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1、精品_精品资料_中学校 1 对 1 课外辅导专家龙文训练学科导学案老师:刘琳 同学:詹俊逸日期: 2022-星期:时段:至课 题作文练习学习目标与考点分析学习重点学习方法学习内容与过程英语书面表达在高考中日益显得重要,高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清晰,把意思表达完整,而是要给我们的句子润色,让我们的句子靓起来.如何让我们的英语句子靓起来 了？很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段快速提高语言水平.但这种方法需要肯定的积存,也需要肯定的基础.通过对低级句型的改造,可以快速到达这一目的.1. 强调句：可以轻松的将时间、的点、缘由、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句., It was not until
2、 I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.It was then that I realized the importance of English.2. 倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句,便可将其提前,变成倒装句.Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me.Only by this means can he escape from the big fire.3. with 引导的相伴结构：可以
3、将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with 结构.With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits He always likes to sleep with the windows open.4. 奇妙的使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词.Hearing that, the drivers wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drink
4、ing. 低级形式： When he heard that, 5. 恰到好处的被动句： 适合应用于较简短的句子, 这样显得语言简洁生动, 宾语一般是 nothing、可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_中学校 1 对 1 课外辅导专家anything、everything 等不定代词.Searched all my pockets, but nothing was foun.d6. 感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛,但凡“I feel ”之类表达感情的句子皆可如此改造.How terrible I felt today. I failed again in the math e
5、xam.7. 高级定语从句：假设定语从句中的动词带有介词,只需将介词移至先行词后.We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.8. 进行时态：有时会含有肯定心情,特别要使用always 这样的富含感情颜色的副词.I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.9. 动听表达：需要使用幽默的技巧,主要用于漫画型作文题.I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning tha
6、t my handbag had been left on the counter.10. what 引导的名词性从句：将动宾结构转化为此结构.What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it.11.“数词 +名词”变为“ as many as+数词+名词”.As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests
7、12. 适当加一些不关痛痒的插入语： 一些连词、 副词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语, 如 I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion 、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, whats more 等,有时可以考虑几个插入语连用,就更像英美人士的文章了.13. 独立主格：将主从句去掉连词,前句动词变为分词即可.The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the
8、Western Hills.14. 把简洁句改成复合句：适当的时候把两个简洁句改成“too.to”或者“ sothat”等高级一点的复合句.例如：I was very tired. I couldnt keep up with them.我们可以改成： I was so tired that I couldnt keep up with them. 或： I was too tired to keep up with them.这样一来,英语基础不是很好的同学只要能够写出最基本的句子,然后再对这些句子进行加工、改造、润色,渐渐的,就会让句子靓起来,在高考中就可以得到比较中意的成果.一, 高考英
9、语书面表达基本策略 :1. 认真审题2. 写要点 - 造句 五种基本句型 /简洁句复杂的简洁句复合句并列句3. 查错漏4. 卷面干净可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_简洁句 复杂的简洁句中学校 1 对 1 课外辅导专家可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers.Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers i
10、n his garden. 2.A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide.A pretty girl was crossing a wide road 用以下各招可给句子润色 , 让句子靓起来.一. 使用定语从句1.I study in Chunhui Middle School. Chunhui Middle School has a long history.使用 “介词+关系代词 ”引导的定语从句.2. 中国的茶叶有很多种 , 其中龙井茶是世界闻名的There re many kinds of t
11、ea in China,Longjing Tea is famous all over the world.3. I got on a bus. There were already too many people on it定. 语从句 二,使用 with 复合结构1. Our headteacher is a man of medium height. He wears a pair of glasses on his nose. Our headteacher is a man of medium height with a pair of glasses on his nose.2.
