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1、2013 年上海高考英语作文【篇一：近五年上海高考英语作文题目及范文】 2016 年上海高考英语作文题目假设你是中华中学一名中学生，最近你正在参与一个研究性学习研究调查，调查课题为“ 关于父母是否对孩子感到骄傲” 1. 简要描述这些数据 2. 分析该原因父母：对孩子感到骄傲 80% 孩子：认为父母对自己感到骄傲 60% a survey conducted recently indicates that the parents who are proud of their children are twenty percent more than the children who consid
2、er themselves as prides of their parents. there exist two reasons, which may account for this subtle difference. first, conservative chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their kids. this tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a str
3、ong sense of self-confidence. second, the current educational system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. this bias unfairly undermines the significance of tal
4、ents for art and sports, which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页，共 10 页without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods, a kid would never end up w
5、ith a positive grown-up. 2015 年上海高考英语作文题目：我校将举办读书节活动，需要从下面三幅图片中选出你喜欢的一幅作为宣传图片，请你给老师写一封信，内容应包括： 1、你的选择 2、图片的简要，描述 3、你的理由 2015 上海高考英语作文范文 recently, having been delighted to see the notice that there is a need of our reading festival to make a choice among three creative pictures for advertisement. aft
6、er a long time comparison, the picture on the bottom right corner earns my favor. as is clearly depicted in the picture, there sits a foreigner in front of the library who is concentrating on the books, immersing himself into the world of literature and feeling peaceful and satisfied, which turns ou
7、t to be thought-provoking and enlightening. part of the reasons for my choice is that it vividly reveals the significance of reading books to students, which provides you with the power to escape from the hustle and bustle in the metropolis. for instance, whenever you feel puzzled, confused or stres
8、sed, you can always refer to books and consequently find peace and satisfactory solutions in them.精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页，共 10 页i d, however, perfectly appreciate your considering my selection if you feel that choice and reason are in lined with your requirements and best
9、wishes for your reading festival.2014 年上海高考英语作文题目：学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目健康，娱乐，文化中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目时尚，职业规划，读者反馈中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点，邮件须包括以下内容。 1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由； 2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。 dear sir/madam:i ve just learned that our school english newspaper is collecting public suggestion for cont
10、ent revisions. im writing this letter to share with you my opinions. as far as im concerned, it is more reasonable to add the fashion section and abandon the amusement part. my reasons are as follows. first of all, the appearance of fashion is an inevitable result of social development. the progress
11、 of civilization has close relationships with the promotion of fashion. in addition, with the pursuit of fashion, students may try new activities and experience new products, which have enormously beneficial effects on social civilization and the development of science and technology. last but not l
12、east, fashion reflects the standards of beauty in a period, which is always influenced by the values of the society and the productivity level. in a word, what suits ourselves best is unique for everyone and will never be out of date. however, compared to fashion, entertainment should be abandoned d
