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1、学习必备欢迎下载寒假专题书面表达三父母孩子1第二节 .书面表达（共1 题，满分30 分）5 月 10 日，为了庆祝母亲节，你班开展了 “ 尊敬父母 ” 为主题的活动。 假如你是校英语报记者。请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120 个词的新闻报道。1.时间：母亲节(5 月 10 日) 2.现象：大多数同学是独生子女，只看重自己不顾及父母3.宗旨：让每位学生都理解父母，尊敬父母4.活动：（1）送一份自制的礼物给父母（ 2）记住父母的生日，并表达祝愿（ 3）给父母一封信 （）父母上下班主动打招呼 5.感想或简短评论【答案】On May10th ,we had an activity in celeb

2、ration of mother s day, aiming to let everyone respect and considerate of his parents. As we know, most of us students today are the only child in our family, we often regard ourselves as the center of the family, without caring much about our parents. Therefore ,we held the activity to show our res

3、pect to our parents. In this activity , some of us gave presents made by ourselves to parents; Some remembered parents birthdays and decided to express our good wishes to them; Some said hello to parents when they went to work and returned home after work; Some even wrote a letter and had a heart-to

4、-heart talk with parents. After this activity ,all of us felt it was worthwhile. We developed an awareness of respecting our parents. What an unforgettable and meaningful day it is! 【解析】2子女和父母之间的代沟（generation gap）一直是困扰着父母和孩子双方的一个大问题。请你以儿子（女儿）的身份, 根据下表内容, 用英语写一篇文章, 谈谈子女如何做才能消除与父母间的隔阂。现象1随着社会的不断发展, 子女

5、和父母之间的代沟已成为一个社会问题。2双方之间的思想观念、行为习惯等存在很大差异。（请举例说明这一现象）学习必备欢迎下载解决办法1学会尊重父母, 孝顺是中华民族的传统美德。2避免冲突。3和父母多沟通, 交流。4请你另外举出一种解决办法或说明如何尊重父母、如何沟通交流等。注意：1字数 150 左右。2可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。3参考词汇：消除bridge【答案】 With the development of society, the generation gap between us and our parents has become a social problem, which a

6、lso troubles us. There are many differences in our thinking and habits. We often quarrel with each other just because of the generation gap. For example, .Here is some advice on helping bridge the gap.First, we should respect our parents, which is the virtue of Chinese people. This is the easiest to

7、 say and the hardest to do. Second, dont argue with them but try to reach a compromise. Perhaps we and our parents cannot agree on certain things. But we can meet each other halfway. And communicating with our parents as much as possible is also what we should do.In my opinion, 【解析】略322 (20101 广东省佛山

8、一中高三第一次模拟) 你校开展了 “ 敬重父母 ” 的活动，请你根据以下表格内容为你校的英语报刊写一则报道写作内容 案旨尊敬父母是中华民族的传统美德(moral value) 之一现状大多数同学都是独生子女，以自我为中心，不关心父母决定开展 “ 敬重父母 “ 的活动措施制定了十条规定，提出要求。如：要记住父母的生日；父母进门要和他们打招呼等。写作要求 1. 只能使用 5 个句子表达全部的内容。2. 标题与结尾已给出，不计入总句数。评分标准 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。Respecting Parents Program _ The program has been winnin

9、g praises from parents and society. People say that is what we should have done earlier. 【答案】One possible version: Respecting Parents Program Showing respect to parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values. However, as most students today are “ the only child” in their family, they often r

10、egard themselves as the 学习必备欢迎下载“ centre” of the family without caring much about their parents. To improve this situation, our school has started a program, which is called “ Respecting Parents Program” . Ten “ do s” have been worked out for the students to follow. For example, we are expected to r

11、emember our parents birthdays and express our good wishes to them and greet them when we see them returning home. The program has been winning praises from parents and society. People say that is what we should have done earlier. 【解析】424 （ 2010 安徽省合肥八中高三第一次月考）假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子的日记或书包这