12、- 随着社会的进展,It is quite necessary that we should have a goodknowledge of English and computer.3.-由于那噪音的连续 , I couldn t go on studying. 的wi复th合结构 4. -随着科学和技术的进展 , the world is changing every day三通过非谓语来改写句子 .5.She lay on the beach. She felt comfortable6.I was defeated by Tom. I felt angry.7.I was cleani
13、ng the window. I hurt my finger.做下练习1.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees-,一路上有说有笑2.At about 1 o-clock this afternoon, Tracy called,-说他明天上午不能在咖啡屋Bolton Coffee同你见面 as she has something important to attend to.3.- 参与英语演讲竞赛 is a helpful way to learn English.4. Our parents are check
14、ing our bags or diaries是为了确保我们没有卷入任何麻烦事可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_中学校 1 对 1 课外辅导专家5. - 被他的话所感动, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song- 名叫“母亲”的一首歌 for the students.四利用介词短语改写句子1. Upon arrival/On arriving 一到达 , we began to work immediately.2. -做完那些工作之后 , we put up a board reminding people
15、 to protect the trees, and- 在离开之前 , we took some photos to record our green action.3. -在竞赛的过程中 , you should finish your speech in five minutes and try your best to express yourself in English fluently.4. -一听到铃声 , students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could.五巧用 There be 结构1. 曾有一位特别勤劳的农夫.
16、There was once a farmer_who worked very hard.2. 一般说来 , 我作出这个打算有两个缘由.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision.3. 沿途 800 长的大街 , 有 300 多家商店.Along this 800 meter street,there are more than 300 shop.s六 .句子润色：简洁句的高级形式简洁句其实也可以不简洁 ,假设将简洁句与非谓语动词短语、 形容词短语、介词短语、同位语、独立主格结构等奇妙的合并在一起 ,不但可以表达更丰富的内
17、容 ,而且也使句子变得更出色 ,充分显示你在英语表达上的实力.1. 同位语I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similar to mine. 我想有一个笔友 , 期望是一个二十出头且爱好相投的女孩子.同位语中又有两个并列的介词短语修饰 2. 形容词短语Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.诞生于美国的托马斯 爱迪生是一个宏大的科学家和创造家.3. 不定式短语In
18、 order to study well, we need to do sports.为了学习好 , 我们需要做体育运动.4. 现在分词短语In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, watching her babies flying away.在这幅图中 , 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里 , 观看她的鸟仔飞走.5. 过去分词短语,mobilephones and theInternet are faster and much moreconvenient.与信件和公用相比,和网络更快也更便利.6. 介词短
19、语可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_中学校 1 对 1 课外辅导专家, he encourages us to think by ourselves.他勉励我们独立摸索 , 而不是立刻告知我们答案. 即时练习 按括号中的提示翻译以下句子.1. 我是李华 , 四川的一个同学. 同位语1. I m Li Hua,2. 与其他老师相比 , 摩尔先生更留意教学方法. 用过去分词短语 , Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching.3. 北京动物园 , 建于 1906 年, 有 100 多年的历史了. 用过去分词短语 The B
20、eijing Zoo, has a history of more than 100 years.4. 李华在公共汽车站等 601 公车上去学. 现在分词短语 Li Hua was at the bus stop,6.我们同学应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成果.介词短语 6. 合并句子 : The moon travels round the earth once every month. The moon is a natural satellite of the earth.现 在分词短语 7. 合并句子： He was well known for his expert advi
21、ce. He was able to help a great number of people with their personal affairs过. 去分词短语 8. 已经有很多作家利用他们手中的笔同错误的事情作斗争.many writers who used their pens to fight things that were wrong.9. 好像每分钟都有这种笑话被克隆出来.a new jokeclone every minute.10. 前门大街是步行街 pedestrian street, 但是那里有当当车 trolley car带你去商店、茶馆和剧院.Qianmen S
22、treet is a pedestrian street,take you to the shops, teahouses and theatres.11. 有很多人在观看足球赛. peoplewatch the football match.12. 然而, 有一个错误我想指出来.13. 与传统课堂比起来 , 毫无疑问 , 在网络上同学可以得到更多的学习资源.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_Compared to a traditional classroom, resources on the Net. children can get more learning可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_14. 可能会有一个更聪慧的方法来做这件事.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_中学校 1 对 1 课外辅导专家 a cleverer way to do this.15. 我完全懂得我们为此事感到不快 , 但是没有必要感到太伤心.I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but .课内练习与训练可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载