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1、大学英语作文大全范文 大学英语作文评析我们在大学里的时候，有很多个早晨可以进行英语晨读。下面是WTT给大家整理的大学英语作文评析，供大家参阅!大学英语作文评析：Stories of HairMaybe not considered the most important part of head,hair, in my opinion, is at least the most eye catching one, e_cept for those who are bald, like Ge You.Anyway, hair plays an in dispensable role in our
2、life, and sometimes it can offer us a lot of fun.Actually, I myself have several interesting e_periences related to hair and would like to share them with you all.The first story happened when I was eight.At that time, I was so boyish that every afternoon during the summer holiday I was seen disport
3、ing with a crowd of boys in the fierce sunlight,which gave me a precious gift, a bronze ple_ion.To make things worse, my hair was rather short, even shorter than most of the boys, just some one inch.One day, following my mother,I went to a department store to buy a pair of sports shoes.There were a
4、variety of shoes of different colors and styles standing on the shelves.At once, I caught sight of a black pair with some silver streaks on its instep.Then I showed them to my mother,“What a wonderfu pair!”“Not bad”, mother said, “but I think they are for boys.” Obviously, the saleswoman overheard o
5、ur conversation, she came up to us and remended the pair I chose, and with a radiant smile, she added, “this pair is especially suitable for the active boys just like you.” My mother and I couldn't help laughing, and I had to protest, “Thank you, mad am, but I am a girl.” She was genuinely shock
6、ed and touched my short hair unbelievingly.Even when we left with a pair of girlish shoes, she still had doubts about my gender.From then on, I had to wear a hairpin to demonstrate that I am a girl.And as time passed, I broke the old saying, “the longer your hair is, the less sensibility you have.”
7、When I was in senior middle school, I already had a long plait tied back.My classmate and neighbor Nancy also has long straight hair.Since the beautiful princesses in the movie always have shining wavy hair, we both longed for the hairstyle and decided to do it ourselves.One Saturday afternoon, we a
8、ttempted to carry out our great plan, but it turned out to be a disaster.To begin with, we divided our hair into several strands and bed them neat.Then we carefully rolled up every strand and fi_ed them with hairpins.The most important step is to cover the hair with a hot towel so that the stream co
9、uld change our straight hair into the fashionable wavy style.After that both of us sat still on the chairs, afraid to ruin our perfect work.At last one hour passed,we couldn't wait to appreciate our new image.We pulled down the towel, removed the hairpins and rushed to the mirror.“Oh.My God! How
10、 terrible!” we both cried.The hair winded disorderly and defied all our efforts to make them tidy.The whole thing was a mess.We looked at each other helplessly and wondered what to do.At the very moment, my mother came home and was really amused by our funny so called wavy hair.Luckily, a magical th
11、ing came to our rescue, the vinegar.Plunged into the mi_ture of water and vinegar, our hair got straightened and no longer winded together.Of course, hair means a lot more.The dyed black of the elderly can demonstrate their vigor and optimism, while the shining green hair of a cool guy shows off his
12、 pioneer spirit.And in the most renowned short story of O'Henry, The Gift of the Magi, Tara sold her beautiful brown hair to buy her husband a golden chain as the Christmas present, which moves thousands of readers to tears.To some e_tent, hair is a symbol of lifestyle and the philosophy of life
13、.简 评英文写作并不一定强调“文以载道”。一件似乎微不足道的小事，一个近乎琐碎的细节都可以有感而发，形诸文字。这位作者正是围绕头发这样平常的事物，回忆自己童年时的天真无邪、无忧无虑。这些看似漫不经心、不事雕琢的描述恰恰具有大诗人苏东坡所追求的“绚烂归于平淡”的功效，最能扣动读者的心弦，引起读者共鸣。所以点评人认为本文作者还没有完全领悟到这一点。最后一段可有可无。如果去掉，留给读者品味的空间更大。而作者受习惯的影响，一定要把对头发的讨论上升到一定的高度，反而显得有些牵强。(点评教师：张颖)大学英语作文评析：The Brightest Part of My MindMemory can be pl
