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1、2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二）一：原文重现Devi looked through the observation window at the kids below, all waiting in line to get into the pool. She turned to her mother with a furious frown on her face. “Mom, theyre all little kids! Im 15 already! This is ridiculous!”“I know, Devi,” replied her mother, “but youre
2、a beginner, too, and you have to start somewhere!” Devi had never been to a swimming lesson in her life. Between schoolwork and helping on her grandfathers farm, she hadnt had time for lessons. The closest swimming pool Devi had been to was the alligator pool her mother bought her when she was five.
3、 Now that Devi was older, her mother had found a new jo b in the city, and Devi faced a new challengeschool field trips to the local pool.The first day that Devi went with her class to the pool, she had no idea what she was in for. What could be so difficult about swimming? Devi confidently slipped
4、into the water and held onto the side of the pool, expecting to be able to touch the bottom with her feet. But when Devi let go of the side of the pool, she slipped under the waterthe whole pool was one big deep end! Devi threw her arm toward the side of the pool and grabbed the ledge (池壁), out of b
5、reath. “I really cant swim! Everyones going to laugh at me!” she thought to herself in a panic.On the next field trip to the pool, Devi sat on the side on a bench, paralyzed with fear. She huddled with a towel over her shoulders, too embarrassed to try again. When she came home, her mother noticed r
6、ight away that Devi was upset. “Honey, Ive signed you up for Angelas swimming lessons at the local pool. Soon youll learn how to swim just like everyone else,” she assured Devi, showing photos of Angela with her prize-winning students.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2. 每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1Then came the t
7、ime for Devi to take her first lesson. _Paragraph 2Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself._二：文本解析【分析】本文讲述了黛维因为学业和在农场帮助祖父而一直没有时间去游泳，妈妈给黛维在当地找了游泳池学习游泳，黛维初次学习时候感觉很自信，但是真正进入到水里的时候发现游泳比想象中难，不小心呛水的黛维觉得自己很尴尬，恐惧去学游泳，这时黛维的母亲给她报了一个游泳班。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“接着，轮到黛维上她的第一节课了。”可知，第一段描写黛维去上游泳
8、课的情况。由第二段首句内容“不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐的地方，做了自我介绍”可知，第二段可描写安吉拉老师和黛维的相处。2.续写线索：怀疑课程看别人跳水感到尴尬和老师交流尝试游泳喜欢上游泳3.词汇激活 行为类.和：together with /as well as .路过：pass by/go past.鼓励：cheer on/encourage情绪类.感知：feel more at ease/feel relaxed；astonished/surprised/shocked；in amazement/in surprise.积极：fearless /brave特色句型1. She dragged
9、her feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful.（由连接词whether引导同位语从句）2. Devi spotted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean.（由关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）三：续写单句训练1. 然后是黛维上她的第一堂课的时候了。 2. 她拖着
10、脚走到泳池边坐下来，怀疑上课是否有帮助。 3. 环顾四周，黛维发现她的教练穿过游泳池，还有那些孩子们跳进了水里，就像鱼一样跳进了海里。 4. 她惊奇地看着她。 5. 尽管黛维很敏感，但当一个小女孩走过，要求她不要害怕时，她的脸上很快就泛起了一丝尴尬的红晕。 6. 多么令人尴尬啊！她垂着头。 7. 不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐着的地方，介绍了自己。 8. 黛维惊讶地得知安吉拉直到20岁才学过游泳。 9. 深受鼓舞后，德维现在重新获得了希望。 10. 她在安吉拉的陪伴下第二次进入游泳池，几个快乐的孩子漂浮在附近为她加油。 11. 黛维开始感到更放松，她的动作不那么僵硬，呼吸更平静。 12. 黛维怀着感激
11、的心意识到她可能不是一个无所畏惧的游泳运动员，但她肯定会很开心。 四：佳作展现Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson. 21教育网_ Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself. 21·cn·jy·com_五：课后练笔阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。2·1·c·n·j·yIt was a Saturda
12、y afternoon.The color of the sky was changing,first light gray,then dark gray,and finally dark and dense.The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind.It began to rain cats and dogs.Soon,the road was filled with puddles from the rain.On such a stormy afternoon,my mother
13、took my five-year-old brother,Christopher,and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper.“So many toys,”the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color,“that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”Christopher and I couldnt have been more excited.We ran across the p
14、arking lot,through the cold and biting rain,as fast as our little legs could carry us.We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella,which never worked when she wanted it to.“Christine!Take care of your young brother!”Mother shouted at the top of her voice. 【来源：21·世纪
15、83;教育·网】“Christine!Im going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)!Theres a new pirate ship I want,and I have four dollars!Maybe I can buy it!”Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly.I only half heard him.I took a right turn and,to my wide-eyed delight,found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比) W
