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1、考向42 读后续写之情感情绪细节刻画情感细节包括人物的感受、情绪，是续写中必不可少的细节描写之一。合理的情感情绪描写与刻画，可以凸显人物的性格、人际关系的特征、以及烘托故事高潮进而突出语篇主题等。因此，合理的情感情绪刻画在续写中是非常必要的。以下就是读后续写过程中，刻画人物情感情绪的四个方法：一、直接利用恰当的表情感的形容词、副词或名词、介词短语等表达人物的喜怒哀乐例如：快乐(happy, delighted, pleased, joyful, enjoyable等)、吃惊(surprised, shocked, amazed, astonished)等形容词或介词短语(to one'
2、s surprise, in relief, in panic)等描述人物的情绪。二、利用环境细节“融情于景”烘托人物的情感例如：Della finished her crying and dried her face. She stood by the window and looked out unhappily at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.(小说麦琪的礼物中利用3个形容词gray，体现了Della的难受和不开心。)三、利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪例如：下面文章片段中的句子：With no p
3、ath to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping_to_see_the_lake. (动作描写，说明Jane满怀期望) To her surprise, (利用介词短语体现Jane的吃惊) she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. (寓情于景，体现Jane的无望失落) She suddenl
4、y realized that she was lost.四、利用高级句式和修饰成分细化情感细节例如：“Absolutely！” replied John, excitement shinning in his eyes. (利用名词excitement和独立主格结构，描写John的兴奋激动)约翰答道，“一定”，他两眼兴奋地闪闪发光。So angry was the bear that it roared and smacked the fence violently. (so . that倒装句型)熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏。You can not imagine how f
5、rightened we were at the approach of the polar bear. (how引导的宾语从句，介词短语)你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们多么的恐惧。【策略微练】.按要求补全下面动作、情感和心理细节的句子1简又害怕又无助，靠着一棵树坐下，歇歇疼痛的双脚。 , Jane sat against a tree, . (形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语)2“如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我现在就不会被困在这里了，”她想，悔恨的泪水模糊了她的眼睛。“ ，” she thought to herself . (虚拟语气的倒装句， with复合结构)3她挣扎着站起来寻找那个湖。 4她
6、精疲力竭，她爬上一块大石头，躺了下来，很快睡着了。 (so . that状语从句，一连串的动作)5简醒来时天已经亮了。 6尽管很沮丧，她还是决定继续前进。 , she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. (让步状语从句) , she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. (状语从句的省略句)7随着小溪的声音，她向水边走去。 , she walked toward the water. (非谓语动词作状语)8突然，她注意到远处有一个熟悉的身影向她走来。 (非谓语动词作宾补).将以上补全后的各句合并为
7、短文，注意恰当的衔接过渡 参考答案.1Scared and helpless, Jane sat against a tree, resting her aching feet. (形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语)2“Had I not quarreled with Tom, I wouldn't have been trapped here，” she thought to herself with regretful tears clouding her eyes. (虚拟语气的倒装句， with复合结构)3She struggled to her feet to search fo
8、r the lake.4She became so exhausted that she climbed up onto a big rock, lay down and fell fast asleep. (so . that状语从句，一连串的动作)5It was daybreak when Jane woke up.6Although she was depressed, she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. (让步状语从句)Although depressed, she decided to continue forcing her
9、 way ahead. (状语从句的省略句)7Following the sound of the stream, she walked toward the water. (非谓语动词作状语)8Suddenly she noticed a familiar figure at a distance coming towards her. (非谓语动词作宾补).参考范文Scared and helpless, Jane sat against a tree, resting her aching feet. “Had I not quarreled with Tom, I wouldn'
10、;t have been trapped here，” she thought to herself with regretful tears clouding her eyes. She struggled to her feet to search for the lake. However, she became so exhausted that she climbed up onto a big rock, lay down and fell fast asleep. It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Although depressed, she
11、decided to continue forcing her way ahead. Following the sound of the stream, she walked toward the water. Suddenly she noticed a familiar figure at a distance coming towards her.【典例示例】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Sam Watts was a 37yearold fisherman living and workin
12、g in Canada. One day, Sam planned to head out into the Pacific at 9 am and work straight through until 5pm the next day. Joining Sam would be his crewman, 24yearold Tom Buck.Although Sam had been warned that a storm was coming, there was little that would keep him from going. As he saile
13、d through the waves some 120 kilometers from land, Sam let out his threekilometerlong fishing line. The storm was gaining strength on land but had yet to reach the men far offshore. That changed around 1 am. Waves rocked the small boat, which began to turn sideways like an amusement park
