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1、英语专业四级考试写作评分标准(便条)便条的评分标准 通过以上的标准列表，我们可以看出，便条的写作主要注重的是格式、内容和语言。 考生需要做到格式正确、内容完整、表达得体、字数符合标准。下面我们以2010年的考题为例，对便条的评分标准进行具体的说明： Directions: Your good friend, John, is thinking of organizing an end-of-the-term party. Write him a note tellinghim that you like his idea and offer to help him. You have to b
2、e specific about how you can help him. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. 1格式：（占2分） 包括日期、称呼和结尾两部分，每部分完全正确得1分，出现任何错误都不得分。分数扣完为止，不倒扣。 1日期( Date)：1分 正确：April 17th, 2010; April 17,2010; April l7 2010; 17 April 2010; 4/17/2010; 17/4/2010 (Apr也可以，任何一个日期都可以) 位置在右上角或左上
3、角。 2、称呼( Heading)： 正确：(Dear)John:(，)缺标点或标点位置错都扣一分。 位置在日期下面一行左侧。 3结尾( Ending)： 正确：Yours sincerely,Yours，Sincerely yours，Sincerely,（大小写和标点不计） Mary（或其他人名） 没有Yours sincerely,Yours,Sincerely yours，Sincerely也可以，不扣分；但是凡是上述词拼写错误，都扣一分； 人名和结尾语必须分成上下两行写，写在一行扣一分； 人名必须写，不能写成xxx，否则扣一分。 II内容：（占2分） 本便条必须包括如下内容： 1赞成
4、想法 2具体的建议（至少写出一点）III. 语言：（占6分） 1慎重打5分和6分。 2如果格式内容得满分，但语言较差，语言分最多2分。 lv.评分总体要求： 1语言没有严重错误，格式正确，内容完整，语言得体优美，字数符合要求(50)，语言最多可给5分。 2。便条总字数（包括两部分格式在内）要求在50-60字；不到50或超过80字（9行或9行以上）扣1分（扣在语言里）。 3便条总分为IO分，6分为及格线。 4阅卷教师需要输入三部分的小分。Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following s
5、ituation:One of your foreign friends Ann plans to go sightseeing in China. You have just come back from a place which you think she might enjoy. Write a note to advise her to go to this place.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.范文April 09, 2010Dear Ann,I hear
6、d that you are planning to go sightseeing in China, and I want to recommend you a good place. I just came back from Lijiang, which has beautiful landscape, kind people and interesting custom. Two ethnic minorities are living there, so you can buy many goods made by them and in the riverside bars you
7、 can watch shows given by them. You will have a lot of fun there.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:You have heard that your friend, Jim, wishes to sell his bike. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and
8、 offering a price for it.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.范文April 12, 2010Dear Jim,I have heard that you wish to sell your bike. At the moment I just need a bike by which I can go to do my part-time job on the weekend. Would you please tell me what color y
9、our bike is and how well it works? And is it possible that I buy it at the cost of 50 yuan?Yours,Mary Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Your friend, Ann, just lost her grandmother, and is feeling very sad about it. Write a note to comfort her.Ma
10、rks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 范文April12, 2010Dear Ann,I am really sore to hear that your grandmother has passed away. I know your feeling because 2 years ago I lost my grandfather, and I was very sad at that time. Please pull yourself together and try to
11、 be strong. Your grandmother knew you loved her very much and that will be enough. She will rest in peace.Yours, Joa Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:You have heard that there will be a fancy ball next week on the campus, which you are very int
