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1、中考英语书面表达高分策略,让过程更有方法!,80-100字数要求,话题符合中学生的生活 开放性人文性传播正能量,能根据提示，要求整合信息,特点,话题作文，图表作文，应用作文,中考作文评分标准,第四档(1215分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。第三档(811分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。第二档(47分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。第一档(03分）漏
2、掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。,高分作文的几大要素：,紧扣主题。 覆盖所有的要点。 词汇使用正确。 句式结构丰富。 有效运用连词。 段落清晰，层次分明。,圈出要点，提炼关键,分清层次，首尾呼应,具体步骤,复核要点，不要遗漏,根据中英，审题扣题,理顺词句，巧用连词,真题解析1,安全对每个人都很重要。写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。提示： 1. 体育锻炼 2. 上下楼梯 3. 交朋结友 4. 食品卫生要求： 1. 语句通顺，内容连贯； 2短文适当发挥包含要点。 3词数：80100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。,安全对每个人都很重要
3、。写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。,提示： 1. 体育锻炼 2. 上下楼梯 3. 交朋结友 4. 食品卫生,体育锻炼(take care, get injured)We should take care not to get injured. We have many sports activities.,如何丰富句式？,上下楼（there are, many students, crowded, push ） Second, There are too many students at school. Our hallways are too crowded. When we go upst
4、airs and downstairs, dont push.,交友：（must, be friendly, get on well with,） We must be friendly.We should get on well with others.We cant quarrel or fight.,健康食品：should , eat healthy food, stay away from junk food We should eat more healthy food, but stay away from junk food.,第四 分清层次，首尾呼应,1.开头已给出，已点题！（
5、不计入字数？） 总2.中间为文章的4个方面：（小层次，可以用顺序连词）运动（2-3句话）：小心，避免受伤上下楼（2-3句话）：人多，走廊上不打闹 分交友（2-3句话）：友好，好好相处食品健康（2-3句话）：多健康食品，远离垃圾食品。3.结尾点题：记住以上要点很重要！ 总,第五步 复核要点 不要遗漏,真题解析,针对社会上人们对90后年轻人的某些评论，英语课上同学们与老师就此展开了讨论。作为一名90后的中学生，请参考下面的提示词写一篇英语发言稿，展示真实的你。要求：1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。 2. 不能出现真实校名、姓名相关信息。 3. 不少于80词。开头和结尾不计数。,参考词汇：sel
6、fish(自私的) ; Internet; believe in oneself; high ideals(崇高理想); in style, creativeAs we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. We are growing up. We are sure to do better.,As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. selfish父母宠爱给予一切导致变得自私Parents love us very much. Th
7、ey do everything for us. It makes us selfish.调整为：Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us. It makes us become selfish.,第三步，理顺，连词！,调整为：Usually we spend so much timeon the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others.,Internet:关注网络缺乏交流We usually spend
8、 too much time on theInternet. So we have less time to communicate.,自然的过渡：有缺点也有优点。There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well. 有理想相信自己不言放弃！We teenagers have high ideals. We always believe in ourselves and never say “give up”.,应调整为：New ideas can be easily accepted by us. You can find ou
9、t that creative thinking is full of our life. We also know how to respect your parents and teachers. We are growing up. We are sure to do better.,接受新事物，思维创新尊重父母老师We can accept new ideas. Our thinking is creative. We must respect parents and teachers.,开头父母宠爱给予一切，导致：,变得自私关注网络缺乏交流,90后的普遍缺点,自然的过渡：有缺点也有优
10、点。 相信自己，不言放弃 接受新事物，思维创新 字数不够补充尊重父母老师结尾：我们长大会做的更好 呼应主题,优点是：有理想！分层次说明！,第四步：首尾呼应,As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us. It makes us become selfish. Usually we spend so much time on the Internet that w
11、e have less time to communicate with others.,There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well. We teenagers have high ideals. We always believe in ourselves and never say give up.Meanwhile we are in style. New ideas can be easily accepted by us. You can find out that creative thinking is fu
12、ll of our life. We also know how to respect your parents and teachers. We are growing up. We are sure to do better.,练一练：,在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：父母、老师、同学、朋友等等。学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助那么你对“友善待人”是怎样理解的呢？谈谈你的看法。要求：1. 文中不可出现真实人名与校名。2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。3. 词数：80100。短文开头部分已给出,不计入总词数 。,参考词汇：respect, unders
13、tand, help, relationship, contribute to(有助于), get on well with,There is no doubt that a friendly relationship is of great importance in our life._,在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：父母、老师、同学、朋友等等。学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助那么你对“友善待人”是怎样理解的呢？谈谈你的看法。,扣紧主题：友善待人围绕以下几个方面展开：尊重他人相互理解提供帮助,参考词汇：respect, understand, hel
14、p, relationship, contribute to(有助于), get on well with,如何围绕提示和参考词汇展开？How to get on wellwith?4个why?,尊重他人respect others, contribute to ，good relationships,相互理解understand each other,提供帮助help others,补充一点bring happiness,第三步？,第四步？,还有，应帮助有困难的人，因为每个人都会遇到麻烦。,首先，尊重他人是必要的，人们常说，尊重他人即尊重自己。,另外，我们应理解他人，尽管不同人有不同观点。,
15、我们应学会如何与他人友好相处？开头,同时，帮助他人也会让我们收获快乐。,总之，友善待人让我们的生活变得更美好！结尾,中间,已给There is no doubt that a friendly relationship is of great importance in our life. We should learn how to get on well with others. First of all, respecting others is very necessary. As people often say, respecting others means respecting
16、 ourselves, which can contribute to good relationships. Besides, we should understand each other. Different people have their own views, which can cause disagreements. Whats more, its a pleasure to offer help to those who are in trouble. Everyone can meet with ups and downs. Meanwhile, helping other
17、s can also bring us happiness. In a word, being kind and friendly is just like bright sunlight. Only by doing so will we live better and better.,第五步？,1.慎用谚语名言。2.尽量用新目标课本中的佳句。3.避免Chinglish!4.句子成分的缺失。5.认真检查拼写，语法错误。6.试卷草稿，答题卡上认真书写！,复核时应避免的问题,1.词汇短语“攻关秘笈” 音型义巧妙记忆 加强中考课标词汇、短语 坚持阅读，积累高频词汇、短语、佳句2.有效的句式教学认清
18、“五大”基本句式中考相关话题必备佳句做真题积攒实战经验3. “多样”的句式变换学会使用感叹句/定语从句/宾语从句/比较级/最高级/被动语等复合句式合并简单句,如何提升英语写作能力？,提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！,方式1：适当使用感叹句！I had a busy day!What a busy but meaningful day I had!Zongzi is very delicious!How delicious I cooked!,提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！,方式2：适当使用定语从句连接简单句！Messi is my idol. He plays football best in
19、the world.Messi who plays football best in the world is my idol .,提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！,方式3：适当使用状语从句连接简单句！ I was afraid to do that.Because I made lots of mistakes. I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face.,提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！,方式4：适当使用比较级最高级！I try more times, our life will be happy.The more I try, the happier our life will be.,提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！,方式5：适当使用宾语从句！We must obey the rules. Our room will become comfortable.I hope all of us can obey these rules and ourroom can become more comfortable.,I believe you can make it!,