16、orld. 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside.I jumped at the noise,dropping the doll to the floor.The lights flickered(闪烁) once and died,covering everything in a blanket of blackn
17、ess.Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds,casting frightening shadows on my mind.Paragraph 1:“Oh no,”I thought,“Wheres Christopher?” _Paragraph 2:“Christine,Im here.” _六：单句训练1) 哦，不，”我想，“克里斯托弗在哪儿？” 2) 我害怕，吓得呆住了，需要见到我哥哥，拥抱他，确保他很好。 3) 我的胃难受了，正在翻转进去
18、。 4) 我在黑暗的走廊上跑来跑去，恐慌充满了我的内心，使我呼吸困难。 5) 我一边看到糖果，一边被玩具绊倒，一边疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。 6) 虽然我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。 7) 沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来，但我继续跑着。 8) “克里斯汀，我在这里。 9) “兴奋让我喘住了呼吸在黑暗的乐高走廊里，我找到了克里斯托弗。 10) 他独自站着，一动不动，紧紧地抓着海盗船。 11) 我开始欣慰地大叫起来，伸出双臂搂住他，紧紧地拥抱着他。 12) 他拥抱我说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你就能找到我。 13) ”然后，我把我的手抓住我的手，我们去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地
19、在商店里寻找我们。 参考答案三：单句训练1. Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson. 21世纪教育网版权所有2. She dragged her feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful. www.21-cn-3. Scanning around, Devi spotted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids wh
20、o jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean. 21·世纪*教育网4. She watched in amazement. 5. Envious as Devi was, a flush of embarrassment soon crept to her cheeks when a little girl passed by, asking her not to be scared. 21*cnjy*com6. How embarrassing! She hung her head. 7. Soon Angela
21、came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself.【版权所有：21教育】8. Devi was astonished to be made aware that Angela had never learned swimming until she was 20. 21教育名师原创作品9. Greatly inspired, Devi now regained hope. 10. She entered the pool a second time in the company of Angela, several cheerful kids
22、 floating near to cheer her on. 11. Devi began to feel more at ease, her movement less stiff and her breath more even. 12. With a grateful heart, Devi realized that she might not be a fearless swimmer, but she would sure have fun trying.六：单句训练1 “Oh no,”I thought,“Wheres Christopher?”2 Scared,I was f
23、rozen to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.3 My stomach twisted and turned inside.4 I ran up and down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.5 I knocked into displays of candy and tripp
24、ed over toys,all the while frantically calling my brothers name.21*cnjy*com6 Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.7 Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.8 “Christine,Im here.”9 Excitement took my breath awaythere in the dark Lego aisle I found Christop
25、her.10 He was standing alone,perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.11 I began to cry out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.12 He hugged me back,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”www-2-1-cnjy-com13 Then,I took his h
26、and in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us. 2-1-c-n-j-y四：佳作展现（一）Then came the time for Devi to take her first lesson. She dragged her feet to the side of the pool and sat down, in doubt whether lessons would be helpful. Scanning around, Devi sp
27、otted her instructor across the pool, together with the little kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean. She watched in amazement. Envious as Devi was, a flush of embarrassment soon crept to her cheeks when a little girl passed by, asking her not to be scared. How embarrassing
28、! She hung her head. 【出处：21教育名师】Soon Angela came over to where Devi sat and introduced herself. Devi was astonished to be made aware that Angela had never learned swimming until she was 20. Greatly inspired, Devi now regained hope. She entered the pool a second time in the company of Angela, several
29、 cheerful kids floating near to cheer her on. Devi began to feel more at ease, her movement less stiff and her breath more even. With a grateful heart, Devi realized that she might not be a fearless swimmer, but she would sure have fun trying.（二）“Oh no,”I thought,“Wheres Christopher?”Scared,I was fr
30、ozen to the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,to hug and make certain he was all right.My stomach twisted and turned inside.I ran up and down the aisles through the blackness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over
31、 toys,all the while frantically calling my brothers name.Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.“Christine,Im here.”Excitement took my breath awaythere in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.He was standing alone,
32、perfectly still,clutching tightly to the pirate ship set.I began to cry out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.He hugged me back,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.”Then,I took his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.