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1、如有侵权，请联系网站删除，仅供学习与交流英语写作原则与固定句型和范文分析【精品文档】第 14 页一、英语写作万能公式开头万能公式：1开头万能公式一：名人名言有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？经典句型：Aproverbsays,“Youareonlyyoungonce.”（适用于已记住的名言）Itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever.（适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：Asever
2、yoneknows,noonecandenythat2开头万能公式二：数字统计原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about78.9%ofthecollegestudentswantedtofurthertheirstudyaftertheirgraduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：Honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师
3、请假的理由当中78%都是假的。TravelbyBike根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。Youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。Five-dayWorkWeekBetterthanSix-dayWork?根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型：Arecentstatisticsshowsthat结尾万能公式：1结尾万能公式一：如此结论说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就
4、是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：Obviously（此为过渡短语）,wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！更多过渡短语：tosumup,inconclusion,inbrief,onaccountofthis,thus更多句型：Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat,Therefore,wecanfindthat2结尾万能公式二：如此建议如果说“
5、如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。Obviously,itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？更多句型：Accordingly,Irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken.Consequently,tosolvetheproblem,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.二、英语写作的“七项基本原则”：结
6、合前边的范文体会和理解这几条原则，写作时一定要遵循。 1、长短句原则工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用
7、一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。2、主题句原则国有其君，家有其长，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！ Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforeth
8、eexam（主题句）.Withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly.Secondly, job interview can help us to tell real talents from fakers. Nowadays, cheating is very serious. Fake diplomas are sold everywhere. They are like the real one and you cant distinguish them. In order t
9、o get a better job, some people put some fake diplomas into their personal files although they havent received college schooling. In an interview, an applicants education and experience will be revealed after he answers a few questions. A good performance in the interview indicates the applicants pr
10、eparedness or readiness for the job.3、一二三原则领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。1）first,second,third,last（不推荐，原因：俗）2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐，原因：俗）3）thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast（不推荐，原因：俗）4）inthefi
11、rstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）5）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）6）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally（强烈推荐）7）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast（强烈推荐）8）mostimportantofall,moreover,finally9）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand（适用于两点的情况）10）foronething,foranotherthing（
12、适用于两点的情况）建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！4、短语优先原则写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：Icannotbearit.可以用短语表达：Icannotputupwithit.Iwantit.可以用短语表达：Iamlookingforwardtoit.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。5、多实少虚原则原因很简单，写文章还是应
13、该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital之类的形象词。再比如：走出房间，general的词是：walkoutoftheroom但是小偷走出房间应该说：slipoutoftheroom小姐走出房间应该说：sailoutoftheroom小孩走出房间应该说：danceoutoftheroom老人走出房间应该说：staggeroutof
14、theroom所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！6、多变句式原则1）加法（串联）都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：Ienjoymusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.其它的短语可以用：besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover2）转折（拐弯抹角）批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯
15、抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个转折词就够了。Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.Thecoatwasthin,butitwaswarm.更多的短语：despitethat,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,notwithstanding3）因果（so,so,so）昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友
16、可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！Thesnowbegantofall,sowewenthome.更多短语：then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,asaresult,forthisreason,sothat4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从
17、句的变形。举例：ThisiswhatIcando.Whetherhecangowithusornotisnotsure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：Whentogo,Whyhegoesaway5）附加（多此一举）如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。Themanwhomyoumetyesterdayisafriendofmine.Idontenjoythatbookyouarereading.Mrliu,ouroralEnglishteac
18、her,iseasy-going.其实很简单，同位语-要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whomorthat关系词必须要紧跟在先行词之后。6）排比（排山倒海句）文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个的对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个的词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！Whetheryourtastesaremodernortraditional,sophisticatedorsimple,thereisplentyinLondonforyou.N
19、owadays,energycanbeobtainedthroughvarioussourcessuchasoil,coal,naturalgas,solarheat,thewindandoceantides.Wehavegottostudyhard,toenlargeourscopeofknowledge,torealizeourpotentialsandtopayforourlife.（气势恢宏）要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！7、挑战极限原则既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可
20、以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：Theweatherbeingfine,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.Africaisthesecondlargestcontinent,itssizebeingaboutthreetimesthatofChina.如果您可以写出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！三、文章主体段落三大杀手锏：1、举实例思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且这也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！In
21、ordertoattractmorecustomers,advertisershaveadoptedeverypossiblestimulatingfactorinmakingads,suchassound,light,colors,cartoonfilmsandhumanperformance.Forinstance,toadvertiseacertainfood,advertiserswillaskanactororactresstositatatableanddevourtheseeminglydeliciousfoodwhiletheyfilmhimorher.更多句型：Totakea
22、sanexample;Oneexampleis;Anotherexampleis;Forexample; A case in point is2、做比较方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（throughcomparison）和不同点（throughcontrast）。下面是一些短语：相似的比较：incomparison,likewise,similarly,inthesamemanner相反的比较：ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while
23、,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith,3、换言之没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字Iloveyou!Iamenthusiasticaboutyou.Thatistosay,Iloveyou.Iamwildaboutyou.Inotherwords,Ihavefalleninlovewithyou.或者上面我们举过的例子：Icannotbearit.可以用短语表达：Icannotputupwithit.因此
