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1、写给母亲的一封信英语作文_给母亲的一封信 英语写给母亲的一封信英语作文点评专家：赵秀凤，中国石油高校外国语学院教授、博士，全国英语创新大赛顾问委员会副主任，第十届、第十一届全国创新英语大赛评委。参赛佳作姓名：张家碧学校：郑州外国语学校成果：97A Letter to My MomDear Mom，I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I d like to
2、 share some of my views on this topic.Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and donts came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authent
3、ic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?However, though
4、 Iacute;ve labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, Ive come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees. This is as true
5、of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas prove
6、d to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but Ive also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy o
7、f a normal carefree cbildhood.Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Iacute;ll improve myself ina tiger way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.Love,Daughter专家点评：通过这封写给母亲的信，作者把母亲的教化方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比，阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明白，正文欲扬先抑，强调对“tiger training”的赞同，依此动身向母亲表达深切感谢之情。文章结构清楚，观点明白，逻辑性强，行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富，长句驾驭实力强。建议适当变更句式，保证长短错落有致。