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1、精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载中考英语作文题型分析与例文评析:命题作文命题作文即给出一个统一的题目,限定考生写作的具体范畴,要求考生就同一主题展 开表达或评论;写好命题作文的关键是紧扣主题、立意明确、观点清楚;命题作文例 1To be a lovely Shanghainese20XX 年上海市英语中考题 审题:该题的重点在于阐述作为一个可爱的上海人,我们关键应怎样做?在 20XX 年 的考生作文中,有一部分同学发生了严峻的偏题,把描述重点放在形容上海是怎样的一个 大都市,因此失分很多;由此看来,审题的精确是特别重要的;同学作文: Shanghai is

2、developing quickly everyday. Quite a few foreigners come to visit Shanghai. As the hosts of Shanghai, we must be lovely Shanghaineses to tell the visitors that Shanghai is an international city. To be a lovely Shanghainese, first, we should do our best to make the city more beautiful to show our ent

3、husiasm. Next, we should be kind and friendly to everyone. We must do so to make our guests fell our zeal. Finally, we should study and work hard to rise our ability. Shanghai is developing and we should make progress to follow the epoch. 老师评析:该篇作文行文流畅,结构清楚,以“ first,Next ,Finally”的结构描述,层次感很强;不定式的恰当运

4、用表达了考生较好的语法功底;老师拟评分: 9 分例 2Four years school life 审题:该题要求考生对四年的中同学活进行回忆和总结,适合以夹叙夹议的方式来写 作;(此外,从情感训练的角度来看,阅卷老师总期望读到考生回忆自己美好、欢乐的初 中生活,而不是厌恶自己的母校、老师、同学等消极心情的表达;)同学作文: Ive been in my middle school for four years. Four years school life plays an important role in my life. I enjoy making friends, getting

5、knowledge and having interesting time in my school. I have also made friendship with lots of classmates, and I have also been taught different lessons by lots of different patient teachers. I have grown up a lot in the past four years. I will never forget my four years school life. 名师归纳总结 - - - - -

6、- -第 1 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载老师评析:整篇作文特别明快、流畅,表达了考生对母校依依不舍的情怀;由于是对中同学活的回忆和总结,考生恰当地挑选以现在完成时作为主要的时态来强调影响和结果 ,文中 plays an important 语法功底;老师拟评分: 10 分role 这一词组和被动语态的正确运用也表达了考生良好的词汇和中考英语作文题型分析与例文评析:应用文应用文写作应用文主要包括信函、电邮、日记、通知、广告、电话等形式,它要求考生不仅能表达题中的主要内容,仍能够正确地运用各种文本格式进行规范的书写,这也是考生对于英语传统文

7、化明白多少的反映;因此,考生应在临考前系统地复习各种文本格式以及打电话 的规范用语,以做处处变不惊、百战百胜;例 3写一封信给你在云南省西双版纳市的笔友李帆,告知他你很情愿与他交伴侣,并邀请他到上海来旅行;审题: 该题要求考生以规范的信件格式来书写,并把题中所显现的信息点都涵概在内;建议考生可把题目中的信息点都一一划出,以免发生遗漏;同学作文:Lifan Xishuangbanna Yunnan Province China May 25th, 2004 Dear Lifan, Thank you for your letter. Im glad to be your pen-friend.

8、We are the same years old, but we were born in different places. In my imagination, Xishuangbanna is a very beautiful place. There are a lot of plants and animals. You know I look forward to visiting Xishuangbanna. Would you like to come to Shanghai. Id like to invite you to Shanghai in summer holid

9、ay. Shanghai is also a beautiful place. It is a modern city. There are a lot of interesting places such as the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, the Bund, and Nanjing Road 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载Walkway. If you come here, I will show you around Shanghai. You can liv

10、e at my home and my mother will cook you much delicious food. Lets be best friends. Yours sincerely, Xiaomin 老师拟评分: 9 分例 4写一篇题为 “ A Visit To_”的日记;审题:该题为半命题式作文;考生除了要留意运用正确的日记格式,仍可依据自己的 体会和熟识程度来挑选、确定文章的主题 . 同学作文:May 25th, 2004 sunnyA Visit To Jinmao Building Jinmao Building has Chinese traditional sty

