotsobeautifully,butweconsiderherasourfriend.Sheisreallygoodteacher.Weareloveherverymuch.Weresurewellgetinwellwitheachother.began hasyearsuswithbeautifulaon动词形动词形名词数名词数代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟介词短语要牢记介词短语要牢记还要注意形和副还要注意形和副冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常
36、光顾Passage1Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.mandendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidntneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Therea
37、reallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,satbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.Passage2Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.mandendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedid
38、ntneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday.dontmuchforhoursthereMydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatb
39、ythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.lookssithelpfulto名词单复数名词单复数/形容词副词形容词副词/动词时态动词时态/代词代词.1.做题时应注意：做题时应注意：叙事性叙事性文章首抓文章首抓_，以免理解有误；，以免理解有误；论述性论述性文章首抓文章首抓名词形容词冠词代词名词形容词冠词代词错误错误全文时态全文时态3.短文改错口诀代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟介词短语要牢记介词短语要牢记冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾逻辑错误须
40、关注逻辑错误须关注动词形，名词数；动词形，名词数；还要注意形和副；还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别；非谓语，细辨别；句子成份多分析句子成份多分析II从句法的角度去分析从句法的角度去分析:1.HeputitinasecretplacewhereIcouldntfind.which2.ThehousewhichLuXunoncelivedisbeingrepairednow.where3.IllneverforgetthedaywhichIfirstwenttoschool.when关系代词和关系副词的误用关系代词和关系副词的误用1.Wewouldreturnatnighttohearthathed
41、pickedupfromtheradiointheday.what2.ButitdidntmatterthatIwouldwinornot.whether3.Whenpeopleareplayinggames,theymovealot.Thatishowsportsaregoodactivitiesfortheirhealth.why连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用1.Hegotupearlyinordertohecouldcatchthefirst.that2.Makeamarkwhichyouhaveanydoubtsorquestions.where引
42、导词的误用引导词的误用1)Asweclimbedthemountains,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.2)Iparticularlyenjoyeddrivingthroughthecountrysidewithyouandsawthechangingcolorsoftheleavesonthetrees.visitedseeing考察一个句子是否完整考察一个句子是否完整考察一个句子是否完整考察一个句子是否完整,是否存在否定误用的问题是否存在否定误用的问题是否存在否定误用的问题是否存在否定误用的问题,省略省略省略省略现象是否有误现象是否有
43、误现象是否有误现象是否有误,平行、并列关系是否混乱平行、并列关系是否混乱平行、并列关系是否混乱平行、并列关系是否混乱,强调句结构是强调句结构是强调句结构是强调句结构是否完整等否完整等否完整等否完整等.3)Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?4）Hot water is provided for 24 hours,but lifts work day and night.5）I thought it was dull to watch a game in which players kicked a ball to
44、 each other.Therefore,my father loves football.andHoweverdoWhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicycle,hesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherthemoney.Butheshouldfindtheotherhalfmyself.SoIwenttosellnewspap
45、ersaftertheschool.MyfatherwaspleasedifIshowedhimthemoneyamonthafter.Hegivesmetheotherfifty.YoucanimaginewhathappyIwaswhenIrodetoschoolonmyownbicycle.WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherthemoney.Buthesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.Heshouldfindtheotherhalfmyself.SoIwenttosellnewspapersaftertheschool.MyfatherwaspleasedifIshowedhimthemoneyamonthafter.Hegivesmetheotherfifty.YoucanimaginewhathappyIwaswhenIrodetoschoolonmyownbicycle._friendsonewhichIwhenlatergave for_how_