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1、怎样准备英语中考怎样准备英语中考写作篇写作篇优秀水平标准优秀水平标准n n1、能精确运用词汇和句型结构，较生动和具体地描述情境或叙述所给话题，能精确自如地表达看法和感情。n n2、能用流畅的语言组织常见体裁的短文，逻辑清晰，结构完整，层次清晰，内容充溢，文体恰当。n n3、能在写作中恰当地引用资料，能用谚语、俗语等，能清晰地阐述自己的观点和评述他人的观点，具有确定的人文意识。写作分值逐年提高写作分值逐年提高05年10分06年14分07、08年16分09、10、11年18分12年20分内容（内容（8 8分）分）是否紧扣主题是否紧扣主题是否涉及到所要求的几个方面是否涉及到所要求的几个方面语言（语言
2、（8 8分）分）大小写、标点符号、单大小写、标点符号、单词拼法、词拼法、词法、句法是否正确词法、句法是否正确字数是否达标字数是否达标 组织结构分（组织结构分（4分）分）内容充溢，不写废话；上下文内容充溢，不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达精确、无连贯、用语规范、表达精确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给表达用语者，可给4分。分。组织结构分组织结构分 通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即 使无语法错误，一般亦不予给组织结构使无语法错误，一般亦不予给组织结构 分。分。
3、学会审题学会审题 写人物写人物 写事务写事务 写物件写物件 写场所写场所 写感想写感想0303年：年：年：年：To be a lovely ShanghaineseTo be a lovely Shanghainese （做可爱的上海人）（做可爱的上海人）（做可爱的上海人）（做可爱的上海人）0404年：年：年：年：Leaving schoolLeaving school（毕业时分）（毕业时分）（毕业时分）（毕业时分）0505年：年：年：年：Growing pains and gainsGrowing pains and gains（成长的苦恼与快乐）（成长的苦恼与快乐）（成长的苦恼与快乐）（成
4、长的苦恼与快乐）0606年：年：年：年：I have a dream I have a dream（我有一个幻想）（我有一个幻想）（我有一个幻想）（我有一个幻想）0707年：年：年：年：Things I hate to doThings I hate to do(我不宠爱我不宠爱我不宠爱我不宠爱)0808年：年：年：年：Love around me Love around me（我身边的爱）（我身边的爱）（我身边的爱）（我身边的爱）0909年：年：年：年：I want to do something for my schoolI want to do something for my scho
5、ol (我想为学校做点事）我想为学校做点事）我想为学校做点事）我想为学校做点事）1010年：年：年：年：I am proud of myself (I am proud of myself (我为自己感到傲慢我为自己感到傲慢我为自己感到傲慢我为自己感到傲慢)1111年：年：年：年：Im a member of Im a member of（我是（我是（我是（我是的一员）的一员）的一员）的一员）要求要求1）要用正确的时态 2）要用恰当的词语 3）要用清晰的思路 4）要用不同的句子 5）要用确定的连接 句型单一句型单一 东拉西扯东拉西扯 时态错误时态错误 用词不当用词不当 结构松散结构松散 脱离主
6、题脱离主题 字迹潦草字迹潦草常见错误常见错误怎样改进写作怎样改进写作学习写作的步骤和方法 学会套题的技巧和思路 用好题目的提示和问题 运用点睛之句和习语谚语 3+1的综合写作模式 Everybody has his own dream.My dream is to be a tour guide.Some people may think its tiring to be a tour guide.But I dont think so because I can visit many places of interest around the world and I can learn di
7、fferent cultures and customs.Besides,I also can meet different people in different places.So I really want to be a guide.It is an exciting job.From now on,I must study geography well.I think through my hard work,my dream will come true in the future.（0707中考）中考）中考）中考）Write at least 60 words about the
8、 topic“Things I Hate to Write at least 60 words about the topic“Things I Hate to Do”.(Do”.(以以以以“我不宠爱我不宠爱我不宠爱我不宠爱”为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于6060个词的短文，个词的短文，个词的短文，个词的短文，标点标点标点标点符号不占格。符号不占格。符号不占格。符号不占格。)Use the following points as a guide.(Use the following points as a guide.(短文须包含下列要点短文须包含下列要点短文
9、须包含下列要点短文须包含下列要点)What are the things that you hate to do?What are the things that you hate to do?What do you hate doing most?Why?(Give at least two What do you hate doing most?Why?(Give at least two reasons.)reasons.)Things I Hate to Do Things I Hate to DoMost of the time I do things which I enjoy.H
10、owever,there Most of the time I do things which I enjoy.However,there are are still things that I hate to do.still things that I hate to do.Most of the time I do things which I enjoy.However,there are still things that I hate to do.I hate to keep pets and tell lies.The thing that I hate doing most i
11、s smoking.As we all know,smoking is not only bad for ourselves but also harmful to others.Whenever my father smokes,I feel rather sick.Besides,it is a waste of money to smoke,I think.Whats more,smoking pollutes the air.So I hate smoking most.Most of the time I do things which I enjoy.However,there a
12、re still things that I hate to do.I hate doing things against rules.I hate being indifferent when others are in trouble.But,the thing I hate doing most is to be dishonest.It is really an immoral thing to be dishonest.You will feel guilty after cheating others.If your lie is recognized,youll get puni
13、shments.You will never be trusted once you tell lies,and not respected as well.I hate people who are dishonest.I hate being dishonest,and I hope that everyone is honest to others.（0808中考）中考）Write at least 60 words about the topic“Love Write at least 60 words about the topic“Love around me”around me”
14、(以以以以“我身边的爱我身边的爱我身边的爱我身边的爱”为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于6060个个个个词的短文，标点符号不占格。词的短文，标点符号不占格。词的短文，标点符号不占格。词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a guide Use the following points as a guide(短文须包含下列短文须包含下列短文须包含下列短文须包含下列要点要点要点要点)Is there any love around you?Is there any love around you?HoHow do you
15、feel when you get love from him w do you feel when you get love from him /her/them?/her/them?What are you going to do to show your love?What are you going to do to show your love?n nThere is love around me.For example,my mother took good care of me when I was sick every day.Whats more?She always buy
16、s plenty of drinks and food I like for me,as well as many toys.She also helps me with my study so that I can make great progress.Thus I feel deeply moved.Im thankful to her for the things she did for me these years.So I have made up my mind that I will work harder at my study to show my love to her.
