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1、热点15 诚信 诚信无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：诚信。【预测题目】（一）你的学校正在开展“诚信”教育，英语俱乐部为配合这次活动将举行一次演讲比赛请根据如表所提示的要点，写一篇演讲稿朋友李雷爱踢足球、玩游戏、考试舞弊学习退步，不被信任你的观点诚信考试，独立完成作业说实话，做诚实孩子（请补充一点）要求：1）短文应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2）词数90左右，不包含已给出句子的词数；3）演讲稿中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名参考词汇：cheat in the exam； fall behind （落后）Hello，ever
2、yone!Its a great honor to give a speech here_Thats allThank you for listening!【参考范文】Hello，everyone! Its a great honor to give a speech hereId like to tell you something about my friend Li Lei. He likes playing football and he also likes computer games. To get good grades, he often cheats in the exam
3、s. As a result, he gradually falls behind other students. Whats worse, he isnt trusted by others. so I think we should be honest in the exams. And its important to do homework by ourselves. We ought to tell the truth and be honest students. If we promise to do something, wed better try our best to k
4、eep the promise.Thats allThank you for listening!【解析】试题分析：这是一篇表格式的给材料作文。表格中所给的材料非常详细，我们需要做的就是用正确的语言把他们表达出来。在写作中注意连词及过渡语句的使用以使上下文连贯。所给词汇在文章中要适当使用，最后观点的发挥要适当。写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。短文中的过渡句Id like to tell you something about my friend Li Lei.及so I think we should be honest in the exams.使文章紧凑合理浑然一体。
5、在短文中一些短语，句式的应用给文章增色，如：To get good grades,；As a result；Whats worse；And its important to do homework by ourselves.等等。在平时的学习中我们要注意归纳总结这些好的短语和句式，以便于我们在写作中能灵活运用。（二）诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Da ming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Ling ling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Ling ling很生气，并且不愿接受Da ming
6、的道歉。请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Da ming一些建议。注意：1、词数80100；2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名； 4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. _Promise
7、 is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【参考范文】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my frie
8、nd Daming had a date with his friend Ling ling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Ling ling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Ling lings anger, but also made her lose trust
9、 in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Da ming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美
10、德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。【点睛】文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。（一）2019年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友
11、善”的价值准则。某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示问题： What should you do in your daily life? Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. _【参考范文】As a middle student, I can do a lot to le
12、arn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted t
13、o everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.【解析】题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；m
14、ore and more beautiful。句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。（二）习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务，作为初中毕业生，你有什么人生规划？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。. 提示： 1. 作为中国人而自豪：过去，我国优秀的传统文化影响了世界：今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大，许多科技世界领先； 2. 为实现“
15、中国梦”而奋斗：学会做一个懂感恩、守规矩、善良诚信的人；不畏难，努力学习知识、提高能力，将来成为一名 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及生个人身份的相关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数80100，开头结尾已给出（不计入词数）。Hello,everyone!_That's all. Thank you!【参考范文】Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the
16、 world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Change 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.As a teenager, we should do as follows to
17、 achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. Whats more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. I
18、n addition, wed better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire
19、 us.That's all. Thank you!【解析】本文属于材料作文，谈论祖国的伟大强盛以及为实现中国梦我们应该做的努力。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比较级and比较级, devote oneself to doing, in order that, try ones best以及first o
20、f all, whats more, in addition和last but not least等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有
21、把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式（三）民无信不立。诚信是一个道德范畴，是公民的第二个“身份证”，是日常行为中诚实和正式交流的信用的统称。某英文网站正在开展以“诚信”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你自己讲诚信的一次经历和感受，主要内容包括：你经历了一件什么事情体现出了你的诚信，你有何收获及感受。提示词语：realize, honesty, violate the principle（违背原则）, vir
