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1、我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物读后续写讲评读后续写讲评我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物一、原文分析一、原文分析WHO (main characters; relationship?):The old lady(Myras mother); The postmanMyra(the old ladys daughter); Myras husband(Mayor, the old ladys
2、 son-in-law)Mrs. Morrison (maybe the ladys neighbour ); Mrs. Grant(the ladys neighbour); Johnnie(the ladys neighbour)Jim(maybe one of her relatives)WHEN: The old ladys eightieth birthdayWHERE: The old ladys home我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物WHAT: It was the lady
3、s eightieth birthday. Although she had received many presents from her neighbours, she was still looking forward to her daughters present, which she was sure her daughter would never forget. Having made full preparations, she stood by the window, expecting the arrival of the post. At last, only an e
4、nvelope from Myra arrived, the old lady almost unwillingly tore it open我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Main characters:The old lady:Myra:Johnnie:live alonelooked after by her neighbours Myra wouldnt forget her mothers birthday, even if she seldom wrote at other ti
5、mes. Of course she was busy. The old lady was proud of Myra. Her herband had been made Mayor, and Myra herself had got a medal for her work. Perhaps-perhaps Myra might come. After all, eighty was a special birthday.The little boy, Johnnie, had been up with a packet of mints, and said he wouldnt go o
6、ut to play until the post had come. successful/ambitious/diligent selfish/ lack the sense of responsibility She may feel regreful for not attending to her mom His company comforts the old ladys heart. Contrast to highlight the old ladys loneliness Or let us reflect on Myras absence of responsibility
7、 to take care of her mom Predict would she come to the party or not? The reasonable plot Theme? 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Whats the authors purpose of writing this story?Whats the best gift?It is one of the tragedies that children regret in the later days n
8、ot being able to reward parents love before they pass away.Nothing could be better than the company of her daughter. 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物二、每段的开头语分析二、每段的开头语分析（用下划线标出关键词）用下划线标出关键词） Para1:She stood by the window, watching. Why did she stand by the window?
9、 How did she feel while waiting？ What/Who did she watch that could add to the feeling of loneliness,excitement, hope? How long did she watch? the sunrise sunset the sun rose/ sank/ set down Did she receive a gift or a letter? Did her daughter come? Who sent her the letter the postman or Johnnie ? Wh
10、at was his feeling? How did she feel seeing the letter? Contrast 第一段应该包含以下内容：第一段应该包含以下内容：我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物As the postman passed by, a beam of disappointment swept over her.Hopes of receiving the present from Myra seemed to be fading away.On seeing w
11、hat Johnnie carried, her smile froze abruptly.She shook her head, with a trembling voice.Faced with such a frustrating situation, she kept waiting with the expectation fading away. However, it seemed that God played a trick on her since she recieved the letter when she was almost overwhelmed by a de
12、ep sense of despair. 段子妍段子妍The shining from eyes faded away, which was substituted by the desperation and the numb sense. .suddenly, a rapid sound of footsteps fired her hope again.Stared at by the boy with dissatisfaction and suspicion, she was at a loss about what to do. 储加储加明明我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，
13、为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物The shine on her eyes faded away, she turning back to the ticken with a heavy gait/ step. Hardly had she decided to cut the cake when the door bell rang. The old lady rushed to the door, opening it with a trembling hand. .Suddenly, a smile of understan
14、ding flashed across her face. She hugged the boy, tears gathering in her eyes. 钱艺She still fail to catch sight of Myra, feeling a sudden surge of disappointment, the only fire of expectation fading away. When she intended to give up waiting, Johnnie rushed upstairs at full speed, grasping an envelop
15、 firmly. 章祎玮章祎玮The little boy cast a delighted look on his face as well. He stared at the street until the postman came into his sight. He ran towards the postman, only to be given a letter. With a hint of sadness, the lady picked up the letter. 詹雨詹雨 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证
16、实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物两段话内容如何顺畅衔接两段话内容如何顺畅衔接及第二句的关键部分及第二句的关键部分： Did her feeling change when she received the envelope? How do you know?Para2:Almost unwillingly she tore the envelope open. her feeling change (joy/expectation-disappointment)我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个
17、活的生物续续写的第二段要包含以下内容：写的第二段要包含以下内容： What was in the envelope? There lay a card peacefully, which read/said,”.” How did she feel when seeing the thing(s) in the envelope? Did she see her daughter at length? Did she receive some gifts? What was the best gift for her? What was the end of the story?a happy
