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1、四、六级作文深度解读2023年6月四级真题Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic .You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below：Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling作文：1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的因素3.
2、这种现象导致的结果一、对的使用提纲本次话题关于spelling(拼写)，显然是学生平常学习生活中熟悉的不能再熟悉的话题，再看历次考试，多次考察校园生活；从题材上来看，本次题目属议论文范畴，也是四级最常考的体裁；从命题类型来看，该题目属于“问题解决型”，与202312月的“限制塑料袋使用”属同一类型。在四六级作文考试中，常见的是给出题目和提纲（基本为中文），因此只需自己能对的有效地去运用已经给出的中文提纲，对其材料进行加工、补充、扩展。各段落的展开要根据提纲的来龙去脉进行（即每一段以提纲中的一句话为中心思想）。特别要注意拟定重点，选准扩充点，将较抽象的内容具体化，阐述透彻。第一段：应展现如今青少
3、年学生不重视英语学习中拼写的现象（可举例或列举）。第二段：应重点解释导致如今青少年学生不重视英语学习中拼写现象的因素，这些因素重要有：电子产品的普及，如电子词典、电脑等（因素素材需要靠生活的阅历积累以及逆向推导），导致人们越来越不重视书写练习和规范。第三段：是本文的重点。阐述如何解决不重视拼写问题时，切忌只简朴地写出“We should take measures to solve the problem”这样空洞的、表态性的句子，而不提出具体的解决方法。只有提出具体的解决方法，才干使文章显得充实，有说服力。建议考生构思列提纲时，用快速便捷的方式构思出自己可以读懂的信息，统筹全文，并起到备忘作
4、用。下面是用英语列出的较为细致的提纲（考试中时间紧，不建议使用），以备平时练习：Topic：Due Attention Should Be Given to SpellingOutline：I. fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spelling1. can only imitate the pronunciation of a word but be incapable of spelling itII. There are some causes for it1. fewer and fewer students ne
5、ed to write English essays2. the goal of most students to learn English is to speak it and pass the examination3. the wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computersIII. Measures should be taken to solve the problem1. we need to attach great importance to word-spelling2. should w
6、rite English as much as they can3. the dictations should be reinforced in the class二、写作过程写作阶段是一个遣词造句，连句成篇，将不同信息组合排列的过程。列提纲时得到的是一些杂乱无序的字、词、句，需要通过一些过渡手段将其连接成完整的文章。应对素材进行取舍增补，框架结构的调整，段落、语句顺序的排列，并兼顾各种语法现象。在初稿的写作过程中，一定要注意以所拟定的提纲为指导，注意语言表达的对的性和流畅性。三、修改润色（用于平时练习，考试时间紧，请酌情慎用）写出来的初稿往往在语法、用词乃至文章的结构上都会有这样那样的问题
7、，需要不断地做一些修改：1、语篇结构检查，即检查文章的主题是否明确，篇章层次是否明显，段落衔接是否连贯，内容是否切题等。2、段落检查，即检查段落是否完善，中心是否突出，段内各句是否衔接紧凑等。3、语法检查，涉及用词是否恰当，标点是否对的，句子结构是否完整，语句是否通顺等。四、其他注意事项1、笔迹：可以不美丽，但必须工整。2、字数：150字最佳。四级规定至少写120字，但是只写120字，每段平均只有40字，显得太少。有的同学写200甚至300字，又太繁琐（具体字数在多于120字基础上，根据考试时间，酌情考虑）。3. 段落分布。一般写三段，而不要写成两段或者四段。第一段大约写23句(假如每句话所含
8、字数少的话，可以写4句，这个根据具体情况来定，后面段落同理)；第二段写5句左右；第三段假如有重点内容则同样写45句，假如是总结性段落，写3句即可。4、第一段要写好，特别是第一句话，一定不能出现语法错误。尽量使用事先准备好的套话，并学会随机应变，针对不同的题目规定来替换。5、留出23分钟检查有没有错词或病句；标点符号是否齐全、准确；每一句话是否符合英语的思维习惯，避免语法错误。修改时要注意卷面整洁。五、写作的具体实行1、篇章组织文章由三个重要部分组成，即开头、扩展部分和结尾，其常用展开方式有： (1)列举法，即将数种因素一一列出，如因素、症状、优点、缺陷、变化、特点等。常用词：to begin
9、with, secondly, besides, lastlyfor one thing, for another, finallyfirst, second, third, moreover(2)举例法，即通过典型事例对主题进行说明。一般说来，所举的例子要具体，有说服力，有助于说明主题句中的支配思想。常用词：to illustrate, an illustration/an example, for example/for instance, particularly/in particular, such as, like【注意】列举法侧重一一罗列事实，所列事实力求全面。举例法则是通过典型
10、事例解释作者的观点，事例可多可少。(3)因果关系法，通常有以下两种模式：因素分析型：在主题句中先介绍某一事实或结果，然后对这一事实或结果的因素进行分析。常用词：due to, because of, owing to, because, since, as, on account of, result from 常用句式：基本因素，分析某事物时，用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的因素。Why? For one thingFor anotherThe answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thingFor anotherStil
11、l anotherA number of factors, both physical and psychological affect/both individual and social contribute toThe reasons for this are as followsWe have good reason to believe that另一因素，在分析了基本因素之后，再补充一个次要的或者更重要的因素。Another important factor isis also responsible for the change/problemCertainly, theis no
12、t the sole reason for结果分析型：在主题句中先点明要讨论的事件或事实，然后分析已经或将要发生的结果。常用词：therefore, as a result, accordingly, consequently, contribute to, for this reason, lead to, result in 常用句式：It will produce a profound/farreaching effect/impact onIt involves some serious consequence for(4)比较、对照法，即通过比较两个事物或一个事物的两个方面的相似点或
