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1、剑桥雅思作文范文及解析目录剑52TEST 12TEST 22TEST 3 3TEST 43GENEAL TRAINING6剑66TEST 16TEST 28TEST 38TEST 410GENERAL TRAINING14剑 715TEST 115TEST 216TEST 318TEST 419GENERAL TRAINING19剑 820TEST 120TEST 223TEST 323TEST 425GENERAL TRAINING29剑 932TEST 132TEST 233TEST 335TEST 435way can the host country develops more qui
2、ckly and more healthy in the future.TEST 44.Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectat
3、ions. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.Those peo
4、ple who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial. Even when people believe they are resisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing. Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or tha
5、t the 6safe9 patterns of behaviour are no longer appropriate.However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that change is always for the better9. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majo
6、rity of people. A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests.In conclusion, I would say t
7、hat change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.题解一些人喜欢一辈子都做同样的事情，防止变化。而其他人认为变化总是好事。讨论这两种观点并提出 你的看法。参考译文过去半个世纪人类生活的变化速度远远超出我们的想象。这一变化是由于科技突破推动的，这些科技 进步
8、几乎每天都在改变我们看待世界的方式。这意味着变化并不总是个人的选择，而是无法回避的生 活事实，而我们需要不断适应以赶上变化。那些相信可以通过做同样的、熟悉的事情来获得某种平安感的人们是在自欺欺人。即便人们认为他们 自己在抵抗变化，他们也无法阻止周围世界的变化。他们迟早会发现熟悉的工作不再存在，或者行为 的“平安，模式不再合适。但是，得出变化不可防止的结论不等于假设“变化总会变得更好”。不幸的是，新事物被推动并不总是 因为对大多数人有好处。许多革新的目的是为少数人谋利。这是因为正是我们社会里有钱和有权的人 们才有能力施加有助于他们自己的利益的变化(比方在工作环境或者地产开展方面)。总之，我认为变
9、化对于那些追逐变化的人们来说是令人兴奋，鼓舞人心的，但并不是所有的变化都必 定会有好结果，这其中也包含施加于人的变化。分析本文是Discuss类考题。本文的开头指出变化无处不在，也无法防止，融进了作者的观点，说明防止变化是不可能的。第二段话不是分析反方的观点，而是直接反驳观点一的理由。第三段话也并没有论证正方的观点，而 是指出观点二的理由并不总能立住脚，指出变化并不总是会变得更好，而只是使得少数掌握资源的人 变得更好，其他人那么无法支配变化。结尾总结观点，指出变化对于那些主动追求变化、能掌控变化的人来说是好的，而对于其他人，尤其 是被动面对变化的人来说那么未必如此。总的来说，本文并没有采用完全
10、平衡式的论证方法，最后说明自己倾向于某种观点，而是指出两种观 点在某种程度上的合理之处以及局限所在，从而得出自己的看法。这种写法比拟适合Discuss中两种 观点都不够完善，无法完全同意的情况。点评：题目Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.认真看一下这个题目，狡猾狡猾的，因为这个话题的两个观点不是完全对立的，而是从不同的角度来 表述这个问题：一方面，一
11、些人拒绝改变（拒绝改变是一种结果，其原因可能是不喜欢改变或是害怕 改变，甚至是不知道周围是变化的）;另一方面，一些人认为改变经常是件好事（认为改变是件好事是一 种观点，也就是原因，可能行为是尝试新鲜事物等）。所以回答这个问题就不存在中立、倾向或一边 倒，而是把问题一个个回答掉。第一段：Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations.介绍背景，老调重弹beyond词组经常用到：beyond doubt毋容置
12、疑；beyond recognition 无可识别；beyond expectations 不可想象；This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that can changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.这句话说明 technological and scientific breakthroughs 产生了两个作用 drive this (the pace of change has increased); cha
13、nge the whole way we view the world, 很是狡猾This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.实际上开始接触到第一问题了，not a person option, but an inescapable fact of life的这句很有哲理，而 且经常用到，大家记住第二段Those people who believe the
14、y have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial.直接回答文章的第一问，those people are living in denialin denial 介词短语，拒绝成认事实(refusing to admit the truth or reality of something unpleasant),举例 a patient in denial about his health problemsEven when people believe they are re
15、sisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing.解释他们“生活在一种不愿面对真相的状态中live in denial”When conj: although尽管，表转折，并非常见的表时间Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the 6safe5 patterns of behavior are no longer appropriate.接着解释 they will
16、 find that. . that第三段However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that change is always for the better 相当于把两问都给否认了，A is not the same as B句子用词的多样化：Reaching the conclusion 对应 assuminginevitable 对应首段的 inescapableUnfortunately, it is not always the case that new
17、s things are prompted because they have good impacts for the majority of people.新事物被推动并不总是因为对大多数人有好处接着解释，it is not always the case, case 指 reality 事实解释原因的着力点the majority of people,就是“是否代表最广大人们的根本利益”，看看老外学“三个 代表”真是活学活用A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is becau
18、se it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their interests.这是因为正是我们社会里有钱和有权的人们才有能力推动符合 他们自己的利益的变化(比方在工作环境或者房地产开展方面)。结果,It is because +原因，前果后因的因果关系，大家多学习学习It is people who.that多层复合关系的从句结构需搞清楚
19、Such as文章举例，使其具体化Sth is in ones interest 符合某人的利益， be in the public/national interest第四段：In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good o
20、utcomes.总之，我认为变化对于那些追逐变化的人们来说是令人兴奋，鼓舞人心的，但并不是所有的 变化都必定会有好结果，这其中也包含施加于人的变化。I would say标志着我的观点的正式出现，而且把两个问题回答强调一下Pursue 对应第一问中的 avoid, not have good outcomes 回答了第二问审题这个题目很阴险，不是简单的是非问题，而是同一个话题两种不同观点，但观点的侧重点又有所不同, 那好办，就一个问题一个问题解决。问题:Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid
21、ing change.世界是变化 的，你只能使用变化，而非逃避变化；问题二:Others think that change is always a good thing,变化有可能都是好事，有时也是坏事框架第一段：这一段谈谈背景，引入话题。由于技术的进步，变化无处不在，表达在两个方面：人类生活 节奏加快和我们看待世界的看法。这是个谁也逃避不了的现实。第二段：回答题目的第一问，喜欢做熟悉事情的人是不愿意成认事实，应为这是他们逃避不了的现实, 很快他们就会发现他们熟悉的工作不存在，或者是平安的行为方式不合适。第三段：回答题目的第二问，开头这句话得将二三两段联系起来，所以就说改变是不可防止的并不等
22、 同于改变总是好的。因为有些改变只符合权贵的利益，并不有利于广大人民群众。第四段：结尾段，得把两个问题联系起来，做一个简单的归纳。当人们主动追求变化时，这个改变就 是令人振奋的，但并不是所有的变化都会产生积极的后果。假如是我？看到这个问题，头脑里闪出的就是有句歌词“不是我不明白，是因为世界变化快。”一看这两个问题， 还是很好回答的，下面就开始吧。第一段：介绍背景，无论是谁，都是这一套第二段：回答第一个问题，拒绝变化的的做法是不可能的。因为变化时恒定存在的，而且个人来讲不 能惧怕变化，积极的面对变化，有时能使人得到更大的开展，所以叫做。pportunity第三段：回答第二个问题，变化的结构有好有