24、可以这样说：Icannotbearit.Thatistosay,IcannotputupwithitorIamfedupwithit.更多短语：inmoredifficultlanguage,insimplerwords,putitmoresimply四、范文分析Who and How to Take Care of seniors? Since China adopted one-child policy, together with improvement made in the social undertakings such as welfare and health care, th
25、ere has emerged a problem of how to support seniors in recent years.As every coins has two sides, the side effect of one-child policy has appeared, for example, the child regarded by other family members as the little prince or princess, always has his wishes satisfied without difficulty. Growing up
26、 in this family, no wonder, they lack in sense of caring for others and learning to be independent of parents. Can they support their aging parents whose life expectancy has been prolonged?To effectively cope with this social problem of taking care of seniors today, I may put forward several suggest
27、ions as follows: First, young adults in a family should spend more time with their elder members, giving financial help, chatting over favorite topics, doing family work. Secondly, the governments at all levels should finance the construction of more seniors care centers for aged people who wish to
28、lessen the burden of their children. Last but not the least, the sense of responsibility for caring the seniors should be planted to the heart of everyone.To sum up, I firmly hold that taking care of the seniors is one of the traditional virtues in China and it involves the effort of young adults to
29、gether with love from every corner of the society, particular social institutions. Only by doing so can we build a harmonious society.常用的过渡连接词有：表示顺序的：first, second, third, finally; firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally; to begin with，in addition/additionally，last but not least; on the one hand, on the
30、 other hand; for one thing, for another; first things first, in the second place, finally表示附加说明的：another, also, besides, in addition (to), additionally, furthermore, moreover whats more; for instance, for example, such as, equally important, in fact; similarly, at the same time, accordingly, likewis
31、e, in the same way表转折关系：on the contrary, by contrast, in contrast, in contrast to, however, different from, whereas, nevertheless, on the one hand, on the other hand, however, otherwise, even so, unlike, in opposition to, on the opposite side, but, while表示原因： because, because of; since; owing to, th
32、anks to; due to; as a result of; on account of; in view of, for this reason, since, as, thanks to, oweto, now that, seeing that, for fear that, due to表示结果： thus, therefore, in consequence, consequently, accordingly, as a result, result in, hence表示让步: although; even though; despite, in spite of; gran
33、ted that表示列举： for example, for instance, for one thing, to illustrate, in other words, as follows, takefor example, generally speaking, on the wholetraffic jam表示比较: similar to, similarly, likewise, correspond to, correspondingly, resemble, in the same way, to havein common, to be parallel in表示强调： ch
34、iefly; especially; in fact; as a matter of fact; particularly; most important of all, admittedly 表示概括总结: therefore; in a word; in short; to sum up; in summary; in conclusion; all in all, in brief, in consequence, on the whole; generally speaking; to sum up; altogether作文常用句型 1. Nowadays there is a he
35、ated debate on /as to.2. . is a heated topic in recent years. 3. There is a big controversy surrounding/over.4. With the development (improvement, growth) of.5. When it comes to, . 6. It has raised public concern that the violence in the society is on the rise over the past decades. 7. People have s
36、hown concern on the consequences of car emission.8. Some people claim (think, argue, believe) that, while others hold an opposite view. 9. It is generally (widely, increasingly) believed/ held/ acknowledged that 10. According to a recent survey (investigation, poll) 11. As the saying goes 12. When i
37、t comes to, it is advised that.13. As far as I am concerned, I subscribe to/ side with/ am in favor of the idea that 14. As far as I am concerned/ From my point of view/Personally, the advantages of . are many. 15. As far as I am concerned, I object to/ oppose/ am against the opinion that16. It is m
38、y view that should be taken into consideration when we 17. To deal with the pressing problem, we should take measures to solve it. 18. Although.would create a number of problems, their overall effect may be positive. 19. has become one of the most serious social problems as a direct result of. 20. i
39、s critical for long-term economic development, human health and environmental sustainability. 21. can pose risks to, resulting in . 23. will contribute to . 24. Rapid growth will put a strain on around the world. 26. is of critical importance. 27. Good architecture is a masterpiece and bad architect
40、ure is the reverse. 28. has been widely recognized as 29. Considering the fact that, is very likely to become more popular in the years ahead. 30. There is no doubt that 31. It should be noted that 32. It cant be denied that 33. People consider to be the fastest growing threat to 34. Excessive use o
41、f natural resources can place human beings at risk. 35. Taking advantage of travel does broaden your mind. 36. Crime rates are on the rise. 37. Mothers tend to work outside the home in that country. 38. It can be argued that cultural diversity may be vital for the long-term survival of humanity. 39.
42、 Playing games has long been the most common computer activity for children, but computer games vary widely in terms of content and potential effect. 40. It is the family that determines the formation of one personality and improves ones morality and proper behavior. 41. Violent crimes broadcasted b
43、y media have a massive impact on the audience. 42. It is obvious that people differ in many dimensions, including age, ethnicity, social background and gender. 43. There is a growing recognition that animals should not be used or regarded as property by human beings. 44. There is no doubt that paren
44、ts can have a significant role in modifying the influence of media on childrens knowledge, attitudes and values. 45. It is obvious that lifestyles in rural areas are distinct from those in urban areas, partly because public services and facilities are limited there. 46. Considering the fact that lea
45、rners are allowed to control the time and place for studies, distance learning is very likely to become more popular in the years ahead. 47. It is worth noting/ It should be noted that repeated exposure to a brand during the course of an advertising campaign can enhance consumers memory of the brand
46、 and improve their attitudes toward this brand. 48. Research has revealed that young people who are exposed to advertisements for alcohol are likely to drink more. 49. It is likely that population pressure will lead to greater numbers of people living in the suburbs. 50. The net result of technological change is th