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1、一、动作描写1 .精选动词，精准描述glance stare gaze glimpseshout cry yell screamsmile laughwhisper murmur rush dashjump/spring to ones fcct/strugglc to ones feet2 .添加副词和介词短语来修饰动词adverbs:tightly/cheerfully/hopefiilly/helplessly/desperately/fiercely（ fight）violently/swiftlyin+n:in terror/excitement/shock/soiTow/in a
2、low（weak/sweet） voicewith+情感名词：with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger/fearwith+身体部位：with its sharp eyes/her shaky hand/hcr pale lips例子：Suddenly, a moving dot（点）was spoiled. As il drew nearer, Jane saw it clearly.The helicoDterJJanc murmured, sr）ning ur and rushed l（）the center of an ope
3、n area. She waved her yellow blouse desperately and yelled ac ihe helicopter with excitement. To her great joy, this time she was spotted. Soon aftenvards, the helicopter landed steadily on the ground and Tom jumped out. The moment Toms eyes fell upon her, Jane Ihrew herself into his arms.Honey, Nev
4、er will I leave you again.Jane sobbnd. The reunited couple hugged each other tightly.3 .构造动作链：并列谓语动词A and B或者A, B and Co（1）上车;拦车+上车+告诉目的地He stopped the taxi, jumped into it and told the driver,Go to the police station, please；（2）跳入湖里=冲向湖边+脱掉衣服+跳入水中The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off thei
5、r clothes and jumped into the water.（3）抱住儿子=冲向前+蹲下+一把抱住She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.（4）歌手唱歌:扫视观众+深吸一口气+开始演唱The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing. 5, The little boy said sorry to his mother.（5） The little boy hung his head and sa
6、id sorry to his mother.(6) Jane rush to the rock, climb onto it and waver her yellow blouse mayly.4 .构造动作面：把动作和情感，环境，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。(1) Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling,Youre such an idiot.(burning with anger是情感描写，glare和yell是动作链，同时将动作和语言描写结合在了 一起，形成了饱满的动作面，属于高分表
7、达。)(2) Jane sat on the grass, staring at the vast sky, cold and hungiy.(3) They sal on the beach, enjoying the sunshine, relaxed and happy.(4) Looking straight into my eyes, Mike stroke my hair, whispering,uYou are the most beautiful g girl Ive ever seen.”(5) At the sight of the sudden appearance of
8、 Ne Zha, these villagers were so scared that they shouted aloud with terror.5 .使用合适语法：非谓语作状语形容词作妖语定语从句、状语从句with复合结构读后续写常用句型：(1) doing,谓语动词或谓语动词，doingLooking up at the farmer, the boy saidThank you.Seeing the wolf lying on the ground, they instantly realized what had happened.She stood there shiverin
9、g/trembling with cold.(2)A and B, C-ing 或 A, B-ing and C-ing 或 A-ing, B, C-ingThe students came in, talking and laughing.Looking straight into my eyes, Mike stroke my hair, whispering,14You arc the most beautiful g girl Ive ever seen.”Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frightening eyes, ye
10、lling,tkYoure such an idiot.”(3)Having done. 主句Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.=After he had queued for for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.(4)done,谓语动词Deeply moved by (he story, the children began to cry.(5)done,谓语动词，doingEncouraged by
11、 the teacher, Lucy raised her hand, whispering/*! want to have a try.6.形容词作状语形容词作状语The girl stood there, staring at the food, cold and hungry.They sat on the beach, enjoying the sunshine, relaxed and happy.（7）定语从句The youngest kid wanted to get a present, but he was refused by his mother, which made
12、him cry. 状语从句The moment she saw his husband, Jane rushed to him and hugged him tightly. As I waited at the stop,I heard a big noise.When the students heard that they got the first prize in the gymnastics competition, they cheered and jumped with joy.when they met him, they held him tightly into thei