23、坏，如核技术的创造，可以用来发电，服务人类，也可 用来制造核武器，毁灭人类，所以科学技术的变化带来的双重影响。第四段：再次强调自己的观点，既然变化是肯定存在的，我们就必须积极面对，同时积极的杜绝消极 的影响，让变化造福人类等。范文2：In modern society, there are two types of lives. Some people like to lead a stable life without change. Others prefer changing to static. Both kinds of people have their admittedly re
24、asons to support themselves.The ones who advocate steady life is comfortable give their points as follows. First of all, long-term of work can provide a reliable source of income. Changing jobs frequently maybe hard for a family to live comfortable. Secondly, movement of home is quite usual. This ac
25、tivity can cost you a great deal of finance to deal with this problem. Besides, shuttling among different kinds of job cannot make you gather the experience of a type of subject. Because you often change the way to face the subjects while changing your jobs. After few decades, you may still a freshm
26、an in your job.On the contrary, audacious young people like changeable life much better than the people above who are interested in steadily life. They are convinced that diversity of life is a treasure of our experience. When we grow more mature in considering questions. Whats more, when we change
27、our life styles, we indeed get a quality of how to adapt new life. According to the mental research, people who own adaption ability may hardly feel lonely, and the risk of develop psychological illness can be decreased. So changing lives can groom the qualities of youngsters.For my part, I would li
28、ke to share the last point of view. Because I am a young man now, so changing life is a good opportunity for the people like me to join into the society and develop the ability of adapting new life styles.范文3Change, as progress, may not always be a good thing, but we could not possibly stop change f
29、rom coming. Whether we like it or not, change happens. It seems that, any change, even a change for the better, is sometimes accompanied by drawbacks and discomforts.In general, progress is positive. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way w
30、e view the world on an almost daily basis. Indeed, over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. From the Industrial Revolution to the present Information Age, human beings have been benefiting from such changes in life as ne
31、ver before seen. Inevitably, it is a different world, probably one that is better economically and socially than any time in the past. If nothing else, life has become more enjoyable and labor less strenuous.However, that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that change is for the better
32、*. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people. For instance, a lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. Altogether, it seems as if everything we gain, we lose something else; and everythin
33、g we lose, we gain something else. True enough, change always comes bearing gifts; nevertheless, we have reasons to doubt if some of those gifts were not directly from hell. It is because all changes, even the most longed for, have their melancholy as what we have left behind us is a cherished part
34、of ourselves.All things considered, we are obliged to welcome change as our rule because there is nothing wrong with change as long as it is in the right direction. Given that all progress does not necessarily have good outcomes, we cannot prevent the world from changing. Since change is the only co
35、nstant, the only institution which rejects progress is perhaps the cemetery.GENERAL TRAINING5. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on
36、the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for.However, the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract chil
37、dren. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent. The player is usually the 6hero, of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centred and insensitive to others.Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting informa
38、tion or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is and important part of a childs development that cannot be provided by a computer.In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children
39、cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidenc
40、e as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives.I think the main point is to make sure that young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual wo
41、rld.剑7TESTI1. It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.The
42、relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skill
43、s, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a per
44、son who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.I personally think that some
45、people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutual
46、ly exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and with out the training, the child would not learn how to explo
47、it and develop their talent.In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.structure: paragraph 1: paraphrase the topicparagraph 2: any child can be trainedparagraph 3: but trained
48、 student have ceilingsparagraph 4: talent and training are both essentialparagraph 5: talent is needed to excelTEST 22. Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for comm
49、itting it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.7.5分考生范文选段：固定不变的定罪制度和分情况灵活的定罪制度On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the