12、一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。演讲稿的内容应包括：认为同学们不必为此苦恼；希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意：1. 词数在 100 左右；2. 可是适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Good morning, ladies and gentlemen ，Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. Thank you! 【答案】One possible versi

13、on Some of us are having diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there is no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought w

14、e might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we d like to trust them. If you don t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around -they are bound to read it. 【解

15、析】【答案】（略）【解析】试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，感激父母的养育之恩。文章的要求的字数较少，所以学习必备欢迎下载在写作的时候要简洁明了，不要啰嗦。要点都已经给出了，考生只需要翻译，在翻译时要使用合适的连接词把各要点连接成文，成为一篇流畅的整体作文。同时也要使用较为高级的词汇和句型让文章更有特点。考点：考查提纲类短文写作点评：本文属于提纲类作文，该类作文要求覆盖所有要点，使用合适连接词和高级词汇和句型。如果可能在写作时，可以使用恰当的谚语。6全体高三学生目前正处在紧张复习迎考的氛围中。假如你叫李华，是江西泰和中学一名高三学生，面对目前的压力，想和父母说说知心话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信

16、形式表达出来。主要内容如下：知心话感恩关切鼓励，倾注爱心对父母的期望1. 多交流，使自己保持良好状态2. 创造条件， 给自己提供适时帮助学习打算 注意： 1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。 2. 词数： 120 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【答案】 one possible version:Dear Mom and Dad,The annual University Entrance Examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-he

17、art talk with you. Throughout these years, I always feel grateful to you for your unfailing help, care and love. I have been making remarkableprogress in my studies thanks to your constant encouragement. It ll be no more than one year before I take the University Entrance Examination, which makes me

18、 under greater pressure. I need frequent support. Good learning conditions and timely help from you will do me a lot of good.Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you always have. I m fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing. I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examinati

19、on so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects. It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit. If possible, as a family member, I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit.I am quite confident o

20、f my study. I do wish you good health and a happy life.Yours ever,Li Hua【解析】略7随着年龄的增长，我们总想挣脱父母的怀抱，渐渐和父母产生分歧。假设你是李华，某中学英语杂志社正在开展题为“How toget along well with your parents” 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇征文稿。1. 事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的建议；2. 跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静；3. 多花时间跟父母在一起，跟他们一块郊游等。注意： 1. 词数： 120 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。How to get a

21、long well with your parents_学习必备欢迎下载_【答案】As you are growing, you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions. However, your parents will disagree with you. Your relationship with your parents may be in trouble right now. Here are some tips for you to avoid quarrel

22、s with your parents.Discuss the rules ahead of time and not at the last minute. This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no to before you make plans. Try to remain calm when your parents say no to something. Youd better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with th

23、em.Spend time with your family. Communicate with each other at home. Suggest activities that your whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike, a bike ride, or going to the beach.【解析】试题分析： 这是一篇提纲类书面表达，该书面表达题要求考生就“如何处理好与父母之间的关系”提出建议。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己

24、的观点，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，答题时要注意：使用一般现在时；以祈使句为主；不要遗漏要点。注意文章的连贯性和整体性。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。【亮点说明】 范文用了一些词组：如 in trouble ahead of time free from your parents, feel ready to, say yes or no to, listen to what they have to say, 等等。句型上也是多变： As you are growing, you may want to be free from your p

25、arents and feel ready to make your own decisions. 这句话用了状语从句， This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no to before you make plans. 和 Youd better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them. 这两句话用了宾语从句， 如果文章最后加上下面的句子，则可与首段呼应， 显得整体性更好：Follow these tips, and you w

26、ill enjoy a good relationship with your parents.考点：考查提纲类书面表达8随着年龄的增长，我们总想挣脱父母的怀抱，渐渐和父母产生分歧。假设你是李华，学习必备欢迎下载某中学英语杂志社正在开展题为“How to get along well with your parents” 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇征文稿。1. 事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的建议；2. 跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静；3. 多花时间跟父母在一起，跟他们一块郊游等。注意： 1. 词数： 120 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。How to get along wel