12、erested in. Write a note to ask your friend Mike, one of the organizers of the ball, for the details of the ball.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 范文April12, 2010Dear Mike,I have heard that there will be a fancy ball next week on the campus, and that you a
13、re one of the organizers. I am really interested in the fancy ball and want to attend it very much. Would you please tell me the time and place of the ball? And do I need an invitation to attend the ball?Yours,Joan Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situat
14、ion: Last Saturday you went to Mikes home as a house guest. He and his family gave you a warm welcome and made delicious food for you. Write him a note to thank him and his family.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.范文April 12, 2010Dear Mike,What a happy day
15、I have had last Saturday in your home! You and your family were most kind to me and gave me such warm welcomes. The food made by your mother was so delicious that I can hardly forget it. Thank you so much for having invited me! And please remember me to your family! Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a not
16、e of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:You just heard that your friend Danny has gained admittance to Tsinghua University as a graduate student. Write a note to him, offering him your sincere congratulations.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriatenes
17、s.范文April 12, 2010Dear Danny,I just heard that you had gained admittance to Tsinghua University as a graduate student. How happy I am to hear that! I know that its your dream to go to Tsinghua University for further study. You are always studying so hard that I believe your dream will come true one
18、day. Congratulations to you!Yours,Joan TEM4考试把写便条(notewriting)列入必考项目之一，在笔试成绩中虽只占10，却如同一面镜子，能反映出学生英语书面交际的能力。因此，要想写好TEM4便条，就必须掌握TEM4便条的基本要求，注意TEM4便条写作中常见的问题，以便对症下药，充分发挥自己的英文写作水平。英文书信有正式与非正式之分，英文便条为非正式书信。TEM4(英语专业四级考试)把写便条(notewriting)列入必考项目之一，其目的是按照(高等院校英语专业英语教学大纲)的要求，测试英语专业学生在基础阶段末用英语书面表达思想的能力。便条成绩在T
19、EM4笔试成绩中虽只占10，却如同一面镜子，能反映出学生英语书面交际的能力。有关英文便条写作，国内外学者多有论述(可参见宁有权、刘永军，1999；王崇义，1995；杨俊峰，1997；Aired，Brusaw&Oliu，2000； Bates，1990)。学者们认为，便条是一种简短信函，多使用非正式语体，它的形式比一般书信简单。例如，写便条的人与收便条的人的地址、称呼中“Dear一词、日期中的年份以及结尾套语(complimentary close，亦称结束语)，都可以省去；便条正文篇幅可小至一、两句话。可是，TEM4便条写作而言，并不完全像以上说的那样，它有一定的限制。写便条的要求是，“根据提
20、示写大约50-60的通知、便条、请贴等。要求格式正确，语言得体。”要求其实也给TEM4便条制定了评分标准。TEIM4便条的评分往往从格式、内容、语言、字数这四方面来考虑。因此，要想写好TEM4便条，就必须掌握TEM4便条的基本要求，注意TEM4便条写作中常见的问题，以便对症下药，充分发挥自己的英文写作水平。TEM4便条的基本要求(一) 格式(format)正确TEM4便条的格式与普通英文书信格式基本相同。具体来说，它应有日期(date)、称呼(salutation)、正文(body)及结尾(ending)，结尾包括结尾套语(complimentary close)和签名(signature)。
21、1日期指写便条的日期。英文便条与汉语便条的日期写的地方有别，前者的日期一般写在便条的右上角，偶尔也见写在便条的左上角，而后者的日期则写在便条的右下角，即写在签名的下面。英文日期与汉语日期的写法也有不同，汉语一般先写年，然后再写月、日，而英文则一般把年份写在月、日的后面。另外，英文日期的月、日与年之间通常用逗号隔开。例如，2008年4月21日通常写成April 21，2008或April 21 st，2008；当然，由于是非正式书信，也可以去掉年份，写成April 2l或April 21st(不过，这种写法，只是最近两年才被TEM4接受)，或者写成2142008或4212008。日期能说明便条的