14、 ride. “Get us out of here！” Tom screamed to Sam. “Let's go back！”With the winds and waves kicking up, the boat began to fill with water. Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together, but the high waves filled the boat with water, forcing Sam to make a hard decision. He cut the line, l
15、osing thousands of dollars' worth of equipment and fish in the sea. He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours away. Sam then called his boss, William Fox, to report his position.With dawn coming, Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizon. He was figuring out a route through th
16、e dangerous waters when suddenly the motor stopped. “I couldn't believe it，” Sam said. “We were 24 kilometers off the coast, and the motor died.” High waves raised and dropped the boat, sending the men crashing into the sides. “William, William！”Sam yelled into the radio. “If you're coming t
17、o get me, come now！”“We're coming！” William shouted back.Paragraph 1Shortly after, the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea. Paragraph 2The next morning, Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance. 【写作分析】文章主旨：原文叙述Sam Watts和船员 Tom Buck去海上
18、捕鱼时，突遇风暴，在危险之际Sam Watts做出了艰难的抉择：割断鱼线，损失了价值数千万美元的设备和鱼。虽然和老板报告了自己的位置，然而Sam Watts和Tom Buck船上的发动机熄火。 续写部分应叙述他们被救出的过程。续写第一段：根据首句关键信息“the radio died”和“driving the men farther out to sea”可知该段应叙述Sam和Tom在发动机熄火和无线电死机的情况下，被困海上面临死亡。 此时应用心理活动描写，描写他们的恐惧以及Sam 后悔的心情， 后悔自己不顾风暴的警告固执地出海的决定。 续写第二段：根据首句关键信息“a fishing bo
19、at”结合原文中提到到海上寻找他们的William可知，该段应叙述他们最终获救。该段的叙述可利用动作描写显示他们见到来营救他们的船只时高兴的心情。【参考范文】Paragraph 1Shortly after, the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea. Fear seized Tom and he was trembling, for the water had not only wet his clothes but also ruin
20、ed his hope of surviving. Sam murmured, “I was warned that a storm was coming. Had it not been for my stubbornness, we would not have lost our equipment and had to face such a terrible situation.” His voice gradually disappeared as waves rocked the boat, making terrifying sounds. After what seemed t
21、o be a century, a great darkness fell. Exhausted, they fell asleep.Paragraph 2The next morning, Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance. He excitedly woke Tom up. Tom rubbed his eyes and stared. Once he caught sight of the boat, he was also lit up. The chance of surviving made them regain strengt
22、h and they began to shout loudly. The boat saw them and they went aboard. On the boat they met William and other crew members. Although they had lost thousands of dollars, they came to understand the value of hope.【检测训练】1. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Toby the cat was in a small cardboard bo
23、x marked “free kittens” when Daisy met him and took him home. And from that moment on, he loved boxes.He slept in hatboxes, gift boxes and takeout food boxes. He slept in Daisys sock drawer, if she left it open. When he was a kitten, the size of a small loaf of bread, he had slept in shoeboxes. But
24、he grew and grew, and now he was a lot bigger than a loaf of bread. When he tried to sleep in a shoebox, his furry stomach hung over the sides.Toby didnt just sit in boxes, though. Sometimes he sat in flowerpots, or laundry baskets.Daisy had a beautiful dollhouse for her birthday, a dark green three
25、-story house with lots of furniture. Daisy loved it. So did Toby. He liked to push the furniture out of all the rooms and sit in the bedroom on the second floor.One day Daisy came home from school, and she couldnt find Toby. He wasnt in the dollhouse, or her sock drawer, even though shed forgotten t
26、o close it.“Mom, Dad!” Daisy wailed. “Toby is gone!”Daisys mom looked in the attic. There were boxes and dust bunnies, and even a mouse that had escaped Tobys notice, but no Toby.Daisys dad looked in the kitchen cabinets. There were pots and pans, and cans of soup, but no Toby.Suddenly“I found him!”