11、les and it is also modern. It is the signal construction of Shanghai. It is located in the center of Lujiazui Financial Area. Our family visited Jinmao Building today. The traffic there is very convenient. You can got here by tunnel and No.2 subway. And if you live near it, you can walk there just l

12、ike our family. We went to the eighty-eighth floor of Jinmao Building. We saw the whole view of Shanghai there. Please come to Jinmao Building, and you will get some unexpected gains there. 老师评析:整篇作文主题明确,对于金茂大厦的描述也较具体,文中“ the signal construction”一词是全文的亮点;但整篇文章的层次不够清楚,句子也以简洁句为主,对 于参观这一动词的阐述仍不够充分;老师拟评

13、分: 8 分中考英语作文题型分析与例文评析:看图写话看图写话名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备欢迎下载同学的写看图写话是中学英语作文常考的一种形式,但随着牛津版教材的大量应用,作才能有了较大的提高,因此中考作文的要求和难度也相应提高;所以,在中 考作文中继续显现简洁的叙事型看图写话的可能性很小,但有可能会供应应考生一些具有寓意的漫画或图片,要求考生从中发觉问题、提出自己的观点,这对考生的 的娴熟运用都提出了更高的要求;规律思维才能和英语语言审题:这幅漫画蕴涵了一个深刻的主题即战争与和平,这与当今世界的热点问

14、题亲密 相关,它不仅考核考生是否能流畅地表达自己的观点,更需要考生站在人文关怀的高度来 观看整个世界;同学作文:A Represent of Freedom and Peace Almost everyday we can see there are always a huge number of pigeons enjoying the sunbath in some large squares, but do you often care what a white pigeon stands for. That is peace. For hundreds of years, people

15、 always regard pigeons as a represent of freedom and peace. That is because of not only its lovely pure figure, but also its great passion to the outside world. Till now, I still cant help thinking of such a picture: In Iraq, a boy was watching a white pigeon over his head. The background was full o

16、f wounded solders and guns. Thus, this lovely white pigeon was contrastive to this iced background and gave people a deep consideration. Suddenly, athought comes into my mind: Why there have been so many wars in the world just for someones own interest. Why cant people live like as mall pigeon with

17、freedom. I hope there will not be wars, FOREVER. 老师评析:应当说,要把这篇看图作文写好是有相当难度的,但考生以特别流畅的笔 调从鸽子联想到自由与和平,再联想到发生在伊拉克的战争;文风成熟老练,这在中同学 的作文中是难能珍贵的;老师拟评分: 10 分例 6审题:该图要求考生先看懂漫画,对它进行清楚的描述,同时依据其隐匿的 寓意提出自己的观点,如在此图中应关注树木被砍伐而提出环保的重要性;名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载同学作文:Seeing thi

18、s picture, we know that these trees have been cut down. But as a very little baby in the picture, he must be puzzled. He will ask: What are these. Are these trees. Of course, in our imagination, trees must be tall, strong and green enough. Actually, his question shows humans a problem that is worth

19、thinking about. The covering rate of the forest in the world has kept decreasing these years and it caused a lot of problems on environment. As we all know, trees are very important in our life. They can make the air fresher, reduce natural disasters and soon. So I appeal: Dont cut down trees. Let s

20、 make our earth greener for our later generation. Dont let the children think trees are only roots. 老师评析:整篇作文结构清楚,全文分三段,第一段具体地描述漫画的内容;其次段 阐述其蕴涵的寓意即环保对于世界和后代们的重要性;第三段提出作者的号召,使文章的结尾明快、有力!老师拟评分: 10 分提示性作文:就是给出一个标题或无标题,给出具体的内容,规定肯定的字数,让考生写 出作文;由于这类作文已经规定了文章的中心思想和主要内容,因此考生可以不再列出提 纲,只要把留意力集中在如何正确、完整地用英文词句