27、l with your parents_【答案】As you are growing, you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions. However, your parents will disagree with you. Your relationship with your parents may be in trouble right now. Here are some tips for you to avoid quarrels with your paren

28、ts.Discuss the rules ahead of time and not at the last minute. This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no to before you make plans. Try to remain calm when your parents say no to something. Youd better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them.Spend time wit

29、h your family. Communicate with each other at home. Suggest activities that your whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike, a bike ride, or going to the beach.【解析】试题分析：该书面表达题要求考生就“如何处理好与父母之间的关系”提出建议。答题时要注意：使用一般现在时；以祈使句为主；不要遗漏要点。注意文章的连贯性和整体性。考点：书面表达。【亮点说明】语言地道。如free from your parents,

30、 feel ready to, say yes or no to, listen to what they have to say, 等等。如果文章最后加上下面的句子，则可与首段呼应， 显得整体性更好： Follow these tips, and you will enjoy a good relationship with your parents.9假设你是李华 , 距高考还有一周的时间，现在你正在备战高考, 中学生活即将结束, 在这个特殊时期, 请根据以下内容给自己的父母写一封信。内容要点：1. 感谢父母多年来, 特别是高三这一年来的关怀。2. 向父母简要汇报自己的学习情况。3. 高考

31、之后帮父母做些家务和自己的打算。注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear parents,Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously. 学习必备欢迎下载【答案】Dear parents,Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously. I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion, because words have fai

32、led me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to Senior Three. These days I have been studying hard and have made some progress. And everything has got along well with my college entrance examination. I will perform my ability

33、in the future exam. I hope you both can set your mind at rest.After the exam, I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before.And I also mean to learn to cook for you both in person.My dear parents, everything is going on well with me and do have a rest! Best wishes! Yours【解析】

34、试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。假设你是李华, 距高考还有一周的时间，现在你正在备战高考 , 中学生活即将结束, 在这个特殊时期, 请根据以下内容给自己的父母写一封信。内容要点： 1. 感谢父母多年来, 特别是高三这一年来的关怀。2. 向父母简要汇报自己的学习情况。 3. 高考之后帮父母做些家务和自己的打算。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意词数100 左右【亮点说明】 Now I know

35、clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously.这里含有一个宾语从句；After the exam, I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before.这里含有一个定语从句。考点：提纲类书面表达10由于观点和立场的不同,孩子与父母之间时常存在一些矛盾和问题,某英文报社正在就 “ 如何改善孩子与父母之间的关系” 这一主题征稿,请你写一篇英语短文,发表自己的观点和看法。要点如下 : 1. 存在问题 : 孩子 :不信任父母 ,不愿意与父母交流；经常对父母发脾气

36、父母 :处理问题的方式简单,把自己的想法强加(impose . . . . . . on)给孩子 2. 解决办法 : 孩子 :多和父母沟通；尊敬父母,多体谅父母 父母 :多和孩子相处,耐心听取他们的想法注意 :可适当增加细节；词数:120 左右【答案】A good parent-child relationship is expected, but there are often problems. As for children, they don t trust their parents and are unwilling to communicate with them. Some c

37、hildren lose their temper easily because of the study burden, while some parents tend to neglect their children s ideas and try to impose their own ideas on them. How can these problems be solved? In my opinion, children should be considerate and respect their parents. When they disagree with their

38、parents, they should tell them. On the other hand, parents should learn to listen to their children s ideas instead of deciding everything for them. In this way, a good parent-child relationship can be established. 【解析】本文的主题的如何改善孩子与父母之间的关系，与考生的生活实际非常贴切，学习必备欢迎下载有很强的可写性，正因为是熟悉的事情，所以考生有话可说。本文的要点基本上都已经给出， 只需要按照适当的顺序组织成英文即可。在写作的时候注意使用合适的连接词和高级的词汇，让文章更流畅，同时也要使用2-3 个高级的句型如强调句，倒装句让文章更有档次。