13、不同点来支持主题句。比较是阐述所比对象的相同、类似方面；而对照则是阐述其不同甚至相反之处。此方法通常有以下两个模式：先阐述甲方，再阐述乙方，即：甲1，甲2，甲3乙1，乙2，乙3两方同时阐述，逐条比较，即：甲1，乙1；甲2，乙2；甲3，乙3 比较相同点常用词：like, same, in the same way, similar to, similarly, bothand, alike, neithernor, in common 对照不同点常用词：unlike, be different from, differ from, on the other hand, in contrast,
14、while, instead, whereas 常用句式：两者比较，比较两事物，要说出其一超过另一个，或肯定一事物的优点，也肯定其缺陷。例如：The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from BIndeed, A carries much more weight when compared with BThere is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effectsCompared with A,
15、 B两者相同/相似，比较两事物都有或者都没有的特点。例如：A and B have several things in common. They are similar in thatA bears some striking resemblance(s) to B(5)分类法，即按一定标准对事物进行归类的一种段落发展方法。通过度类，使文章脉络一目了然。常用词：to divideinto, to classifyinto, to fall into, to distinguish kinds, types, sorts, groups, categories according to, in
16、terms of, depending on, on the basis of to sub, classify, to sub, categorize, to sub, divide (6)定义法，即借助已知的词语和知识，对某个抽象概念、专门术语或容易引起误解的事物进行解释，阐明其性质和特性。定义法一般只用于说明文，有时也用于议论文。定义法发展段落的基本模式是：定义+扩展部分。扩展部分展开叙述有关方面的内容，如被定义物的来历、性质、结构、特性、原理和用途等。(7)时间顺序法，即按事情发生的时间先后为线索发展段落。此方法重要用于记叙文中叙述一件事情的通过，动词常用过去时；或用于说明文中叙述做一
17、件事应当遵循的程序或环节，动词常用被动态。常用词：at the beginning, after that, then, finallyfirst, then, next, until, in the endat first, later, after a while, afterwards, at that time, eventually(8)空间顺序法，重要用于描述一个场合或空间，以及其中细节的位置关系。用空间法写作时，一方面要拟定一个参照点。此外，恰当运用承接词也是写好这类段落的关键。通常可参照下面四种方法：1）从上到下；2）从左到右；3）从远到近；4）顺时针。常用词：above, a
18、cross, against, below, under, close to, next to, between, nearby, on the right(left), in the middle of, on the top of, opposite, to the west(east)2、段落组织段落大多由三个部分构成，特别是说明文和议论文的段落：主题句、扩展句和结尾句。（1）主题句一般位于段首，是一个完整的句子，用以概括、叙述和说明该段的主题。有的也可置于段尾或段中，但最佳放在段首。主题句要有可写性，既不要太空泛也不要过于局限，否则扩展句将无法说明它或没有展开讨论的余地。空泛：The
19、Olympic Games are exciting.概括：In the Olympic Games the football teams from many countries compete intensely.尽量使用简洁明了的句子，做到句子完整并且表达的主题思想完整。复杂：She likes collecting stamps which is her hobby.简洁：Collecting stamps is her hobby.好的主题句经常使用关键词或词组来限制主题所要表达的观点。Topic：Air TravelTopic sentence：Air travel is more
20、convenient than train for at least three reasons.(作者在“aspect(方面)”和“reason(因素)”两方面限制他的主题。)根据不同的主题，主题句可以有多种形式。A直接说明某事物的作用或优点。Topic：Solar EnergyTopic sentence：Solar energy can contribute to our future energy supply.B指出人们对某事物的不同观点。Topic：HappinessTopic sentence：It differs from person to person as to the
21、view of happiness.（2）扩展句，或称推展句、支持句，是用来发展、证明或支持段落主题思想的句子。其可分为两种：重要扩展句和次要扩展句。扩展句可位于段首主题句之后或段尾主题句之前。重要扩展句，其重要特点是：围绕段落主题句展开的每一个扩展句自身都不规定作进一步的说明或证明，句与句之间的关系是互相独立又是互相连接的。例如：(主题句)There are several factors affecting climate。(扩展句1)One factor is the mount of sunlight received。(扩展句)Altitude, or the height abov
22、e sea level, also determines climate。(扩展句3)The oceans have an effect on the climate of adjacent land。(扩展句4)In addition, climate is influenced by the general circulation of the atmosphere。次要扩展句，指对重要扩展句作进一步的事实分析和举例说明，从属于某一个或某几个扩展句。例如：(主题句)I dont teach because teaching is not easy for me. (重要扩展句1)Teach
23、ing is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living：mechanic, carpenter, writer. (重要扩展句2) For me, teaching is a red eye, sweaty palm, sinking stomach profession. (次要扩展句1) Red eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing. (次要扩展句2) Sweaty
24、 palm, because Im always nervous before I enter the classroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am. (次要扩展句3) Sinking stomach, because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual.从属于重要扩展句2的三个次要扩展句起着解释说明作用，分别解释red eye, sweaty palm, sinking stom
