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1、英语试题写作“ 1.2.3 ”精析假定你是新华中学的学生李华,在你的一个英国朋友Mary 家里度过了愉快的一周,在回国之前,你想给Mary 写一封感谢信。内容包括: 1. 表示感谢; 2. 一周收获; 3. 邀请她明年夏天到中国。注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;词数120 左右;供: 1.表达谢意2. 感谢的原因,在英国朋友Mary 家一周收获3. 邀请她明年夏天到中国。需:写一封感谢信,词数120 字左右。结合点: 把能够表达文章的意思的一些零散的词汇、短语、句型以及可以增添文章亮点的高级词汇和句型全部罗列出来,然后根据文章要求,把要表达的三个要意列成提纲放在三个自然段,有了提纲,文章
2、在材料安排上才会层次分明,在此基础上,再把刚才想到的表达把提纲扩充,增加细节描述,并注重使用一些连接副词把文章串起来,使得文章流畅自然。最后达到我们题目的需求,呈现出一篇好的作文。1. 审题:确定文章体裁: 感谢信人称:信一般以第一人称为主时态:一般现在时和一般将来时为主,讲过去的经历时还用到一般过去式2. 确定文章结构:第一段:表达谢意;第二段:感谢的原因 , 在英国朋友 Mary 家一周收获;第三段:邀请她明年夏天到中国。3. 我们从供的内容可以挖掘出以下的一些要点:文章可能会用到的一些高级词汇:Gratitude benefit unforgettable experience impr
3、ove appreciate look forward to等文章可以用到的一些句型:表达谢意的:Many thanks for your kind and warm help.?Thank you for your generous hospitality.?Im sincerely grateful for all your help inThank you for doing so much to make my trip interesting.?Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favour. 另外,表示从对方的帮助中获益时,
4、可以用: I benefited greatly from your help. Your help benefited me greatly Thanks to your help , I achieved 也可用虚拟语气来增强表达效果: Without your help, I couldn t have But for your help, I couldn t have感谢的原因方面的 :1、During this week, I got a good knowledge of England , which introduced me to more about England cu
5、lture. 2、In an environment exposed to English , my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly. 3、Furthermore, I made some new friends, who helped me a lot. 表示邀请的 : Welcome to my home town next summmer. I really hope you can come. I do hope that you will be able to come. I would feel
6、/be honoured if you could come.文章可能会用到的一些起连接作用的短语:1.what s more; furthermore; besides; 2.as a result / as a consequence; 3.so/therefore 4.meanwhile. 5.nonetheless 6.But its a pity that. 7.However , the difficulty lies in. 8.Similarly, we should pay attention to. 9.not(that).but(that). 10.In this res
7、pect, we may as well (say) 4. 列提纲1.本文是感谢信,用第一人称一确定文章的人称和时态2.写一周收获时用一般过去时3.表示邀请时现在时和过去时灵活选用已知1.表示感谢para1(供)2.列举一周para2 未知二正文要点(需)3. 发出邀请para3 Dear Mary, I am writing to express my gratitude for your company while I was at your home,which was an unforgettable experience for me and I benefited a lot fr
8、om it. During this week, I got a good knowledge of England , which introduced me to more about England culture. In an environment exposed to English , my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly. Furthermore, I made some new friends, who helped me a lot. Welcome to my home next sum
9、mmer. I ll be your best guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture and taste Chinese food. I am looking forward to your coming. Best wishes! Yours Lihua Expressing Thanks Explaining reasons Sending invitation Thank you very much forI am so grateful forI would like to express my gratitu
10、de forI benefited greatly fromThanks to your help, I achieved(用虚拟语气增强效果) Without your help, I couldn t have But for your help, I couldn t haveI do hope that you will be able to come toI think it would be a good idea if you could comeI would be looking forward to your coming. Dear Mary, I am writing
11、to express my gratitude for your company while I was at your home, which was an unforgettable experience for me and I benefited a lot from it. During this week, I got a good knowledge of England, which introduced me to more than England culture. In an environment exposed to English, my English liste
12、ning and speaking skills got improved greatly. Furthermore, I made some new friends, who helped me a lot. Welcome to my home next summer. I will be your guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture and taste Chinese food. I am looking forward to your coming. Best wishes! Yours, Li hua 写作
13、策略指导:英语作文如何拿高分:第一个要说的就是词汇量,这个是最基本也是最重要的。能在文章中出现一些高级词汇,能够增添文章的亮点,特别是当这些词汇能够用在合适的位置上,将起到事半功倍的效果。弄不好老师会因为一两个这样的点睛词汇直接让你的作文分数上一个档次。(要高考应该都知道,英语作文改的时候是分档次改的,当老师拿到一篇作文的时候,首先会确定作文在哪一个档次里,然后在这个档次里对作文的分数做出调整。)这种分数的提高十分可观,而且也完全有可能。但是在写的时候又要注意不能刻意的追求一些难词,生词,怪词。分数提高的前提就是你的词汇能够正确的使用。如果用错了,不仅起不到提高分数的效果,反而会给老师扣分的理
14、由,这个一定要注意。第二就是语法,语法正确是一篇文章拿到一个好的分数的前提。这个是根据个人功底来说的。语法功底好的人,可以在文章中适当使用一些长难句,比如说从句,复合从句之类的。当然这也是要以写对为前提,写不对就是让老师扣分的。如果功底不行,就不能很刻意的去使用这样的句子,反而应该使用有把握的简单句,只要你写对了,老师就不会扣你分,这是一种保险的方式。第三是用词,就像上面说的一样,能用高级词汇就用,不能用就别用,要用自己有把握的。但是写的时候还要注意就是对于同一个词不要在文章中反复频繁的出现,不然就是告诉老师自己词汇量太少,老师的起评分就会降低。要多使用同义词,做不同的表达。第四是文章结构,一般分三段,开头,正文和结尾。第二段为正文,一般含有三个小要点,而三个小论点中再挑一两个进行较为详细的论述。还有就是写文章的时候开头和结尾一定要好好把握。高考改作文的方式去问问就知道,老师看一篇文章可能就是几十秒的时间,根本不会去细读。怎么样吸引老师,就是要在开头和结尾上下功夫。开头最好使用一些从句或者复杂的句式,前提还是要能正确使用。就算不用从句,文章的第一句话也不能写的太短。结尾要注意把握你自己观点,就是要点题,进一步明确自己的观点。如果自己的作文功底不好就要尝试去背背范文,掌握它的文章结构和写作方法。功底好的就要在范文的基础上,加入自己的东西。写出好的文章。