读后续写练习写作指导 讲义--高考英语二轮复习写作指导.docx

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1、读后续写练习写作指导 讲义阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。My childhood was filled with hunting, camping, and fishing trips. My parentsdidnt have much money. But they gave us a far better currencytheir time.One holiday, I watched my mom and dad cook together. As my dad worked beside my mom, my heart was fill

2、ed withloveand admiration. I just wanted to say, “I love.”But I failed.The holiday dinner came and went. I lay on my bed, thinking about the food that sat on the table a short time ago. What a great time we had hadfamilytime and wonderful food. I only regretted I hadnt spoken those three difficult w

3、ordsI love you.I woke up early the next day. A fresh blanket of snow lay gently on the mountains. Mydadhad decided to go rabbit hunting with my brothers. I went skiing. After ahappyday on the hillsides, I returned home. The house was cold and still. I called out, but no one answered. Usually,Momwas

4、busy in the kitchen preparing themeal. The quietness was broken by the sudden ring of the telephone.“Your dad was badly hurt in a trafficaccidenton his way home,”said a neighbor from the farmhouse nearby. “Hes having an operation.”At that moment, my failure to say “I love you”pushed down on me like

5、the weight of the fallen sky. The neighbor came over and quickly drove me to thehospital.Trembling, I hurried into the intensive care unit. My dad lay motionless on a hospital bed. He had to depend on machines to breathe. My mom and brothers were around. Afraid of leaving my dad, I took hold of his

6、bedside. “Its time to go,”said the critical care nurse. “The next twenty-four hours will be very important. If he canwakeup, there will be a very big chance that he willrecoverand survive. You all go home and wait for our telephone call telling his conditions changes.”注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡

7、的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: We returned home with heavy hearts. Paragraph 2: “Amazingly, your dad is awake now. Come!”the nurse added. 试题分析1. 人物:My parents:didnt have much money. But they gave us a far better currencytheir time.One holiday, I watched my mom and dad cook together. 父母给我带来非常温馨的生活,虽然家境不一定富裕。I:

8、As my dad worked beside my mom, my heart was filled with love and admiration.What a great time we had hadfamily time and wonderful food. I only regretted I hadnt spoken those three difficult wordsI love you.my brothers:没有太多的描述,但从“我”的描述当中,也可以感受到这是一个温馨的家庭2. 事件: 童年时代,我生活的是一个并不富裕但极其温馨的家庭。父母亲经常跟我们有很多的“亲子

9、时光”打猎,露营,钓鱼等。这让我的内心充满了爱与崇敬。假期来来去去,除了温馨的家人相聚的时光和美食,我总感觉有点点遗憾,想对父母说“我爱你们”,但一直没能说出口。 又一个假期来临,有一天,我起了个大早,发现父亲已经决定带着兄弟们去捕猎野兔,而我更想去滑雪。当高高兴兴玩了一天后,我发现家里空无一人,按以前的惯例,这个时候,妈妈应该忙着做完饭,但今天却感觉异样。家里的安静被电话铃声打破。电话是一位邻居打来的,说父亲出了车祸,伤的有点重,需要马上动手术。邻居把我送到父亲在急救的医院。进入ICU,父亲一动不动躺在病床上,靠着呼吸机维持着呼吸,妈妈和兄弟们站在病床边上。一会儿,护士就催促我们离开急救室,

10、说接下去的24个小时非常关键,如果父亲能醒过来,那就有希望。她让我们回家等电话通知。.3. 主题点: 作者怎样把深藏内心的“I love you”说出口4. 情节安排:第一段:回到家,家里的气氛如何?家人是怎样的表现?(与前一句的heavy hearts衔接)妈妈还是一如既往忍住伤痛,为我们准备了晚饭。饭后,我们在焦急地等待结果。凌晨时分,医院的护士终于打来电话,说了什么内容?(与下一段开头衔接)注意:下一段开头句中有added一词!第二段:我们对“好消息”的反应(与开头句衔接)到医院后,我迫不及待地把“I love you”送给了父亲经过一段时间的治疗和休养,父亲康复出院。我对“I love

11、 you”有了更深的理解。下水作文Paragraph 1: We returned home with heavy hearts.A gray day! I felt the darkness swept over ourfamilywith theaccidenthappening to our “backbone”,Dad! Tears on cheeks, we prayed sincerely that good luck would come to Dad. Though in a low spirit,Mommanaged to hold back her sadness, say

12、ing there would surely be good chances for dad. A quickmeal, we gathered around, silent, waiting. Early the next morning, the telephone rang. “This is the nurse from thehospital!”an excited gentle voice came from the other end. (84 words)Paragraph 2:“Amazingly, your dad is awake now. Come!”the nurse

13、 added.This great news distracted us from sleeping. We jumped from the beds excitedly and the car was soon started, heading towards the hospital. Dad lying in the bedwakingwith eyes half open, I went up to Dads bedside, saying “Iloveyou”without any hesitation. Dads smile was the best reward. A month

14、 later, Dadrecoveredwell and was discharged from the hospital after a thorough examination.Happydays came back to us. Once again, I understood those three words better! (82 words)参考范文We returned home with heavy hearts. My brothers and I tried to comfort Mom.Weall gathered as a family and wished Dad

15、could wake up. Then, we went to our bedrooms, but none of us could fall asleep that night. All I could think of was that I just wanted a chance to express my love to Dad. Early in the morning, the telephone rang. My heart almost stopped beating when I answered the telephone. “This is the hospital,”s

16、aid a nurse. (77words) “Amazingly, your dad is awake now. Come!”the nurse added. Then we excitedly hurried to the hospital. Soon, we gathered around Dads bedside. His first words were “I love you”. Smiling, I told him that I loved him, too. During the following days, we tried to take good care of him. Soon, the New Year approached and Dad was released from the hospital. None of us had new clothes for the New Year, but we were happy together. I wrapped my arms around Dad and looked into his eyes, saying again, “I love you.”(84words)学科网(北京)股份有限公司

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