25、ach的含义，这就更加形象生动地证明了“teaching is not easy”这个主题。重要扩展句与次要扩展句的关系：A每个重要扩展句都应当是对主题句中表达重要思想的关键词的直接、明确的说明。B每个次要扩展句都应当说明它的重要扩展句。C具有讨论说明或分析的问题通常既要有重要扩展素材，又要有次要扩展素材。写好扩展句的方法：主题句及关键词拟定后，开始选择和主题有关的信息和素材。有一种常用的方法就是句子展开前加以设问，然后解答，即设问解答(whybecause)的方法。Topic sentence：English is an international language?设问：Why can w
26、e say English is an international language?解答：Because：English is spoken by pilots and airport control operators on all the airways of the world.Because：Over 70 percent of the worlds mails are written in English.Because：More than 60 percent of the worlds radio programs are in English.Because：Pakistan
27、 was once one of the British colonies.Because：Many members of the International Language Society are selected from English spoken countries.最初的三个扩展句是和关键词an international language一致的。第句和主题句不统一，其会成为另一主题句(Many Pakistanis speak English)很好的扩展句。第句说服力不强。（3）结尾句结尾句是用来对全段内容进行总结、归纳或提出结论性观点的句子。顾名思义，结尾句只能位于段尾，起反
28、复段落主题和强调段落中心思想的作用。2023年6月四级作文样本Sample 1Due Attention Should Be Given to SpellingNow we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in peoples attitude towards some traditional practice, especially in the area of English learning , one of whi
29、ch is less attention has been given to spelling by college students . This issue has been brought into public focus and called for further concern.A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones. First, information is expanding at such an increasing ra
30、te that our society is called the one of information. The information is so immense that students havent ample energy and time to deal deeply with spelling, and some computer programs, such as word, have done the spelling checking work for us. Second, the standardized-test oriented way of English le
31、arning, in which the high score can be achieved without spelling, put students to the position in which they have the quite reason to ignore spelling.This issue may lead to a number of unfavorable consequences, with the following two the most serious. For one thing, the information would be incorrec
32、t when conveyed by hand- writing way and cause some bad effects. For another, we may indulge ourselves in this way of inaccuracy which may influence our attitude of learning or research. The awareness of the importance of this issue should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken. It is
33、reasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improved in the near future.第三段的第二种写法：In view of the importance of this issue, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For one thing, it is essential that students should be encouraged to use less automatic spelling checking
34、 tools. For another, spelling should be highlighted in the English test, such as CET-4 and CET 6.Whats more; the public should enhance their awareness of the importance of spelling .With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the situation of poor spelling will be improved in
35、the near future.Sample 2Due Attention Should Be Given to SpellingRecently, there is an increasing number of students paying less attention to spelling of English words. When meeting a new word, some students, who always emphasize the English pronunciation, just wonder how to read it rather than how
36、to spell it. Gradually, they make so many spelling mistakes in writing, though they would believe that they have mastered the words well.Specific speaking, the situation above mainly lies in the facts as follows: Some students think that the acquisition of English words depends on pronouncing the wo