27、 Daisy cried.The big cat was inside her moms new glass vase, and he didnt look happy at all. Daisy tipped the vase over gently and tried to pull him out, but Toby just howled.“Well have to break the vase to get him out!” Daisy cried.Now her mom didnt look happy. It was a beautiful vase.“No,” said he
28、r dad. “If we break it, the glass pieces might hurt Toby. Maybe we can put butter on the inside of the vase and slide him out, like the time you got that ring stuck on your finger.”注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Immediately, Daisy fetched some butter._Paragraph 2:Soon they were a
29、t the vet's office. _【参考范文】Immediately, Daisy fetched some butter. Her mom buttered as much of the inside of the vase as she could reach, and her dad tried to pull the unhappy cat out. To their disappointment, Toby put his paws against the sides of the vase in protest. Now they had an angry, but
30、tery cat stuck in a vase. They were almost desperate when suddenly Daisy's dad hit upon an idea. “We could call the vet,” he suggested.Soon they were at the vet's office. Seeing an annoyed, frightened, buttery cat in a vase, the vet almost laughed out loud but she managed to clear her throat
31、 instead. “Possibly one of the stranger things I've seen,” she admitted. She had Daisy and her parents stay in the waiting room while she gave Toby a shot to make him sleepy. An hour later, a very sleepy and washed Toby was brought out to his anxious family. Not only Toby, but the vase, still in
32、 one piece!【写作分析】本文以故事为线索展开，讲述了小猫Toby被主人Daisy收养后，它喜欢待在各种盒子里，有时还会坐在花盆、平底锅或洗衣篮里，妈妈建议给小猫建一个自己的猫舍，可是Daisy没有在意，有一天Daisy发现Toby不见了，原来它蜷缩在花瓶里面，肥胖的身体几乎卡住了。【写作步骤】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Daisy立刻拿来一些黄油。”可知，第一段可描写Daisy一家人为救出小猫所遇到的困难和做出的努力，最终决定向兽医求助。由第二段首句内容“很快他们就到了兽医办公室。”可知，第二段可描写在兽医的帮助下，Toby得救了，花瓶也完好无损。2.续写线索：把猫拉出来猫不出来
33、向兽医求助等待猫出来了3.词汇激活行为类突然想出：hit upon /came up with建议：suggested /advised给注射：givea shot / givean injection情绪类生气的：angry / annoyed绝望的：desperate / in despair【写作步亮点】高分句型1. Seeing an annoyed, frightened, buttery cat in a vase, the vet almost laughed out loud but she managed to clear her throat instead.（现在分词短语
34、作状语）高分句型2. “Possibly one of the stranger things I've seen,” she admitted.（省略关系代词that的限制性定语从句）2. 阅读下面材料，根据所给内容进行续写,使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was deep into the night many years ago. The rain just came pouring down outside. An elderly man and his wife entered the lobby (大厅)of a small hotel in Philadelphia, US
35、A. Trying to get out of the rain, the couple approached the front desk hoping to get a room to stay in for the night.“Could you possibly give us a room here?” the husband asked.The clerk, a friendly young man with a winning smile, looked at the couple and explained that there were three conferences
36、in the town. "All of our rooms are taken," the clerk said. “But I cant send a nice couple like you out into the rain at one o'clock at night. Would you perhaps be willing to sleep in my room? It's not exactly a suite, but it will be good enough to make you comfortable for the night
37、.”When the couple declined, the young man pressed on. "Don't worry about me. I'll make out just fine," the clerk told them. So the couple agreed.As he paid his bill the next morning, the elderly man said to the clerk, “You are the kind of manager who should be the boss of the best
38、hotel. Maybe someday I'll build one for you.”The clerk looked at them and smiled. The three of them had a good laugh. As they drove away, the elderly couple agreed that the helpful clerk was indeed exceptional, as finding people who are both friendly and helpful isn't easy.Three years passed
39、. The clerk had almost forgotten the thing when he received a letter from the elderly man. It recalled that stormy night, when he offered his kind help to the elderly couple. In the envelope, there was a round-trip ticket to New York, and a letter asking the young man to pay them a visit. The young man decided to set out immediately. 注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:“Do you still remember my promise years ago?” the elderly man said to the young man. _