22、tue（美德）, lose提示问题：1. Whats your experience about honesty?2. What can you learn from it?Honesty is gold. It means telling the truth and being fair._ _【参考范文】Honesty is gold. It means telling the truth and being fair.Last year, when I took the math exam, I had difficulty working out a problem with a hi
23、gh score, which could influence my ranking in class. Feeling anxious, I found the paper of the student in front of me could be seen clearly. I was excited and about to copy it. However, I realized it was shameful to cheat in exams. It violated the principle of honesty, so I stopped.Although I had th
24、e thought to copy the students answers, I am still an upright student. Honesty, which is the traditional virtue of Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious. Never lose it and be an honest person.【解析】1.题干解读：细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：（1）本文要求讲述讲诚信的一次经历并说明感受，属于夹叙夹说明的文体；（2）讲述自身的经历时用一般过去时，说明感受时
25、用一般现在时；（3）文中阐述自己的行为时用第一人称，讲述别人的行为时可用第三人称；（4）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；不得出现真实校名和姓名，词数不少于50。2.例文解读：诚信要点提示素材串联开头：开门见山，引出话题诚信的内涵（已给出）正文：讲述经历1.参加考试，有一道题解答不出来（have difficulty working out a problem）2.焦急万分，突然发现可以抄袭（anxious, be about to copy）3.抄袭他人的试卷是违背原则的，及时停止了此行为，意识到自己的错误（violate the principle of honesty, stop）结尾：表达
26、自己的感受1.依然是一名正直的学生（an upright student）2.诚信是中华民族的传统美德，保证了社会的和谐（traditional virtue of the Chinese people）3.高分亮点：短语：work out，in front of，make sth. adj.。句型：（1）Last year, when I took the math exam, I had difficulty working out a problem with a high score, which could influence my ranking in class.（have di
27、fficulty (in) doing sth.句型、非限制性定语从句）（2）However, I realized it was shameful to cheat in exams.（宾语从句、it作形式主语）（3）Although I had the thought to copy the student's answers, I am still an upright student.（Although引导让步状语从句）【点睛】错因分析：类别失分原因审题1.审题不清，偏离主题。本文要求写关于自己诚信的经历及感受，考生所写事件不能体现出“诚信”这一主题或者没有写出自己的收获；2.
28、文章体裁、时态、人称判断有误。在讲述审题经历时考生未使用一般过去时，在谈论自己的感悟时未使用一般现在时，且在讲述自身经历时未使用第一人称；3.所写内容未涵盖所给的要点提示或所写要点不全，提示问题必须在文章中全部体现。结构1.层次不清，结构混乱。本文要求写出自己的经历及感受，并且已给出开头句总结诚实是金，解释了诚实的含义，所以这就要求考生在第二段写出自己的经历来证明第一段诚实的含义，再引出第三段中自己的感想，从而总结全文并且再次点明主题；2.句子之间没有逻辑性和条理性。叙述事件没有按事情发展的顺序来写，逻辑混乱。语法1.句子结构不完整，缺少成分，考生在写句子时忘记主语、谓语或宾语；2.名词单复数
29、混用、动词短语搭配错误等。语法比如考生想使用have difficulty（in）doing sth.，但误写为have difficult（in）doing sth.。拼写1.单词拼写错误；2.大小写错误；拼写3.标点符号错误；4.字迹潦草、卷面不整洁等。词数词数需要超过50词，考生所写作文词数不够词数或超过卷面所要求的词数太多。（四）“不信不立，不诚不行”，诚实守信是中华民族的传统美德，我们在日常生活中也应该诚实待人，言而有信。某英文网站正在开展以“诚信”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及这样做的意义。提示词语：honest, believ
30、e, promise, happy, virtue (美德)提示问题 What do you do in your daily life? Why do you do so?Its one of our traditional virtues to be honest. _【参考范文】Its one of our traditional virtues to be honest. Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. Its really important for us t
31、o be honest in our life.As for me, I consider honesty to be one of the most important rules that should be followed. I never tell a lie to others, no matter the difficulty. If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth, even if it brings me some trouble. Once I make a promise,
32、I will try my best to keep it.Being honest helps us have more confidence in people around us. All in all, honesty makes the world more trustworthy and a better place to live in.【解析】本篇作文，考生需要从两个方面作答，列举日常生活中自己能够诚实守信做的事情、谈谈这么做的意义。首先，告知诚实守信的重要性，“Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encourage
33、d by Chinese people. Its really important for us to be honest in our life.”然后，列举出日常生活中自己能诚实守信做的事情，“I never tell a lie to others, no matter the difficulty. If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth, even if it brings me some trouble. Once I make a promise, I will try my best
34、 to keep it.”最后，谈谈自己这么做的意义，“Being honest helps us have more confidence in people around us. All in all, honesty makes the world more trustworthy and a better place to live in.”【详解】本文是一篇话题作文，某英文网站正在开展以“诚信”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及这样做的意义。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表
35、达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以便使文章更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。1. Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. 2. Its really important for us to be honest in our life.3. I never tell a lie to others, no matter th
36、e difficulty.4. If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth, even if it brings me some trouble. 5. Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it.6. Being honest helps us have more confidence in people around us. 7. All in all, honesty makes the world more trustworthy and a better place to live in.8. Honesty is gold. It means telling the truth and being fair.9. By doing so, our w