37、rd correctly, no matter how to spell it right or wrong; because in their eyes, all communication with English speakers can be solved successfully over the oral means. However, speaking does not represent everything of communication, since a lot of information should be seriously conveyed through var
38、ious documents on the paper, the Internet or other visual mediums. If a person ignore those written misunderstands, it will lead to a range of troubles or losses undoubtedly. For example, it has been estimated that some disputes, causing lawsuits, usually came from the incorrect words spelling alone
39、.To solve this problem, English teachers should guide students to highlight the significance of spelling during the daily teaching activities. For one thing, teachers must rouse their students awareness of spelling, in order to abandon the priority of English pronunciation. For another, if mistakes
40、over word spelling occur, a strict punishment needs to be introduced. After all, the spelling is as equally important as speaking, and spelling the words correctly can not be achieved without the efforts both from teachers and their students.2023年6月四级作文样本For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
41、write a short essay entitled Free Admission to Museums. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.如今越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么？也会带来一些问题你的见解1、审题概述这是一篇比较典型的议论文，重要分析当前博物馆免费开放的问题。整篇文章重要讲述博物馆免费开放的目的，然后分析由于免费开放引发的一系列问题。最后，表白自己的立场，赞成还是反对这样的一种政策。2、写作环节第一段，重要是概述，说明现在博物馆大多免费开放，还引发了一系列的问题。第
42、二段，重要具体说明当前博物馆免费开放的目的和引发的问题。由于博物馆属于政府部门，为非营利性机构，因此我们从给大众提供更多的学习的机会和便利的角度出发，烘托出博物馆的服务性目的。此外，免费的政策也引发了一系列的问题，例如各种类型的“参观者”都会进入到博物馆，影响博物馆的形象；并且由于参观者较多，文物难免会受到损坏，并且还会引发安全问题。这些都必须考虑在内。第三段，表达自己的观点，重要是赞成还是反对免费政策，并且给出一些对策，如对上面的问题提出解决的办法等。Sample 1Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are open to the publi
43、c with free admission. The reason for it lies in the fact that the government has been attaching great importance to provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world.However, the opener attitude of museums may also bring some problems as well. For one thing, w
44、ith more visitors, there is possibility that displays of the museums can get damaged more easily. For another, it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.As far as I am concerned, I am absolutely in favor of this practice. First and foremost,
45、not worrying about the admission fees, ordinary people are allowed to enter the museums to enjoy the displays freely. Moreover, kids and teenagers can learn about knowledge in various domains in a more vivid and interactive way in the museums out of the classroom.Sample 2With the development of mode
46、rn civilization, an increasing number of museums are open to the public for free. According to a national survey, over half of the museums in China have carried out this free-admission policy or are going to do so.What is the aim of such policy? The goal is crystal clear. For one thing, more citizen
47、s can have access to museums and appreciate the history and culture. In addition, poor people have the opportunities to receive such free education and the whole quality of Chinese people can thus be improved. For another, free museum tours help cities draw more visitors from the world and also publ
48、icize the city image nicely.However, everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that some people may litter and spit in the museum and their bad behaviors affect the environment and museum management through the above analysis, I believe that the favorable sides far outweigh its negative effects. I hope all the people can share the same national treasure i