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1、读后续写-戒指（导学案）本文主要讲述酒吧店主乐于助人，当得知一名女顾客在酒吧丢失了放在钱包的结婚戒指后，他不惜一切，帮助她找回戒指。文本特点：文本的在开头与结尾部分别强调Jimmy 为人，为后文的续写铺垫。本节课的设计思路：基于考生表述平白如流水账，可读性不强的特点，我们认为：学生的欠缺的能力是最好的突破口，也是最好的备考点。基于此，解决方法可采取3S主题续写：培养学生抓伏笔，进行自问自答式Self Question & Answer主题写作；同时兼顾相似考题Similar的连接对比以及小情节构建上增添可读性的细节描写Show。本文的高潮部分在哪里？高潮小段落截取并请翻译At this poi
2、nt, most people would probably stop and regretfully tell the lady that the wallet couldnt be found anymore.这时，大多数人可能会停下脚步，遗憾地告诉这位女士，钱包已经找不到了。话题：助人教学步骤1231. 解读续写文本2. 抓伏笔自问式思路启发3. 优秀学生作文及下水作文4. 小情节构建及可读性细节描写5. 相似“助人”类续写考题对比好句子翻译学案1.尽管看起来难以置信，吉米还是不遗余力地雇佣潜水员彻底搜查水域，直到找到丢失的钱包。2.他真的很认真地想找到这位女士的钱包，并完成寻找戒指的任
3、务。3.没过多久，他就抬起头，得意洋洋地把钱包向空中挥舞。4.就连站在旁边的小偷也惊讶地用双手捂住嘴。5.当他发现钱包并最终找到吉米时，他绝望地想作为一个无家可归的人生存下来。6.这个少年对这个善良的人只有感激之情，这激励了他在生活中做得更好。7.小偷被感动去见一个陌生人，为了纠正他的错误，他会做更多的事。类似考题读后续写：广东金太阳高三联考以貌取人Sam is a brave policeman who often comes across dangerous situations. However, when he was young, he experienced a funny sto
4、ry during his work.That was a nice day, and Sam worked at the police station as usual. A rich and beautiful woman carrying a purse drove to work. She parked her car in the street outside her office. When she finished her work that afternoon, she got into her car quickly and started driving home as u
5、sual. Suddenly, she noticed a yellow car at her back, whose driver was a man with a very ugly look. To her surprise, when she turned left, the yellow car also turned left. When she turned right, the yellow car turned right, too. When she stopped at the traffic lights, the yellow car stopped behind h
6、er.Gradually, fear came into her heart. What should she do? How could she get rid of this terrible man? To deal with this situation, she decided to drive quickly to the police station where Sam worked. However, she was even more surprised when she saw the car still followed her and stopped behind he
7、r. “How dare he follow me here? she said to herself. She could feel her heart beating faster than ever. At that time, Sam was standing on duty outside the police station. Seeing Sam wearing a police uniform, she was more than delighted that she would be safe.At once, she jumped out of her car and ra
8、n to Sam without any delay. Pointing at the man inside the car, she said a bad man was following her and asked Sam to arrest him. To find what was happening, Sam walked towards the man who had stopped his car near the womans.But what shocked Sam was that the man didnt try to escape when he saw him.
9、Instead, the man looked relieved. Seconds later, the man walked towards the woman and Sam.Para1: The man just smiled and started to tell the truth.Para2: Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.2016年10月浙江新高考考试说明英语写作样题读后续写A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way
10、to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It loo
11、ks like youve got a problem,” Arthur said.“Im afraid so. Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suit cases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble, you could help me
12、 get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. Id be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud no
13、ise of an alarm.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery (抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked
14、 each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suit case and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought.
15、 “The suitcase! She thinks Im the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.Paragraph 1:As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.学科网（北京）股份有限公司