14、e_ recall, where we may recover the fading enthusiasm, the dying distress, the faint emotions, and above all, the most striking and stifling memory.Several e_tracts of memory pace back and forth in my mind without minutes' pause.Perhaps they have been my part of my life, for they have certainly
15、given me immense shake and shock.Now I am very glad to share with you the brightest part of my never-fading memory.It jumped into my life when I was a little pupil in Grade Two.My formal maths teacher was about to have a baby, so he,an old but strong man, substituted her.He couldn't be called a
16、wonderful teacher;he always forgot what he had told and even what he was to tell, thus making it our responsibility to remind him where he had just paused.However, he is a gentleman with amiable temper, sending me a feeling of my grandfather being around.For the sole reason,I felt like being close t
17、o him to enjoy that kind of happiness.The road, which has been well maintained in my memory,engraved the deep tracks of wheels and two shadows, recording the story of a pleasant evening.That day, I walked home like a swallow.All of a sudden, a familiar shout came closer to me from my back.“Little gi
18、rl, do you want a free lift?” I looked back, and the swarthy face occupied by deep lines, caught my eye immediately.I just smiled back without any answer.“Jump on! My little girl!” He slowed his riding speed,moving towards me bit by bit.I stood there,motionless and wordless.“Do I look like a big and
19、 wild gray wolf?” He maintained his pleasing gentleness.I shook my head with my long hair moving right and left with fi_ed rhythm.At last, I opened my mouth:“I don't know how to jump.”“Well, I see.But when I was younger than you, I had already managed to jump onto my father's big and heavy b
20、ike.What's more, I was much shorter than you ! So I guess you can't ride a bike.”I nodded with my face blushed.Perhaps at that time I was a small and weak child to him, one who seemed unlikely to receive any hurt or challenge.Oddly enough, I lost my feet just with a strong feeling of flying;
21、magically I had sat on the rear part of his bike in security.With the help of his two great hands, what filled the short time flying was not fright but intimacy, because my grandfather usually did so.Now what you can and should do is to stay quietly.OK?“I looked down at his ”old friend“, one guy suf
22、fering from wounds small or big and festering in such une_pected rain.If I saw it at one dark and d corner, I must feel sick.But now the gentleness felt from my seat kicked out all the antipathy.I looked at my kind ”gentleman“, behaving as he just instructed.At that moment, we were moving along a na
23、rrow path on the soft land.”Now tell me what you are thinking.Do you feel fortable?“”Yes, very fortable, teacher!“”Don't call me teacher, call me 'Sir' ! You should know it is much politer to call one 'Sir' who renders help.“He burst into laughter, difficult for me to understand.
24、At that moment, I felt the mildness of breeze with a bit of coolness.On the smooth way, I was a happy bird, surrounded with such great warmth which I could only get from my parents and my dear grandfather.Then I arrived, and he wanted to ride back.He held me in the arms from the bike, kissed my red
25、cheek and tapped my small head with his tough hand.Happiness is certain to end.No one will have the everlasting priority on maintaining happiness; each soul must remember that fate is fair.Since it once presented you with boundless happiness, it will deprive all this and deliver them an une_pected g
26、ift of sorrow.I am one of them, the one who once smiled from the bottom of my heart but then released all the smile, back to soundless cry.Transition of the two different feelings buried in my fragile heart a sharp sword, stabbing me faintly.Two months later, my former maths teacher came back to her
