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1、-英语作文模板11-第 67 页现象解释模板试题八一、题目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic：The Impact of Pesticides on Public Health and the Environment. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
2、1随着城市的扩展与日益拥挤，广大农村也成了各种农药的肆虐之所； 2农药对人们健康及生态环境的影响和表现；3我的看法。二、类型：现象解释型三、方法提示：1审题：第一步：结合提纲推断题意：这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步：根据题目给出的提纲可知文章应包含如下三个基本部分：现象部分：随着城市的扩展与日益拥挤，广大农村也成了各种农药的肆虐之所；解释部分：农药对人们健康及生态环境的影响和表现；表明作者态度部分：我的看法。完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。2选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。3结合题意套用模板：现象解释四级作文模板。四、范文与点评1.模板一：It is true that _. Nowad
3、ays,_. What impresses us most is _. Of course, _.There is also a growing concern over _. The main reason for this is _. What is more, _. As a result, _.Considering all these reasons, personally, _. On the one hand, _. (11) On the other hand, _. (12) In a word, _.2.范文范文点评The Impact of Pesticides on P
4、ublic Health and the EnvironmentIt is true that over the past thirty years or so the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. Nowadays while towns and cities have become larger and overcrowded due to the growing urban population, the countrys
5、ide has also been affected by the large-scale use of pesticides. What impresses us most is that there are more than 1 million human pesticide poisonings and over 20,000 deaths each year according to a WHO report. Of course, if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and
6、 more people would become victims.There is also a growing concern over the contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. The main reason for this is that fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them.
7、What is more, large use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. As a result, the people, domestic animals, fish, birds, plants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered.Considering all these reasons, personally, despite some beneficial effects on th
8、e agricultural industry, large use of pesticides would do considerable harm to our health, wildlife and the environment. On the one hand, the killing of insects has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology, because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds. (11) On the othe
9、r hand, research indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations（异变） and congenital defects（先天缺陷）. (12) In a word, the farmers should limit the use of pesticides to the minimum and we all should preserve the environment both for our children and ourselves.首句通过det
10、eriorate指出一个与人们生活密切相关的问题：在某些领域，科技进步恶化了人们的生活质量。使用连词while点出城市和农村的现存问题，对首句进一步具体化。世卫组织提供的确切数据令人信服地表明问题之严重。urgent measures点明了问题的迫切性起到了承上启下的作用;该句运用了虚拟语气。分词结构sprayed with 与定语从句the people who 用得不错，做到了句型的多样化。endanger进一步阐明的严重后果。表让步关系的介词despite令作者的观点更加客观全面。，(11)从生态及人类健康两方面再次总结出农药的危害。(12)总结全文，提出呼吁。3.模板二：Nowaday
11、s, wherever you go, _. As is known to all, _. In a word,_.There are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. First, _. Second, _. And consequently, _. And finally, _.In fact, _ in the long run. Besides, _. (11) And whats more, _. (12) Therefore
12、, lets remember that _.4.范文范文点评The impact of pesticides on public health and the environmentNowadays, wherever you go, you will find that the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. As is known to all, while towns and cities have become larg
13、er and overcrowded due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also been affected by the large-scale use of pesticides. In a word, if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people would become victims.There are plenty of contributing causes among
14、which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. First, fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. Second, large use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. And consequently, the people, domestic animals,
15、 fish, birds, plants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered. And finally, the killing of insects by pesticides has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds.In fact, it pays to limit the use of
16、 pesticides to the minimum in the long run, and this would do good to both public health and the environment. Besides, research indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations and congenital defects. (11) And whats more, the killing of insects by pesticides will
17、break the balance in the nature. (12) Therefore, lets remember that the impact of pesticides on our health, wildlife and the environment has become so urgent a problem that it should not be ignored any more. 首句通过deteriorate指出一个与人们生活密切相关的问题：在某些领域，科技进步恶化了人们的生活质量。使用连词while点出城市和农村的现存问题，对首句进一步具体化。urgent
18、measures点明了问题的迫切性起到了承上启下的作用;该句中运用了虚拟语气。分词结构sprayed with 与定语从句the people who 用得不错，做到了句型的多样化。endanger进一步阐明的严重后果。loss of balance in the ecology点明了农药对环境的最终危害。limit the use与do good to 表明了作者的观点。，(11)从人类健康及生态两方面再次总结出农药的危害。(12)总结全文，呼吁人们关注农药对人类健康及环境的影响。5.模板三： As is known to all, _. For one thing,_. For anoth
19、er,_. It is obvious that _.There is an increasing concern over _. First of all, _. In addition, _. Therefore, _.As far as I am concerned, _. As we all know, _. (11) Furthermore, _. (12) In a word, _.6.范文The impact of pesticides on public health and the environmentAs is known to all, over the past th
20、irty years or so the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. For one thing, nowadays, while towns and cities have become larger and overcrowded due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also been affected by the large-scale us
21、e of pesticides. For another, there are more than 1 million human pesticide poisonings and over 20,000 deaths each year according to a WHO report. It is obvious that if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people would become victims.There is an increasing c
22、oncern over the contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. First of all, fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. In addition, large use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface
23、water. Therefore, the people, domestic animals, fish, birds, plants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered.As far as I am concerned, despite some beneficial effects on the agricultural industry, large use of pesticides would do considerable harm to our health, wildlif
24、e and the environment. As we all know, the killing of insects has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology, because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds. (11) Furthermore, research indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations and