22、有效度，没有日期，则会使人感到茫然。2称呼是指写便条人对收便条人的称谓，一般都以Dear开头，写在日期下一两行、留出左页边空白，顶格写。TEM4试卷中一般对写便条人与收便条人之间的关系作了提示。提示中的“you”指的是写便条人，提到的另一方便是收便条人。称呼时，一般只需在其名字前加Dear即可，如Dear Susan，Dear Tom。若此人有头衔(social title)，称呼时，便要保留其头衔，例如DrHerce，要称Dear DrPierce，不称Dear Pierce。如果提示中的另一方是以Mrs Wang或Mr Wang出现，称呼时也只需在其前加Dear便可，即称Dear Mrs
23、Wang或Dear Mr Wang，若只称Dear Wang则视为不妥。当对方为亲属时，在Dear 后面加上表示亲属关系大写的字眼即可，如Dear Grandpa，Dear Aunt。值得一提的是，近年来TEM4也接受不带Dear的称呼。称呼后面可用逗号，也可用冒号。3正文是写便条人要叙述或谈论的事情，是便条的主要组成部分。一般书信是在称呼下方隔两行处开始写正文。但就TEM4便条而言，一般在称呼的下一行开始写正文便可。正文的首行左边一般留约5个字母宽的空白，但也可顶格写。便条的内容简单、字数少，因此，正文一般只需写一段或两段。若有两段，第二段的首行应与第一段的首行对齐写。4结尾如前所述，结尾包
24、括结尾套语和签名。(1)结尾套语的位置一般是在正文最后一行的下面，从便条的中央部分开始，稍向右缩进。当然，若正文的开头是往左顶格写，此时的结尾套语也应往左顶格写。开头字母要大写，末尾要用逗号。结尾套语为写便条人对收便条人的谦称或客套以示礼貌，措辞的变化按照不同的关系而定。现分述如下： 致不熟悉的人，宜用较庄重的套语，如Yours sincerely，Sincerely yours，或Sincerely等。 对上级、长者，除了可用上述较庄重的套语，也可用Yours respectfully或Respectfully yours。 对一般朋友或熟人可用中提到的较庄重的套语，也可用Yours等较为随
25、便的套语。 对密友则采用较随便的套语为宜。例如，Yours，Love，With love，Best wishes，Best regards等等。 对亲属可用下列任何一种：Love，With love，All my love，Yours affectionately，Affectionately yours，Lovingly yours，Yours lovingly，Your loving son(Dad)；但对亲人，不宜用Sincerely yours由于TEM4便条写作一般是针对考生日常生活或学习相关的事情，写作的对象一般是其朋友、老师、熟人，因此，TEM4通常只接受Yours sincer
26、ely，Sincerely yours，Sincerely，或Yours这几种结尾套语。(2)签名即写便条人署名，位于结尾套语下，偏右。若结尾套语是往左顶格写，这时的署名也应往左顶格写。签名也由写便条人和收便条人的关系和亲疏程度而定。有时TEM4指定了写便条人的名字，签名时应采用那个名字。若无指定名字，考生也不宜用自己的真名。一般只需写名不写姓，但若用了较庄重的结尾套语，此时可签全名。(二)内容完整一般而言，一封理想的TEM4便条应包括以下三点：(1)写便条的原因；(2)要告诉的事情；(3)有关的希望、建议或要求等。便条写作提示的情况都是与人们日常生活或学习相关的事情。例如，对别人提供的帮助表
27、示感谢，邀请朋友参观书展，因不能准时赴约而表示道歉，把信息转告给朋友等。所提示的内容就是考生要表达的思想内容。思想内容有先后之分，要讲究其逻辑性，还得注意其完整性。生活中有些约定俗成的东西，写作时，应考虑这方面的因素。例如，写道歉信时，一般都先向对方表示歉意或内疚，同时说明发生疏忽、过失、或错误的原因，提出弥补的办法，这样有利于取得对方的谅解。现以近年一次英语专业四级考试便条写作为例加以说明：该提示是：Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher，Professor WangWrite him a n
28、ote of apology and make a request for another meetingYou should also suggest the time for the requested meting仔细阅读这一提示，你就会发现，第一句为第二旬所要求的道歉确定了内容；为了求得对方的谅解，获得另一次会面的机会，你就必须说明前次未能赴约见面的原因。因此，本便条的内容必须包括以下四项：(1)apologizing for failure to turn up for the appointment，(2)the reason for failure to turn up，(3)m
29、aking a request for another meeting，(4)suggesting the time for the requested meeting。其中(3)、(4)为提示中明确要求表达的内容，(1)、(2)则是根据道歉类书信特点而必须表达的内容。内容为便条写作的重头戏。写作时，切莫忽视提示中的任何信息，同时要关注交际中所需的相关信息。当然，在注意提示中的信息时，特别是首句，要注意用自己正确的语言来表达，不能完全抄提示，否则会扣分。(三)语言得体 内容和语言是一个统一体。内容抓住后，应以恰当的语言来表达。一般来说，便条的语言要简单明嘹，用词平易。当然，语言风格还应与情景一
30、致，不同的对象，所使用的语言应有所不同。相对来说，对上级、长者、不熟悉的人的语言较为正式，对亲朋好友的语言则较为随便。不过，不管对方是谁，行文中都应体现态度诚恳礼貌。 来源:考试大- 专四专八考(四)字数符合要求TEM4便条总字数(包括日期、称呼、结尾在内)的要求是约5060个字。尽管在这数字之间还可以少l0字，或多20字，即40-80字，不过，还是篇幅适中为好，以免因显得太短或太长而扣分。二TEM4便条写作中常见的问题便条写作中常见的问题主要表现在格式、内容、语言等方面。(一)格式方面1日期部分往往被漏掉，或漏掉日期中年与月、日之间的逗号，或在日期后面加点，或按汉语的顺序写成(如2006年4
31、月22日，写成April 22 2006；April 22，2006；200659；其正确形式请参照前文的相应部分)，或按汉语习惯把它写在签名的下面。2称呼未往左顶格写，或与日期同写一行；称呼后面打句号，或未打逗号或冒号。3把结尾套语和签名同写一行，或漏写结尾套语，或漏掉结尾套语后面的逗号。(二)内容方面便条的内容虽简单，但漏掉必须表达的内容的情况时有发生。例如，在前文提到的那次TEM4便条写作，考生对未赴约的原因应加以说明，可不少考生只写了如下相似内容的便条：I am very sorry for missing yesterdays appointment，so I do hope we