17、Its widely accepted that everyone needs love.And I think there is always love around me.My parents show love to me by looking after me well.My classmates help makes me feel their love.Im so moved that words cant express how much I love them!So I will spare no effort to help my parents do housework a
18、nd help my friends in return.Finally,I really want to say thanks to them from the bottom of my heart!Im a lucky teenager because there is lots of love around me.For example,my parents love me very much.They encouraged me to be brave when I failed to pass the 800-meter race last term.Im very thankful
19、 to them.Their love makes me feel warm and powerful.In order to show my love,Im going to help them with housework.This will enable them to have more time to rest.Love around me is great.（0909中考中考中考中考）Write at least 60 words about the topic“I want to do Write at least 60 words about the topic“I want
20、to do something for my school”.something for my school”.（以（以“我想为学校做件事我想为学校做件事”为为题写一篇不少于题写一篇不少于6060个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅以下内容仅供参考）供参考）n nWhat do you want to do for your school?What do you want to do for your
21、 school?n nWhy do you want to do it?Why do you want to do it?n nHow are you going to do it?How are you going to do it?After four years study at school,the idea of buying some mirrors for the school comes into my mind,because mirrors are just like my eyes,looking at everything around,as well as sendi
22、ng my best wishes to my teachers and classmates.Ill buy mirrors of all shapes and sizes.For example,the rectangle ones are the doors to success while the round ones stand for my eyes.Ill set up all the mirrors by myself to show how much I love my school.Thats what I want to do for my school.Its wide
23、ly believed that a clean environment plays an important part in our school life.Needless to say,school is my second home,so I want to try my best to make my school clean and tidy.In my opinion,picking up the rubbish on the ground is the basic way of making my school clean.Whats more,telling others t
24、he importance of protecting our school environment is necessary.“Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.”I hope my school will be more attractive with its clean environment.n nNow that Im leaving secondary school in a few days,I want to write a song for my school to express my gratitude.The lyric
25、s will be full of our glorious memories,and the music will be played by the band of our own.I hope that the teachers and students will enjoy the song as it can always remind us of our unforgettable school life even if well be apart some day.You see,now Ive got to work hard to make my dream of writin
26、g a song for my school come true!Ive been eagerly Ive been eagerly hoping to help improve the hoping to help improve the environment of our school.environment of our school.The reason is that some The reason is that some students in our school have poor habits of littering students in our school hav
27、e poor habits of littering everywhere and stepping on the lawns randomly.everywhere and stepping on the lawns randomly.Theyre doing harm to the schools beauty.To change Theyre doing harm to the schools beauty.To change the current situation,Im going to put up posters and the current situation,Im goi
28、ng to put up posters and signs telling the students to take care of environment.signs telling the students to take care of environment.Im also going to give short speeches to arouse their Im also going to give short speeches to arouse their awareness of protecting the schools environment.awareness o
29、f protecting the schools environment.Im truly thankful to my school for providing me with Im truly thankful to my school for providing me with much knowledge and teaching me the concept of much knowledge and teaching me the concept of love,kindness,honesty and so on.I want to do love,kindness,honest
30、y and so on.I want to do something meaningful for it.With the above-something meaningful for it.With the above-mentioned efforts,Im sure that my school will mentioned efforts,Im sure that my school will become a more beautiful place.become a more beautiful place.（10中考）Write at least 60 words about t
31、he topic“I am proud of myself”.（以“我为自己感到傲慢”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Use the following points as reference.（以下内容仅供参考）What kind of person are you?What makes you proud of yourself?(Give an example/examples.)Why are you proud of yourself?n nI am a sunny boy filled with confidence and the joy of life.As a
32、 music lover,playing the piano makes me proud of myself.Every day,I often play the piano for a while to relax myself.Also,my family members quite enjoy the wonderful melodies.I believe music is of great power.And playing the piano enables me to learn the joy of life.So,Im proud of myself because I b
33、ring happiness to my family as well as myself by playing the piano.n nIm a person who is always confident and ready to try anything new.However,swimming has once been a nightmare for me after drowning in the water.When I finally ruled the water around my body,I felt rather proud of myself.At the beg