18、 ending / a sad ending (out of expectation) disappointment excitement/relief)Contrast 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物四、 语言基础1. 随着时间的流逝2. 里面有一张卡片，上面写着.3. 一个孤独的身影站在门口，眼中充满了期待。4. 一个熟悉的身影出现在门口，眼中含有泪水5. (With) Time going by/ proceeding As time proceededInside/There la
19、y a card, which read/said ,”.” There stood a lonely figure by the door, (with) eyes filled with expectation. (独立主格)By the door stood a lonely figure. There appeared a familiar figure at the door, eyes filled with tears.At the door appeared a familiar figure,eyes filled with tears.A familiar figure c
20、ame into her sight我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物四、 语言基础5 房间里很安静。6 突然7 我很想陪伴你度过生日8我最想要的是女儿的陪伴9很抱歉我不能参加生日party9 The whole room was in silence.The whole room was covered with a blancket of silence. The whole room was in deadly silence, with only the deep breath and
21、 the pumping heart for company. Abruptly/ All of a sudden,Im desperate to accompany you/ to keep you company.Im sorry I fail to attend your birthday party.Im sorry for my absence from your .What I really desire was my daughters company.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个
22、活的生物四、 多种表达训练1. 她一想到女儿可能会来陪伴她，心里感到一阵激动。 On/Upon thinking that her daughter would come to accompany her, she was overcome/overwhelmed by excitement.The instant she thought her daughter would come to accompany her, an air of exitement floated in the air. No sooner had she thought of her daughters comi
23、ng for company than she held her breath with heart pumping wildly.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Her eyes twinkled with pleasure the instant she thought her daughter would come. The blood pulsed through her veins.Her face was lit/ brightened with excitement.Tear
24、s streamed down her face before any word. 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 2. 一看到手里的信封，她感到很失落。On/Upon seeing the envelope in the hand, she felt disappointed/ in despair. The instant she saw the envelop with a familiar sigature, her heart sank into an abyss of disa
25、ppiontment. No sooner had she seen the envelop with a familiar sigature than her heart sank into an abyss of disappiontment. She stared at the enveloped with a familiar signature, the brightness on her face fading away. (独立主格) She cast a disappointed look on the letter. 詹雨詹雨 The whole room was cover
26、ed with a blanket of silence. 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物She rushed to the mailbox in excitement, only to find there was merely an envelop. Disappointed as she was, she took it out.Deeply touched, she sobbed with happiness. Through her misty eyes, she saw. 李梁
27、钧李梁钧 So disappointed was she that her body shuddered slightly. 汪燕超汪燕超The delicious cake tasted bitter today. 梅秀玲梅秀玲 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物3. 收到了来自女儿的礼物后，她心里乐开了花。 Having received the present from her daughter, she jumped to joy/ let out a scream. （具体的动作（具
28、体的动作 ） Having received the present from her daughter, she was overjoyed, she was wild with joy.When she received. her face was lightened with happiness. Her lively eyes glittered （闪烁）（闪烁）like the black pearls full of joy.(瞿瞿 比喻比喻) The blood pulsed through her veins.An air of delight/ happiness float
29、ed in the air. 比喻比喻The whole room was covered with a blanket of hapiness.The whole room was bathed in happiness. 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Smile climbed on the old ladys face immediately with air filled with warmth. 舒露舒露A bitter smile climbed on her face. In
30、 an instant, she rushed to take the envelop, but it was not addressed. Tears rolled down her face, “I love you, too.” she replied with a satisfied and sweet smile. 鲍可润鲍可润我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物4. 看完了信，她非常生气。After reading the letter, she felt annoyed. .she
31、 lost her temper.After reading the letter, she hit the ceiling / went hot under the collar (勃然大怒勃然大怒)，(with) the whole body trembling. 独立主格独立主格 So annoyed was she that she tore it into pieces with trembling fingers. (倒装倒装)What she said in the letter made her blood boil（夸张）（夸张）.Having read the letter
32、, she tore it into pieces with trembling fingers. （具体动作）（具体动作）我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Para1： She stood by the window, watching. It was not until noon when she spotted Johnnie bringing the first present up, wrapped in colorful papers. She opened it with tra
33、nsparent expectation on face, but soon it faded away when she saw her cousins signature at the end of birthday card. Then she got another five cards, but there was still no Myras. So many cards as she received, she was unable to pretend to be merry. She was about to give up when Johnnie fetched an e
34、nvelope which neither had a stamp nor an address on it.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Para 2: Almost unwillingly she tore the envelop open. There was a single line. “Mom, go downstairs. I have a surprise for you.” Her eyes were lit up as soon as she noticed large words “ Happy birthday” written in her garden, where Myra stood by, smiling at her. Tears rolled down when Myra ran towards her and hugged her tightly. “Mom, I hope Im most unforgettable gift for you. And thanks for Johnnie.” “Of course, youre always my best gift.” 戴家慧