13、ue to these factors. the accelerate spread of computer games construct an ueal world which cause the students addiction to the virtual world. only by 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页，共 10 页keeping active in the real world could one really take a meaningful life. besides, entertainm
14、ent might cause isolation and depression feeling about life.consequently, i strongly propose that it would be better to add fashion and abandon entertainment. yours, cheng fei 2013 年上海高考英语作文题目：上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所博物馆还是社区图书馆征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求： 1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；从便利性，专业性等方面对这
15、两个场所进行比照 dear sir/ madam,i ve just learned that shanghai museum is to hold a famous painting exhibition and youre collecting public suggestions about which location to hold it. im writing this letter to share with you my opinions. as far as im concerned, it is more reasonable to hold the painting ex
16、hibition in shanghai museum than in community libraries. my reasons are as follows. on the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach shanghai museum, located in the center of the city. visitors can go there by subway and bus and so on. whats more, shanghai museum is much more extensive tha
17、n community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environment to appreciate the famous paintings. on the other hand, shanghai museum, a well-known and distinguished museum at home and abroad, is more professional in holding painting exhibitions. whats of great significance is that no
18、t only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页，共 10 页security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition. consequently, i strongly propose that t
19、he painting exhibition is to be held in the shanghai museum. yours, wang min 2012 年上海高考英语作文题目：上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩amy 所在班级的两堂绘画课如下图，回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括： 对两堂绘画课的具体描述； 你从中获得的启发。 today i had an unusual experience , which refreshed my mind. with pupils i spent two periods of time in a primary school, watchin
20、g them【篇二： 2013 上海高考英语写作陆佳伟】 2013 年上海高考英语作文评析及范文复旦附中教师陆佳伟话题：上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所博物馆还是社区图书馆征集公众意见。假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求： 1简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择； 2说明你的理由从便利性、专业性等方面对这两个场所进行比照。精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页，共 10 页今年上海卷高考英语作文的话题不难。与2012 年的作文话题相比，考生更加明确作文的要求，不容易写偏题。为博物馆选址这个话题
21、贴近百姓生活，人人有话可说；并且其中一个选择是社区图书馆，这种距离上的临近性使考生能够结合生活经验，说出自己真实的想法。我觉得这是近几年上海高考英语作文话题中出得最好的一次。下文我将结合今年的话题，谈谈如何写好英语议论文。 1. 任务完成度标准：这主要是看一篇文章是否答复了任务中提到的所有问题并达成了所有的要求；另外，它还包括文章的内容是否充实、完整。今年这篇文章的要求可以被细化成以下几点：1交代写信目的；2做出场所选择；3讲理由多角度；4比照两个场所；5撰写正式信件。如果这5 点中有遗漏，应该被视为没有彻底完成任务。 2. 观点的论述标准：观点应该有效地展开，并且颇具见地；作者应该展现批判性
22、思维的能力，而且需要使用恰当的理由、例子或其他证据来支持自己的立场。就今年的话题而言，首先不能为了支持某个场所而彻底批判另一个场所，因为两个场所各有利弊，文中应该展现权衡利弊的过程。场所的便利与否因人而异，即对本小区的居民方便不代表对其他地方来的参观者方便。另外，美的体验是由多种因素构成的有机整体，并不是只要绘画作品美轮美奂就万事大吉了；这种体验中还包括了欣赏的情境。当然，盈利角度是个实际问题，也可以加入讨论。3. 连贯与衔接标准：衔接手段应该运用自如，行文连贯；思维应该有连续性，不应该有唐突的跳跃；熟练地运用分段。精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - -
23、 - - -第 6 页，共 10 页今年的作文要求比较两个场所，因此牵涉的观点较多，应该运用一些必要的连接词，但是不必每句话都用，这样反而画蛇添足，读上去断断续续，文章无法流淌起来。文中既有支持的观点也有反对的观点，如何使他们有逻辑地成为一个整体而不是像马赛克似的斑驳凌乱，需要技巧也需要计划：要符合读者的思维习惯也要突出重点。 4. 词汇的运用标准：自然地使用丰富的、准确的、地道的、恰当的词汇；娴熟地运用一些并不十分常见的词汇。词汇的运用需要自然，更高的境界则不着痕迹。它应该是内容的帮手，而不应该抢了内容的风头。当然，精准的和诗情画意般的词汇往往能够打动读者，因为写作不等同于写备忘录或开购物单
