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1、Approaches and Strategies to Academic Writing Task 1UNIT 6- 流程图流程图IELTS WRITING流程图写作要点 n找到流程图的过程，起点，终点。n找到图上标出的已知动作，如果出现生词，尽量猜测。 流程图里面存在生词是完全正常的。生词多数都是名词或者动词，而且生词旁边还配有解释性的图画，所以大致方向是可以猜出来的。最好方法是直接抄到文章里。n按照步骤，分段描述，千万不能省略任何一步。n切记！加入流畅合理的表示顺序的关联词。n句型以主动为主，搭配被动，以及主语从句（例如：It can be seen from the graph tha
2、t）。n时态要使用一般现在时。Writing task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.Write at least 150 words.【高分范文及深度点评高分范文及深度点评】nThe diagram shows the stages in the process of makin
3、g chocolate.n【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process整个过程；stage阶段；step步骤】n【流程图特点之一流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】nChocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia. The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.n【开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacao tree，而是通过主题词ch
4、ocolate引出，否则显得太唐突】n【流程图特点之二流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。】n【流程图特点之三流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态】nFirstly，when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes. During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.n【流程图特点之四流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接
5、词】n【三个句子的并列：“句子A, 句子B and 句子C”。n【流程图特点之五流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】nNext, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory whe
6、re they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.nAfter being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is not needed for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.n【流程图特点之六流程图特
7、点之六：一般不需要写总结】Writing task 2nYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.nThe diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.nSummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevantn.nWrite at least 150
8、 words.Brick manufacturing* Clay: type of sticky earth that is used for making bricks, pots, etc. 【满分范文【满分范文】nThe process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which was just below the surface of soil in c
9、ertain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger.nThen the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to m
10、ake a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.nThose fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are then transf
11、erred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 -1300 . This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber.nOnce the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get package
12、d and delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage.n(215 words)【考官评语【考官评语】nBand 9nThis response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. All key features of each stage of the process are appropriately and accurately presented. An excellent overview is given at the begi
13、nning of the response and this skilfully incorporates part of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the whole process. The message is very easy to read, with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention. Paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully mana
14、ged. The language used is very fluent and sophisticated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor slips can be found and these do not detract from the high rating.雅思流程图的重点词汇解析：雅思流程图的重点词汇解析： 表述时间：表述时间：nin 10 daysnduring the period of 10 da
15、ysnThe process lasts for up to 10 daysnafter 10 daysn10 days passed until something happened.表示然后：表示然后：nthen,nnext, nin the next state, nfollowing that, nafter that,nthe next step in the stage is .表示过程表示过程：nprocess, nprocedure, nformation, nDevelopment表示步骤：表示步骤：nstep, nstage, nphase时间阶段：时间阶段：nafter
16、a period of months/days/minutes, nduring顺序连词顺序连词：nfirst, first of all, in the first stage, initially, to begin withnsecond, then, next, alsonafter that, at the same time, in the meantime, meanwhilenprior to, untilnthe first stage involves / in the second stage / in the third stage /nin the last stage / The next step in the stage is that.目的连词：目的连词：nin order to / in order that; nso as to / so that