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1、,Rescue in a bottle,Rescue in a bottle,They were rescued!,A key prop,A possible ending : It was the bottle that rescued them!,recalls,Design an ending echoing the theme.,The ending,An ending , echoing the title or the beginning ,coherences to the above context and reaffirms the integrity of the whol
2、e story.,1,预设结局,Correspond to the theme,前情提示,Background of the story,The elements of a story: who/ what/ when/ where /how,2,Rescue in a Bottle Curtis Whitson had rafted down the Arroyo Seco, a river in central California, several times before. This year, Curtis Whitson knew the water-fall was coming
3、. He figured he would get out of his raft into the shallow water, get down the rocks along ropes on either side of the falls, and continue on his way, as he had on a previous trip. But this year was different. Heavy snow and spring rains had turned the usually manageable falls into something fierce.
4、 And this year, instead of his friends, Whitsons companions were his girlfriend, Krystal Ramirez, and his 13-year-old son, Hunter. As the three of them approached the falls late in the afternoon of the third day of their camping trip, Whitson could tell from the increasing roar of water in the narro
5、wing canyon(峡谷) that they were in serious trouble. There was no way theyd be able to get down the rocks as planned. “The water was just roaring through there with tremendous force,” recalls Whitson, 45. They had no smart phone service, and they hadnt seen a single person in the past three days. And
6、Whitson knew that theyd be sharing the ground there with rattlesnakes and mountain lions. As he was thinking what to do, Whitson hit on a bit of luck-he heard voices coming from the other side of the falls. He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out. “We have to get these people a
7、 message,” Whitson thought. He grabbed a stick and pulled out his pocketknife to carve “Help” in it. Then he tied a rope to it so the people would know it wasnt just any stick. He tried throwing it over the falls, but it floated away in the wrong direction. “Weve got to do something!” Whitson yelled
8、 to his son. “Have we got anything else?” Then he spotted his water bottle. Whitson grabbed it and carved “Help!”on it. Ramirez also reminded him that he had a pen and paper in his backpack. Whitson knew it was a slim hope. But he wrote “6-15 19:00 We are stuck here the waterfall. Get help please” a
9、nd pushed the note into the bottle. This time, his throw over the waterfall was perfect. “All right, thats all we can do,” Whitson told Hunter.,who,when,where,what,Problem:,There was no way theyd be able to get down the rocks as planned.,Self-rescue,He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drow
10、ned him out.,He grabbed a stick ,carve “Help” .but it floated away in the wrong direction.,Wait for rescue,in vain,his water bottle,carved “HELP”; his throw over the waterfall was perfect.,It was a slim hope.,A problem-solving story,How,The tone of the story is based on the recall of Whitson and mos
11、t of part focuses on the actions of Whitson. So the following passage needs to be consistent with that feature, avoiding too much depiction of emotion.,Focus on the development of plot and language characteristics.,3,剧情创作,plot& language use,Change in mood,Basic elements,A night of early spring,A
12、t the beach in the valley,The family +a helicopter,How the three muddled through the nightA helicopter came and went.,During the day time,In the valley,The family +a helicopter + rescuers,How were they rescued?How did they feel?,tired &anxious?,Scared?,Cheerful?,Desperate ? hopeful?,exciting,hap
13、py,exhausted,grateful,A twist in the story plot,The final endng,Break big paragraphs into small steps according to the development.,Paragraph 1: It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where theyd had lunch.,Paragraph 2: The next morning, the helicopter returned.,The helicopter circled
14、around and left,the darkness of night &roaring water,cause,effect,Whitson comforted, “Itll be back”,They were going to spend a night there.,They heard the noises of a helicopter.,They cried for help but in vain.,The helicopter spotted them.,cause,The rescue workers came to help.,The three entere
15、d the helicopter.,They found the bottle saved them.,The worker told them about the bottle./ They noticed the bottle.,To Tell A story,The rescue was in vain.,To tell a good story,Visualize your paragraph with detailed description of the surroundings ,actions and emotions.,Paragraph 1: It took 30 minu