32、can make another oneSunday evening is convenient for meWhat about you?内容方面还因理解不透，或自立标准而导致交际不成功的情况也不鲜见。还是以前文提到的那次TEM4便条写作为例，评分取样的九份答卷中就有三份类似的例子。其中一份这样写道，“Imvery glad to receive your noteAbout Our appointment I think we can change another timeMaybe tomorrow，1 will be free and stay at home all dayIf yo
33、u are also free tomorrow ，you can callme at anytimeThen 1 will visit you”该提示要写一封简短的道歉信，而这位考生的答案却与此大相径庭，信中丝毫没有流露出道歉的意念。(三)语言方面便条中的语言错误可分为理解和表达两大类，主要体现在措辞、语法、拼写等方面。1措辞不当在这里既指一般遣词造句中出现的语言运用错误(performance erors)，又指因未按TEM4便条测试中提供的语境遣词造句而产生的语用失误(pragmatic failures)，还指因忽视对方的社会或文化背景差异而造成的语用失误。此类问题在TEM4便条写作中
34、相当严重。我们还是以前文提到的那次TEM4便条写作为例；鉴于篇幅，且举三例：(1) 在1 would appreciate you if you could have anothermeeting with me这句话中，appreciate后面的宾语不妥。只要细心的读者翻阅一下词典，就会发现appreciate(感谢)的英文释义是be grateful for(something)，若把句中的you改为it(代表后面那件事)，或把appreciate改为be grateful to，或把appreciate you改为be grateful，这句话就对了。(2)考生在便条的开头就对因病未能与
35、王教授约会表示道歉后，接着写道：Im anxious to make an appointment with you而根据上下文应该是，Im anxious to make another appointment withyou(与你另订一次约会)。(3)你(写便条人)自己因某种原因而没去赴约，况且约会的对象是你的老师，事后还要命令对方到你家来见你，或以命令的口吻表示要给你打电话。象“You must come to my home”，或Give me a call to discuss it further这类话有失礼貌，使人读后感到不舒服。2语法错误便条中的语法错误有多种，常见的有冠词、词
36、性、动词的时与体、句子结构等错误。(1)冠词错误，如Im anxious to make a(应为an)appointmentwith you(2)词性错误，如I must make an apologize(正确为apology)forfailing to tum up for the appointment(3)动词的时与体等方面的错误，例如：aIf you will be(应把will be改为are)for tomorrow,we shall meet againbI am sorry to fail(正确为to have failed而不是to fail，因事情已发生)to tum
37、up for the appointment yesterday(4)句子结构错误，例如：Im very sorryIdidnt tum up for the appointment with you Because my mother was seriously ill yesterday and I had to take her to see the doctor(应改为Im verysorry I didnt turn up for the appo intment with you yesterday because mymother was seriously ill and I
38、had to take her to see the doctor)3拼写错误与别的主观题一样，便条写作中拼写错误数见不鲜。例如：professor-,profesorprofesor；convenient-* conveintconvinenconvinient； recejVe recieve； appointm ent -apointmentpo itment 三建议综上所述，TEM4便条的行文虽简短、形式较简单，但写好它并非一件易事，它涉及考生的实际英语水平和临场发挥的方方面面。现就考前准备与临场发挥两方面提几点建议。(一)考前准备1抓好英语基本功的训练，做到多读、多背、多学。2养成良
39、好的学习习惯，做到多思、多问、勤查词典。3注意英汉文化背景差异，牢记英汉书信格式上的异同之处。4调整好心态，牢记：“功到自然成”。(二) 临场发挥1仔细阅读、研究所给提示，包括情景、要求、与收便条人之间的关系等。2根据提示认真构思，包括结构、语气、用词等。3利用有把握的英文知识，简明扼要地表达提示中要表达的思想内容。4语言要流畅，切记以对方为重、使对方愉悦、尽量少用被动语态、避免文句单调。5注意卷面要干净整齐，字迹要工整清晰。6挤时间认真检查：1)格式是否正确，有无漏掉成分；2)内容是否完整，有无缺少部分；3)语言是否规范、得体，有无语法、拼写错误，等等。附：范文 (格式一)April 22，
40、2006Dear Professor Wan g，Im very sorry I didnt keep the appointment with you yesterday because of my sick roommateAs his close friend，I had to look after him the whole dayI wonder if youd mind having another appointment with me at your office at four Oclock tomorrow aftemoonIm expecting your reply Y
41、ours sincerely,George试范文 (格式二)April 22，2006Dear Professor Wang，Im very sorry I didnt keep the appointment with you yesterday because of my sick roommateAs his close friend，I had to look after him the whole dayI wonder if youd mind having another appointment with me at your office at four Oclock tomorrow afternoonIm expecting your reply Yours sincerely,George下文的网址，大家可以去看看，是一个便条范文集锦，各类便条都有涉及。大家把上文仔细看完，然后再将前8年的便条写作真题全部认真写一遍，再对照答案分析自己的不足，相信大家的便条至少可以拿7、8分了。