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1、低碳生活Low-carbon life is a healthy and green lifestyle. And it is good for everyone.To help with the environment, I often ride a bike or walk to school instead of taking a car. I never waste a lot of water everywhere. I recycle some useful things like recycling paper. When I leave the room, I will tur
2、n off the lights. I think its my duty to do things for a low-carbon life. So I will go on doing them. In order to live the low-carbon life, it s time for us to protect our environment. I think we should begin with the everyday things. There are some suggestions about how to live the low-carbon life.
3、 First, when we go out, we can ride a bike, walk and take the bus as much as possible. Second, we can recycle a lot of books as long as possible. In the end, wed better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better plac
4、e.点评:本次作文直接点明话题：低碳生活对人们是有意的。主题论证通过两个层次：以作者本人的实际行动来说明自己践行“低碳生活”的理念；接着发出倡议，号召大家从三个交通方式、循环利用、以及日常穿着三个方面来过低碳生活。整个文章显得思路清晰、目的明确，论证有力。Im very happy to write to you. Now everyone wants to have a low-carbon life. However, what should we do?Today, the environment pollution is more and more serious. And peopl
5、es health has been greatly affected. So we must protect the environment for having a low-carbon life. First, we can walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, we should try to use things that can be recycled. Next, we shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere. And I dont forget to
6、turn off the light when we leave the room. We should also plant more trees. I think its my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a difference to the environment. So I suggest we should use things as long as possible. Dont use plastic bags any more.In order to have
7、 a low-carbon and green life, lets try our best to look after the environment. If we do them, I believe our world will be more and more beautiful and our life will be healthier and healthier.点评：本次作文开头自然，有序衔接。在主题论证阶段，层层递进。First, besides, and, I think , so等连词使用，使文章结构更加紧凑。最后总结重申低碳生活，突出了主题。These years,
8、we always find a word, “low-carbon life” in the newspaper. But do you know how to make a low-carbon life? Here are some suggestions:At school, I always reuse paper. At home, I often watch TV or play computer games as less as I can. When I leave a room, I never forget to turn off the light. In the mo
9、rning, I ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I think its my duty to live a low-carbon life. If everyone does something like me, people can find that the environment around them has become better and better. In fact, everyone can make a difference in protecting environment.If everyone does something for the environment, I will have a more beautiful earth.点评： 本文开头比较自然，有中文作文的意境。引出话题顺理成章。从at school at home leave a room go to school 四个方面来叙述自己的低碳生活。加上一些主从复合句的运用，使本文增色不少。2