34、inning of the swimming test,I took a deep breath and then jumped into the water.Fears disappeared when I went straight ahead.I reached the wall in the end full of joy and pride.Since then,I realized the meaning of the saying,Nothing ventured,nothing gained!Confidence plays an important role in daily
35、 life.Confidence plays an important role in daily life.I am a confident person and I am always proud of myself.First of all,I feel glad that I often learn to.First of all,I feel glad that I often learn to share with others.Thats because it not only enables share with others.Thats because it not only
36、 enables me to get more ideas and experience from others,but me to get more ideas and experience from others,but also shows that I have the ability and willing to help also shows that I have the ability and willing to help others.As a famous saying goes,one flower makes others.As a famous saying goe
37、s,one flower makes no garden.Learning to share with others makes me no garden.Learning to share with others makes me have more friends.Second,I am always ready to care have more friends.Second,I am always ready to care for others.When my classmates have problems they for others.When my classmates ha
38、ve problems they cant solve,I often do them a favour.cant solve,I often do them a favour.All these make me proud of myself.n nI used to be a shy girl,but after that experience,I have become more and more confident.It was my turn to give a speech to the whole class on how to learn English well.At fir
39、st,I was afraid that I nearly wanted to ask the teacher if I could give up the chance.However,I told myself that I should give myself a challenge because it was really necessary for a person to be confident.I prepared a lot and encouraged myself much.At last,to my great happiness,the speech was perf
40、ectly successful.Im proud of myself because Im no longer a shy girl.Ive changed myself to a girl who is full of confidence.返回3+1 的综合写作模式的综合写作模式3=对三个问题的完整回答对三个问题的完整回答对某个重点问题的扩写对某个重点问题的扩写点睛之句的点题和收尾点睛之句的点题和收尾+=1=The most important things in my lifen nUse the following points as a guide:Use the followin
41、g points as a guide:n nWhat are the important things in your life?n nWhich one do you think is the most important thing?n nWhy do you think so?Students Writing There are many important things in my life,such as my eyesight,my subjects.Now,the most important thing in my life is the test in June.If I
42、do well in it,I will study in a good school,but if I do badly in it,I will study in a school that I dont want.Its very important,I think.(62字)点评：内容空泛，选材俗套，结构不严谨，缺乏立意 深刻的中心愿思的表达。举例:Q1:What are the important things in your life?Q2:Which do you think is the most important thing?Q3:Why do you think so?l
43、earning to be brave,learning to be confident are the important things in my life.I think learning to share is the most important.It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others.It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others.“Share”is another word for“exchange with each othe
44、r”.There are always many important things that may happen in our life.Among them,As a famous saying goes“One flower makes no garden”,so we should learn to share with others.(共87字)“Share”is another word for“exchange with Share”is another word for“exchange with each other”.It enables us to get more id
45、eas each other”.It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others.It also shows that or experience from others.It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others.we have the ability and will to help others.There are always many important things that may happen in our life.As a fa
46、mous saying goes“One flower makes no garden”,so we should learn to share with others.Life is just like a painting,colorful and meaningful.That can help us to have more friends.In my opinion,learning to share is a kind of “life skills”.Among them,learning to be brave,learning to be confident are the
47、important things in my life.I think learning to share is the most important.Why do I think so?(119)留意留意审题要切中题意 描述要条理清晰 表达要语句通顺 书写要清晰规范 身份要确定避开 字数要力争达到各类题材作文各类题材作文 Mr Li teaches us geography.He is tall and thin.Though Mr Li is in his fifties,he is still very active.He likes traveling very much and of
48、ten shows us the photos of many historical interests he took during his trips.He has a great knowledge in geography,and it makes his lessons very interesting.Most of us are fond of his lessons,because they let us know the world better.Besides,he is always friendly and kind to us all.In a word,Mr Li
49、is my favorite teacher.As we all know,the Great Wall is located in North China.It is 6,700 kilometers long and thus known as the“10,000-li Great Wall”.The building of the wall went on for more than 2,000 years,from 700 BC to 1,400 AD.Thousands of people lost their lives while building it.As one of t
50、he seven wonders in the world,the Great Wall was used to protect the Chinese nation from the enemies in history.It is our pride and shows the wisdom of the Chinese people.n nMy hobby is collecting stamps.I took up this hobby on my twelfth birthday when my uncle gave me some wonderful stamps as a pre