16、tes to get back upstream to the beach where theyd had lunch.,They were going to spend a night there.,Persons state,Setting description,They heard the noises of a helicopter.,Persons state,A helicopter,They cried for help but in vain.,Persons state,Setting description,Tired, scared,Happy , excited,Ha
17、ppy, desperate,Thenaturalenvironment in the text:,Heavy snow and spring rains had turned the usually manageable falls into something fierce. the increasing roar of water in the narrowing canyon.no way theyd be able to get down the rocksWhitson knew that theyd be sharing the ground there with rattles
18、nakes and mountain lions.but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out.,Drown:1. to be louder than other sounds so that you cannot hear themClapping drowned the speakers words for a moment.2.to get drunk in order to forget your problemsLucy drowned her sorrows in wine.,Thenaturalenvironment,Det
19、ails related to a helicopter,Thenaturalenvironment :,the darkness of night &roaring water,There weretwohelicopterscirclingaround.Ahelicopterhoveredoverheadasoneofthegangmadearunfor it.那伙人中的一个逃跑的时候，一架直升飞机在头顶上空盘旋。The helicopter circled about the area, looking for a proper landing field.直升飞机在洪水地区上空
20、盘旋，想找一处适合降落的地方。Overhead, the chopper roared the big blades churned the air.直升飞机在头顶上轰响着，巨大的浆叶搅动着空气。,Essential words: circle, hover, land,Details related to a helicopter,theblacknessofthenight,Thenight was pressing up,withdarknessfallingunder the cover of night,As the night wore on/deepened , exhausti
21、on overcame their discomfort.,appreciatetheromanticbeauty ofbeachdimlight of night. X,Choose the description in accord with the persons emotion.,Paragraph 1: It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where theyd had lunch._,They were going to spend a night there.,Tired as they were, they
22、had to strengthen up to spend a night there.,They heard the noises of a helicopter.,They heard a helicopter hovering above them.,They cried for help but in vain.,Wild with joy, Whitson, Ramirez, and Hunter flew out the tent, waving and yelling.,Ending 1:The helicopter circled around and got back.,th
23、e darkness of night &roaring water,Unfortunately, the darkness and the roaring water drowned everything.,Whitson comforted, “Itll be back”,Whitson consoled his son and girlfriend, “Itll be back.”,Ending2 :The nightbroodedover the motionlesshillsandmelted the noise of the helicopter .,After light
24、ing up a camp fire, the three huddled in their tent on such a chilly night.,However , late in the night , they heard a helicopter hovering just above them.,To end with the description of a scene.To work subtext into the characters dialogue.,To tell a good story,Paragraph 2: The next morning, the hel
25、icopter returned.,The helicopter spotted them.,Persons state,Setting description,The rescue workers came to help.,Persons state,actions,The three entered the helicopter.,Persons state,Setting description,Tired, happy,Happy , excited,Happy, grateful,The rescue helicopter made another sweep over the b
26、ay./The helicopter rose into the air.Wesattight andwaitedto berescued.Survivors waited for the rescue boats, dazed and frightened. Guidedbyperiodicshaftsoflight,rescueteamsmade theirwaythroughthe pitch-blackas theysearched forsurvivors.在忽明忽暗的竖井灯光的指引下，援救队伍在黑暗的废墟中开辟道路寻找幸存者。,Details related to a helico
27、pter,To arrange the details according to the time order and the characters relationship.,How were they rescued by the helicopter in such a valley?,Paragraph 2: The next morning, the helicopter returned. _,The helicopter spotted them.,After the three were spotted, the helicopter lowered a crew member
28、 on a cable,The rescue workers came to help.,The three entered the helicopter.,The worker told them about the bottle./ They noticed the bottle.,The rescue worker got to the ground and helped the three get saved.,The rescuers lifted Hunter, Ramirez, and Whitson out of the mountain one by one.,To arra
29、nge the details according to the time order and the characters relationship.,They reached the helicopter safely.,It was not long before they were taken to safety.,Just at that time Whitson learned that a hiker spotted the bottle with the message asking for help.,Ending 1:It was exactly that bottle t
30、hat saved them all!,Happy, grateful,Exhausted but delighted, they thanked many times and chatted with the rescuers.,That was a moment of pure happiness as the three chatted with the rescue workers.,Ending 2: “This is too good to be true!” Whitson exclaimed.,Success is the accumulation of little efforts day by day.,5,语料素材,Click and download,恐惧，害怕,高兴，兴奋,