13、r arms.Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the letter.（9）with复合结构Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart beating fast.He turned around, with tears rolling/strcaming down his checks.The girl stood there, shivering/trembling with cold, with dirt on he
14、r face and hair.手部动作：1. The teacher nodded with satisfaction and thumbed up at him.（老师满意地点了 点头，朝他竖起了 大拇指）She opened the gift with her hands shaking slightly.（她用轻微颤抖的手打开了 礼物）2. She took the childs hand and helped him climb the sieps.（她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶）He reached for her hand and held it tightly.（他伸手抓住她的
15、手并紧紧握住）3. He was running forward, waving his amis.4. He stood there with crossed arms, looking angry.（他站在那里，双手交叉抱在胸前，看上去很 生气）She folded her arms and stared al him.（她双臂交叉,盯着他）5. He grasped the rope with both hands.12. She shivered, rubbing her hands together fiercely.她一边颤抖，一边使劲搓着双手。13. Her hands shoo
16、k/trembled as she lifted the glass to her lips.她的手颤抖着把杯子送到唇边。14. A strong hand reached out and caught/hold of her arm. 一只有力的手伸了 出来抓住了她的手臂。1.1 1 cupped my hand over the phone so they couldnt hear me.我用手捂住电话，免得他们听到我的 话。16. He sat with his head in his hands,他双手抱着头坐着。17. They walked hand in hand along t
17、he path.他们手拉手沿着小路走。常见动作描写：She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.My father patted me on the shoulder, encouraging me never to give up my dreams.Patting me on the shoulder, my father encouraged me never to give up my dreams.It was a freezing day, he was on his way to school, trembling from
18、head to toe.例如：跳水救人Henry jumped into the river and saved Robert.改写： Hearing the screams.Hemy ran/dashed/rushed to the riverside.threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. By great effort, he reached Robert and brought/dragged Robert to the shore.经典句型：The girl stood there, sh
19、ivering/trembling with cold, with dirt on her face and hair.The girl stood there, staring at the food, cold and hungry.I walked to her and handed her the bread.Her face lit up/brighlened/glowed with pleasure when she saw it.Her eyes twinkled with pleasure when she saw the bread.Seeing her smile,! fe
20、lt warmth surging through my body.He grinned with delight when she saw the bread.I cant believe/iinagine someone at my age living like this when I am watching TV in the sofa.I realized I should be grateful for everything I have instead of taking everything for granted. Sometimes a little kindness ca
21、n make a big difference.二、情绪描写读后续写中情绪描写有规律吗？情绪描写有两种方法。一种是直接描写法，即句子中直接出现表示情绪的单词。另外一种 是间接法，通过表情和动作来体现某种情绪。大部分读后续写中的故事中，人物是从“负向”情绪，最终转化到“正向”情绪的。常见的负向情绪：紧张，恐惧，失望常见的正向情绪：快乐，感动，如释重负（一）表达快乐直接描写：1. Seeing her bright smile/present. She was overflowing with happiness.（她充:曲 幸福。）Joy welled up inside her.（她心中涌起喜
22、悦。）2. Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy.（听到这句话，每个人都欣喜若狂）To his joy, his son won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.（二）表达快乐间接描写Laughter lingered around the room.（笑声在房间里萦绕）1. She laughed, with her eyes shining with excitement.（她笑了,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。）Her face lit up/brightened/glowed with
23、pleasure when I gave her the present.（我给她礼物时，她 的脸上焕发出了光彩。）2. A bright smile appeared on/spread across his face when she saw the present.3. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.4. Her smile lit up the whole room.4.1 couldnt restrain my joy and jumped into the house.8. His eyes twinkled with ple
24、asure when he saw the news.9. He grinned with delight when he saw us.（当他看到我们,咧开嘴开心地笑了） （三）表达悲伤的描写He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.1. With tears streaming down her face, she opened the box.2. She burst into tears and ran out of the room.3. She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.1.1
