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1、HOWTOWRITESTEPBYSTEP?,Whywritingissodifficultforyou?,Reason1.dontknowwhattowrite.写什么,Reason2.dontknowhowtowriteit.怎么写,书面表达：假设你是李华，你校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：介绍比赛的相关内容；说明你打算参加的原因；询问对方的意向。（注意：词数100左右。）,Step1发散思维，扩充内容（enrichcontents）,1.介绍比赛的相关内容,我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,
2、我校，茂名市第17中学，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,2说明你打算参加的原因,原因,1.喜欢学习英语,2.想提高口语能力,3.希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友,对西方国家的文化感兴趣。,口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。,共同学习，共同进步。,3.询问对方的意见,你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的
3、回复。,我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。,Step2翻译句子，有所舍弃(translate),很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,表达1同位语IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,myschool,thebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity,planstoholdanEnglishhumorousstorycomp
4、etitionnextFriday.,同位语,表达2定语从句IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,myschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity,planstoholdanEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionnextFriday.,定语从句,表达3被动语态IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,anEnglis
5、hhumorousstorycompetitionwillbeheldnextFridayinmyschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulschoolinthecity.,一般将来时的被动语态,Reason1：,我想参加这个比赛是因为我喜欢英语，对西方文化感兴趣。,表达1：直接翻译IwanttotakepartinthecompetitionbecauseIlikeEnglish,Iaminterestedinwesternculture.,表达2：定/宾语从句Thereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionis
6、thatIlikeEnglishandaminterestedinwesternculture.,表达3：升级词汇ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIamfondofEnglishandcrazyaboutwesternculture.,直译,定、宾语从句,升级词汇,Reason2：,想提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。,表达1：直译ThesecondreasonisthatIwanttoimprovemyoral(spoken)English,becauseitplaysanimportantroleinlan
7、guagelearning.,表达2：定语从句Asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIwanttoimprovemyoral(spoken)English.,表达3：升级表达，Asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIlongtoimprovemyoral(spoken)Englishbymakinguseofthiscompetition.,直译,定语从句,升级表达,Reason3：,
8、希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友，共同学习，共同进步。,表达1直译Iwishtomakefriendsbasedoncommoninterestandwanttolearntogether,progresstogether.,表达2定语从句Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhohascommoninterestwithmeandthenlearntogether,progresstogether.,表达3升级表达Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhosehascommoninterestwithmesothatwecanlearntogetherandp
9、rogressatthesametime.,升级表达,定语从句,直译,询问对方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。,表达1.IknowyouarehumorousandgoodattellingstoriessoIwanttoknowwhetheryouareinterestedinthecompetitionornot.Ifyouranswerisyes,Iwillofferyoumoredetailedinformation.Iamlookingforwardforyourreply.,表达2.Yourhumo
10、rsenseandtalentoftellingstoriesimpressedmesodeeplythatIstronglyrecommendyoutotakepartinthecompetition.Ifyouranswerispositive,moredetailedinformationwillbeoffered.Iamlookingforwardforyourreply.,直译,升级表达,Step3连句成篇,IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,anEnglishhumorouss
11、torycompetitionwillbeheldnextFridayinmyschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity.ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIamfondofEnglishandcrazyaboutwesternculture.Asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIlongtoimprovemyoral(spoken)Englishbymakingu
12、seofthiscompetition.Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhosehascommoninterestwithmesothatwecanlearntogetherandprogressatthesametime.YourhumorsenseandtalentoftellingstoriesimpressedmesodeeplythatIstronglyrecommendyoutotakepartinthecompetition.Ifyouranswerispositive,moredetailedinformationwillbeoffered.Iamloo
13、kingforwardtoyourreply.,Step4加入连词，使篇章连贯,DearLinda,IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,anEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionwillbeheldnextFridayinmyschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity.ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIamfondofEnglishandcr
14、azyaboutwesternculture.Whatsmore(inaddition/ontheonehand),asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIlongtoimprovemyoral(spoken)Englishbymakinguseofthiscompetition.Lastbutnotleast(ontheotherhand),Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhosehascommoninterestwithmesothatwecanlearntog
15、etherandprogressatthesametime.YourhumorsenseandtalentoftellingstoriesimpressedmesodeeplythatIstronglyrecommendyoutotakepartinthecompetition.Ifyouranswerispositive,moredetailedinformationwillbeoffered.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.SincerelyyoursLiHua,Homework,模仿写作：假设你是张磊，你校拟定于下周六举行一次志愿者活动，去敬老院（gerocomium）看望老人。请你给目前在本市就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：介绍活动的相关内容；说明你打算参加的原因；询问对方的意向。（注意：词数100左右。）,Thanksforyourattention,