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1、14 写景素材储备与写作指导 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略(全国通用版)相关话题素材储备必备词汇1.位置描写be located in/lie in位于inside .以内before/in front of .腼outside在.之外anywhere任何地方local本地的top最高处/顶部bottom底部near靠近around .近everywhere到处somewhere某处2.季节、天气cold寒冷的warm温暖的cool凉爽的snowy下雪的sunny晴朗的rainy下雨的windy有风的cloudy多云的spring春天summer夏天autumn/fall秋天wint
2、er冬天3景物river河流lake湖泊stream河;溪forest森林path小道road公路house房bridge桥building建筑物mountain山rainbow彩虹leaf树叶4对景物的描写或评价green绿色的misty有雾的;朦胧的vast广阔的dusty多尘的tiny极小的beautiful美丽的purple紫色的golden金色的必备句型1.总体介绍景物的特点(1)Beijing is more beautiful in autumn than in other seasons.秋天的北京比其他季节的北京更美丽。(2) It is big and very moder
3、n with a population of.它又大又现代,.有.人口。(3) . is one of the most famous mountains in China.是中国的名山之一。(4) . is famous for its beautiful scenery in the world.因.它的美丽景色而在世界闻名。(5). is a/an . with a long history. .是一个历史悠久.2.从一定的顺序或角度进行具体的描写(1)It is getting warmer and warmer.天气变得越来越暖和了。(2) Flowers are opening e
4、verywhere.鲜花正到处盛开。(3) The golden leaves 6ll from the trees onto the ground. 金黄色的落叶掉落在地上。(4) Standing on the top . you can have a whole view of.站.的顶部,你可以看到.的全景。(5) It is more interesting to travel the island by boat.乘船游览这个小岛会更有趣。3谈论对景物的总体评价或感受(1) The travelers were attracted by the beauty of the land
5、scapes.游客们被美丽的景色所吸引。(2) Beauty is not only in the nature but also in people s mind.美丽不仅存在于自然中,而且存在于人们的心中。(3) I hope you will enjoy the scenes here.我希望你能喜欢这里的景色。(4) By visiting the places of interest, I greatly broaden my horizons通过游览名胜古迹,我大大地开拓了我的视野。写景话题作文写作指导在写景的时候,我们从以下三部分着手:1.总体介绍景物的特点。文章的开头部分,可以
6、就景物的位置、总体特征等进行排写,但注意叙述时要尽量简洁,不用展开描写,只需抓住总的特征即可。2.从一定的顺序或角度进行具体的描写。为了将景物最具有代表性的特点展示给读者,一定要充分发挥想象力,挖掘出景物的特征。此外,在描写的过程中,要循一定的顺序或选择一定的角度, 这样才能使文章的条理清晰,描述的效果可以事半功倍。3.谈论对景物的总体评价或感受。在此处,可以叙述一下社会大众对最物的评价,也可以自己发表观点,表达一下对景物的感受。相关话题写作指导示例题目根据中文提示,以“My Hometown"为题,写篇不少于80词的短文,介绍你的家乡。提示:1.我出生于山东一一个美丽的乡村。那里的
7、河流非常干净,村里有很多绿树。2.我们的乡村里大约有1000人。他们都非常慈样和友好。3.秋天是收获的季节,许多农民在田地里干农活。4. 我们的家乡因为苹果而出名。秋天,许多商人来这里买苹果。5.我非常喜欢我的家乡。思路导航第1步:例文审题主体人称题目要求介绍"My Hometown", 故主体人称应为第一一人称下主体时态题目里要求描述的是“我”的家乡的般状态, 故主体时态用般现在时。写作贴士题目给出的要点多达5点,写作时要根据要点,适当组合,进行分段:注意词数要求,不得少于80词。第2步:列提纲(1)总体概述家乡的情况;(2)详细描述家乡的特点;(3)表达对家乡的感情。第
8、3步:参考词句(1)village; river; clean; tree.(2) kind; friendly ; harvest; fields; businessman.(3) hometown.第4步:连句成篇My HometownI was born in a beautiful village in Shandong Province. The rivers there are very clean. There are also lots of trees in the village.In our village, there are about 1,000 people. T
9、hey are all very kind and friendly. Autumn is a harvest season. At that time, most of the farmers do the farm work in the fields. Our hometown is famous for apples. In autumn, a lot of businessmen come here to buy apples.This is my hometown, and | love my hometown very much. Do you like it?参考译文我的家乡我
10、出生于山东省一个美丽的小山村。那里的河流非常干净。小山村里还有很多树。我们的村里大约有1000人。他们都非常慈祥和友好。秋天是一个收获的季节。在那时,大多数农民在田地里干农活。我们的家乡因苹果而出名。秋天,有很多商人来这里买苹果。这就是我的家乡,我非常喜欢我的家乡。你喜欢它吗?相关话题范文解析假如你是李华,你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线” (The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动,你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇短文。1. 风情线总览(the Yellow River, run through
11、 the city of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River);2. 聚焦景观(Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(水车), many parks);3. 休闲娱乐(fly kites, play chess);4. 特色游览(go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子),water bus)。要求:1. 80词左右; 2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,书写规范;内容上可适度发挥。注意:不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。 _【写作思路】这是一篇话题
12、作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下美丽的黄河风情线。主要从风情线总览、聚焦景观、休闲娱乐和特色游览四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。【参考范文】The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist LineThe Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what sc
13、enic spots the beautiful Yellow River has? Let me tell you! The Yellow River flows through Lanzhou. There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the picturesque Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheel and so on
14、. There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus. The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you!【名师点评】【高分句型一】There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. 有一条著名的公路叫做滨河路,它沿着黄河行驶。句子which runs along the Yellow River.是由which引导的定语从句。【高分句型二】There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. 有很多休闲娱乐的地方,如放风筝、下棋等。该句话用there be结构来写。