25、 congenital defects. (12) In a word, the farmers should limit the use of pesticides to the minimum and we all should preserve the environment both for our children and ourselves.试题九一、题目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic： College Students Jo
26、b-hunting. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.随着大学的不断扩招，越来越多的毕业生体会到了找工作的压力；2.大学生就业难的原因；3.我的看法。二、类型：现象解释型三、方法提示：1.审题：第一步：结合提纲推断题意：这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步：根据题目给出的提纲可知文章应包含如下三个基本部分：现象部分：随着大学的不断扩招，越来越多的毕业生体会到了找工作的压力；解释部分：大学生就业难的原因；表明作
27、者态度部分：我的看法。完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。2.选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。3.结合题意套用模板：现象解释四级作文模板。四、范文与点评1.模板一：It is true that _. Nowadays,_. What impresses us most is _. Of course, _.There is also a growing concern over _. The main reason for this is _. What is more, _. As a result, _.Considering all these reasons, personal
28、ly, _. On the one hand, _. (11) On the other hand, _. (12) In a word, _.2.范文College Students Job-huntingIt is true that with 2.12 million graduates from various universities flooding into the job markets this year, the employment situation for college students is no longer as optimistic as before.No
29、wadays, college students employment has been a hot topic in China.What impresses us most is that a survey conducted recently suggests that about 80 percent of college students listed pressure in job-hunting as their top headache. Of course, many graduates fail to get a satisfactory job and have to l
30、ower their expectations.There is also a growing concern over the various reasons for this phenomenon. The main reason for this is that since Chinese colleges and universities enlarged their enrollment in 1999, the number of college graduates in China has been on the steady rise for the past four yea
31、rs and the supply of graduates is greater than the demand of the market. What is more, most graduates have too high expectations for their future jobs. As a result, a lot of graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs than go to small cities, let alone the countryside.Consideri
32、ng all these reasons, personally, if both colleges and students take measures, the gap between the employers demands and college students expectations could be shortened. On the one hand, the universities employment centers should play a vital role in collecting job information through different cha
33、nnels and offering comprehensive job-hunting services to graduates. (11) On the other hand, the students should improve themselves and develop special skills to meet the needs of the market. (12) In a word, it calls for the joint effort of the whole society to help graduates to cope with the intense
34、 competition in the job market. 3.模板二：Nowadays, wherever you go, _. As is known to all, _. In a word, _.There are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. First, _. Second, _. And consequently, _. And finally, _.In fact, _ in the long run. Besi
35、des, _. (11) And whats more, _. (12) Therefore, lets remember that _. 4.范文College Students Job-huntingNowadays, wherever you go, you will find college students employment has been a hot topic in China. As is known to all, with 2.12 million graduates from various universities flooding into the job ma
36、rkets this year, the employment situation for college students is no longer as optimistic as before. In a word, there is a growing concern over the great pressure college graduates face in job-hunting.There are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth ment
37、ioning. First, since Chinese colleges and universities enlarged their enrollment in 1999, the number of college graduates in China has been on the steady rise for the past four years and the supply of graduates is greater than the demand of the market. Second, most graduates have too high expectatio
38、ns for their future jobs. And consequently, a lot of graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs than go to small cities, let alone the countryside. And finally, many employers also raise their standards when recruiting new staff.In fact, if both colleges and students take meas
39、ures, the gap between the employers demands and college students expectations could be shortened in the long run. Besides, the universities employment centers should also play a vital role in collecting job information through different channels and offering comprehensive job-hunting services to gra
40、duates. (11) And whats more, the students should improve themselves and develop special skills to meet the needs of the market. (12) Therefore, lets remember that it calls for the joint effort of the whole society to help graduates to cope with the intense competition in the job market.5.模板三:As is k
41、nown to all, _. For one thing,_. For another,_. It is obvious that _.There is an increasing concern over _. First of all, _. In addition, _. Therefore, _.As far as I am concerned, _. As we all know, _. (11) Furthermore, _. (12) In a word, _.6.范文College Students Job-huntingAs is known to all, nowaday
42、s, college students employment has been a hot topic in China.For one thing, with 2.12 million graduates from various universities flooding into the job markets this year, the employment situation for college students is no longer as optimistic as before.For another, a survey conducted recently sugge
43、sts that about 80 percent of college students listed pressure in job-hunting as their top headache. It is obvious that many graduates fail to get a satisfactory job and have to lower their expectations.There is an increasing concern over the various reasons for this phenomenon. First of all, since C
44、hinese colleges and universities enlarged their enrollment in 1999, the number of college graduates in China has been on the steady rise for the past four years and the supply of graduates is greater than the demand of the market. In addition, most graduates have too high expectations for their futu
45、re jobs. Therefore, a lot of graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs than go to small cities, let alone the countryside. As far as I am concerned, if both colleges and students take measures, the gap between the employers demands and college students expectations could be shortened. As we all know, the universities employment centers should play a vital role in collecting job information through different channels and offering comprehensive job-hunting services to graduates. (11) Furthermore, the s