27、 familiar platform, facing a group of familiar faces.He left us, left me, without any word.From then on, every time I faced the familiar platform, listening to the maths teacher, I can't help thinking of him, my kind ”grandfather“; Every day, I met a lot of people, familiar or unfamiliar, but ha
28、d never caught his shadow.I came to believe it would be the end, though pathetic.But one day, a familiar shadow was before a blackboard at the corner of stairs.It was he, the one I longed for.”Sir!“ I shouted with all my strength.He looked back at me, no e_citing in his eyes and no gladness on his e
29、_pression but surprise.He just stood there, chalk in hand, gazing at me at a loss, a little pupil with tears rolling down her face.”What's the matter, pupil?“Hearing the familiar tone but odd words, I am caught both in delight and in bewilderment, What's the matter? Was I not the little girl
30、 he knew? I became dumb with a splash of what had been heard from one teacher that he had moved to logistics department for his serious forgetfulness.”Nothing! Thank you !“I rushed out of the dreadful corner cruel enough to flood me in cruelty, loneliness and callosity.He had thrown away all the mem
31、ory of a little girl who brought him glory.With the passage of time, I had to believe that he had cast me in a dark corner, but I would put the memory of him in the brightest part of my mind for good.简 评光阴似箭，日月如梭。随着时光流逝，许多记忆中的影像被冲刷得荡然无存。时间老人是无情的，但人是有感情的。本文描写的是一位普普通通的“老师”。说是“老师”也未必恰当，“他”只不过是临时请过来代人上课
32、的。“他”非常健忘，刚刚说过的内容立马就被抛到“爪哇国”去了。这样一位老人还能让人念念不忘，肯定有“他”的独特之处。你看“他”为人和蔼，对学生又体贴入微，随时随地设身处地为他人着想，同时又不希求任何回报。度过短暂的两个月后，“他”回到原来的地方，干“他”应该做的事去了。其后不久，作者又见到“他”，而“他”已想不起来站在眼前的女生是谁了。作者刻画人物重在人物的内心世界，思路清晰，前后连贯，非常值得一读。大学英语作文评析：Fireworks Music to the Eyes and EarsThe week long National Day holiday which started from
33、 Oct.I has bee not only an occasion for celebrating the birth of the nation but also a time for people to rela_.After all, under great pressure every day, everyone longs to slow down and rediscover the real fun of life.My only hope for the week long holiday was also to rela_ myself well, instead of
34、playing well.I slept until the sun was shinning above, ate my favorite food which I scarcely have because of their high calorie, and enjoyed different kinds of films from day to night.Usually, I seldom went out during the holidays, as it was too terrible to battle the National Day holiday crowds.But
35、 this time, I couldn't resist myself against the performance of music fireworks whose theme was ”All Colors of Music“.As a part of the International Music Fireworks Festival, the performance of music fireworks, designed by the Swedish artists, was staged at Century Park in Pudong on the night of
36、 October 3.The scene, a spectacular bination of fireworks e_ploding in harmony with the music, made powerful visual and audio impact on me.The artists selected for the performance various pieces of music, including classical music by Beethoven and Strauss, some representative popular positions such
37、as ”My Heart Will Go on&;.With the music, the fireworks were set off in different formations.I could admire the fireworks in the sky as well as their reflections in the water.Arising from the River surface to the height of 300 meters in the sky, multi-layered and rich colored fireworks formulated an
38、 e_tremely spectacular picture.One of the most eye catchers was that nearly 1000 sparkling pieces of fireworks along the surface of the water formed a red carpet with 80 meters long and 250 meters wide.At the same time, a 10 meter-high waterfall firework rushed downwards the bridge across Jingtian L
39、ake and simultaneously the red lantern shaped fireworks filled the sky.It really took me on a romantic tour as the fireworks e_plode.Wish for ne_t chance to see such kind of music fireworks again!简 评这是一篇记叙文。记叙文的写作，首先当然要注意时间顺序，这一点容易做到。不容易做到的是详略得当、主次分明、中心突出。而这正是这篇文章做得比较好的地方。国庆是欢乐的时候、休闲的时候、放松的时候。这位同学写国庆没有面面俱到，而是选取其中印象最深的音乐焰火来写，将其中焰火燃放的场面写得比较详细。烟火的人都知道，这种场面看起来壮观精彩，写起来却很不容易。一是同学熟悉议论文的写作，场面描写却是软肋;二是这种壮观的场面太难以捉摸了。这篇文章在这一块着墨不多，描写也难说精彩，但总算是一个良好的开始。(点评教师：林燕)看过大学英语作文评析的人【end】第 16 页 共 16 页