25、tried to fight back tears.（我强忍住泪水）My eyes were filled with tears.（我的眼里充涉了 泪水）6. At the sight of the familiar handwriting, tears welled up in his eyes.（他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶）tears blurred her eyes.7. Seeing the ending of the letter, she could not contain her sorrd rolled down her checks. （四）表达生气Hearing thi
26、s he was seized by anger.（他充满 7愤怒）1. Seeing what had happened, he could hardly/scarcely contain his rage. （他几乎无法控制自己的愤怒）She folded her arms and stared at him.2. His voice trembled with anger.（他气得声音发抖）Mark felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. （五）表达惊讶1
27、. Seeing this, Our mouths dropped open in suiprise.2. Much/Greatly to my surprise, Torn won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.3. To my great surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.4. Everyone looked at her in astonishment.5. Hearing the bad news, Mary was frozen
28、with shock.（六）表达恐惧、绝望恐惧：1. He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.2. Realizing what had happened, A flood of fear welled up in him.3. Seeing what had happened, fear flooded over him.（恐惧淹没 了他）绝望：1. Tony felt hopclcss/dcspcratc.2. Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into
29、hopelessness.3. At the sight of the wolf,I fell so scared that my ihroat tightened and my knees fell weak.4. Al the sight of the wolf, I froze with terror, loo scared to move an inch.（吓呆 了 不敢动弹） （七）表达感动Touched deeply, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.1. Tears
30、 filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude/words failed her.2. With tears streaming down her face, she held her son tightly into her arms,Seeing her bright smile/present, he felt warmth surging through his body.3. Holding the paper bag tightly,! stood still,a warm current rising in my he
31、art.4. A warm current welled up in his heart the moment he realized how much love his father had devoted to him.（八）表达害怕I. Her heart beat so violently, with his hands trembling.1.1 said nervously, my voice trembling a bit.3. She was choked with fear.4. Wc were scared to death.5. That horror movie mad
32、e my hair stand on end.（吓得我头发都竖起来了）felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.（嗓子发紧，膝盖发软）7. At the sight of the wolf,i froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.（吓呆了,不敢动弹） （九）表达羞愧Hearing this, he hung/dropped his head in shame.1. She felt so ashamed that she could feel her fa
33、ce burning.（十）表达疲惫1. He was physically and mentally exhausted.（十一）表达如释重负To his relief, Theres nothing wrong with his body.Seeing what was happening, they sighed in relief.（十二）表达孤单The loneliness and grief conies in waves.三、环境描写1. The sky was blue and the sun was shining.天空蔚蓝，阳光明媚。2. The hills were ba
34、thed in the sunshine.3. darkness fell 夜幕降临The day was bitterly cold 天气寒冷4. It was pouring really hard 大雨倾盆而下The moon was shining brightly in the sky 皓月当空5. The sky was dotted with stars 天空繁星密布The clouds parted and the sun shone 云散开了，太阳出来了。6. The hills were bathed in the sunshine 山丘沐浴在阳光下。7. The wind
35、 was getting up and it was becoming cloudy 风越来越大，天空开始乌云密布。8. The thick fog blanketed the field.浓雾笼罩着整个大地。9. Thc river glitters in the sunshine.阳光下河面波光粼粼。10. Like a lamp, the moon shone from above. The stars （winkled their eyes with curiosity.月亮在天空中好像一盏夜灯，闪烁的星好奇地眨着眼睛。11. Thcrcs not a single sound at
36、night. Only the glowworms were still awake, carefully weaving a picture in the night sky.夜里一点声音都没有，只有董火虫还醒着，小心翼翼地在夜空里织着一幅画。12. Blue sky stood tall and far, and the sun was searing my back晴空万里，火热的太阳晒得我后背发烫。四、主旨类句子1. The world always makes way for dreamers.2. Everyone is the architect of his own fate.
37、3. Life is full of laughter and tears. Only by accepting both can we enjoy life.4. Sometimes a little kindness can make a big difference.主旨句一：入门句That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了 so.lhat的句式结构：