24、内容充实而用词乏味。可以说，写作者如果没有了词汇，等于被切断双膝，将寸步难行。今年的作文题很容易写得干巴巴，而由于这篇文章要探讨的是绘画展出地点，那是否可以应景地使用一些具有画面感的词汇呢？另外，我想在此破除一些关于词汇运用的迷思myth 。 myth 1 ：词汇变化越多越好，词用得越大越好。 myth 2 ：英语是外语，很难地道使用。这个问题有两个层面。首先，这样想的人本身对自己的语言学习目标设定的比较低。另外，他们的学习和使用方法有误：在阅读、收听英语时，应该时时留意和中文表述方式不同的用法，而在运用时应该使用自己熟悉的英语表达，不该把中文硬生生地翻成英语。myth 3 ：应该全文使用朴实
25、无华的小词。和那些词不惊人死不休的人相比，绝对的小词使用者走向了另一个极端。写作者不应该只基于词的长短和自己所估计的词频来判断是否使用某一个词，因为说到底，我们每一个人的知识都是有限的，除非是饱读诗书者，否则其实很难判断一个词的使用频率，更不能精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 7 页，共 10 页使用假想的标准来 “ 封杀 ” 一些词，这样做是愚昧的。我们可以借助字典，比方原版的同义词词典thesaurus来验证我们的猜测。 5. 语法和句型标准：没有明显的语法、用法、大小写、标点符号等的错误；灵活并准确地使用多种句型结构；句型的变换
26、是有意义的。没有语法错误似乎与使用较复杂的结构和句型是一对矛盾。我建议在平时训练中经常挑战自己，尝试使用更多的表达，而不要因为害怕犯错只用自己熟悉的、过于简单化的表达。相反，在考试中却应该使用自己熟悉的表达，而不应该铤而走险，甚至自己创造表达。句型的变换是需要的，否则文字读来机械呆板、索然无味。但是，如果为了变化而变化，就和过于刻意地替换词汇一样，矫揉造作，让读者觉得这个写作者要么就是幼稚的初学者，要么就是浮夸的、自以为是的家伙。值得注意的是，今年的作文要特别留心写信的一些常用句式。以下是我撰写的2013 年上海高考英语范文： 383 guoquan road shanghai, 200433
27、 8 june 2013 shanghai museum 201 renmin avenue shanghai, 200003 dear sir or madam: my proposed location for the exhibitioni am writing to express my opinion on where to hold the coming art exhibition. i believe that shanghai museum is the ideal venue for this event.精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 -
28、- - - - - -第 8 页，共 10 页 to hold the exhibition in a community library may provide easy access for the communitys residents, and therefore a wider range of people might have an opportunity to appreciate art in close proximity. however, the drawbacks of such a location outweigh its benefits. though co
29、nvenient for the residents living in or near the community, it may not be easily accessible to all visitors. also, to have visitors constantly going in and out would disrupt the natural rhythm of community life. moreover, once associated with a community, the exhibition would very likely lose its pr
30、estige and in turn deserve only low ticket prices, thus possibly confining it to a nonprofit event. in contrast, shanghai museum is located in the city center, which makes many thanks. yours sincerely,wang min【篇三： 2013 上海高考英语作文参考范文】上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所博物馆还是社区图书馆征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足
31、以下要求： 1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择； 2. 说明你的理由从便利性、专业性等方面对这两个场所进行比照。 dear exhibition organizers of shanghai museum: my name is wang min, a student studying at shanghai xx high school. i am writing to offer my views on where the exhibition 精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 9 页，共 10 页should be held
32、. as far as i am concerned, the advantages of shanghai museum outweigh those of the community library. in terms of convenience, shanghai museum is a much better choice for visitors who may not know well about shanghai. it is located near peoples square, the best -known transportation hub and tourist
33、 site in this metropolis, and is absolutely easy for anyone to find it. considering that the exhibition may attract a lot of viewers, the broad streets there can provide easy access and sufficient parking to meet their needs. another advantage of shanghai museum is its considerable experience in org
34、anizing such exhibitions. as we all know, a wide range of activities are held there every year and it is equipped with suitable facilities that ensure the best display of paintings. so i believe no one would deny that we should hand such an important task to this reliable organization. modest as my reasoning may seem, i believe it makes sense. i hope my views could have a place in your consideration. thank you! yours sincerely wang min精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 10 页，共 10 页