21、表达出中心思想和内容就可以了;写好提示性作文应留意的事项:1、认真审题,明确要求;对所给信息反复阅读,弄清这个题目要表达什么,然后对所 给信息进行整理、组织,依据自己的写作思路使之条理化;2、确保语言精炼;在写作过程中,考生应时刻提示自己依据已给出的信息点去写,不 必有太多的发挥;但也不必依据信息点去逐句翻译;用自己熟识的短语、句型去表达要点;把握好文章的长度,不要字数过多或过少;例题分析 一、汉语提示 依据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合规律的短文;所给英文提示词 语必需用上;字数 6070 左右;1、昨天晚上我和妈妈出去漫步;名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 5 页,

22、共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载2、在路上我遇到了一个外国人;3、他向我询问去温泉饭店(theHotSpringHotel )的路;4、我告知他沿着路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能观察饭店;5、他特别感谢我,我也为能帮他而感到兴奋;提示词语: go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that (分析)写作指导: 依据提示我们明白到这是一篇记叙文,所以考生应立刻想到时间(yesterday ),大事( how

23、to evening ),地点( on the road ),人物( I, my mother and a foreigner show the way);其次观看信息点,我们确定这篇文章应用过去式来表达;然后,确定这 个大事应用第一人称来表达;最终,依据信息点合理组织文章,别忘用上提示词语;(例文)Yesterday evening,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreigner. He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.I told him to walk

24、 along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help.I was happy that I could help him. 二、英语提示 你收到一封询问信,请你以旅行社工作人员的身份完成任务;Dear Ace Travel, Im Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to sp

25、end our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We dont mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more

26、 than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots. Thanks a lot. Yours, Li Ming 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 6 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载请你依据来信,从以下所给的地方中挑选一个或两个符合Li Ming 要求的地方,向他提出建议;( 80 字左右) Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai 写作指导:这篇作文结合了提示性作文和应用文的写作要求;

27、第一,我们要读懂英语 提示的内容,也就是那封询问信的内容;其次,我们要知道书信的写作方法;针对本道题,仍要留意,这封信是以旅行社工作人员的身份来写的;最终,仍要留意询问信后的要求-从以下所给的地方中挑选一个或两个符合Li Ming 要求的地方,向他提出建议及字数限制;下面,我们来看看范文是怎么写的;One Possible version: Dear Li Ming, Im Gina. Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think e

28、ither Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and comfortable in both places. Whats more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day. Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. (Its also

29、 a wonderful place for shopping. )And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. (And you can also enjoy exotic dances. )Thats just my idea. I hope it would give you some help. Yours, Gina 对于,提示作文的写法大家都会了吗?不管什么作文的写作,都要要求我们对英语的 词汇、短语以及常用的表达

30、方法有肯定的积存;所以,在学习写作的同时,不要放松对以 上几个方面的复习;英语写作是中考中检测同学语言应用才能的最重要部分;提高中考写作水平,需要有效的训练;正确无误的造句才能和各种文体的写作技巧,两者缺一不行;正确无误的造句才能名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 7 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载这得从中学一开头就抓起,第一可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练,做到有效积存,扩大视野,敏捷运用;如:如何修饰一个最简洁、最常用的 “说”?我们就可以写出很多:say some thing gladly(merrily excitedly sa

31、dly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently)仍可说 say some thing in a friendly way. 同心情;替换了一个副词,生动地表达了说话时的不扩词有: play football play foot ball in the play ground play football in the play ground with my friends play football in the play ground with my friends after school. 对其中的动词我们仍可

32、替换成 playgames ,play the piano等,后面的状语都可以有相应的更换;又如: a friend my friend my close friend my close friend named Mary. 以此类推,我们可以仿照着进行扩句训练;The students love life. The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life verymuch.为了防止句型的重复,我们仍可以转换不同的句型,来表达同一内容; 如:The dictionary is so big that it doesnt fit in to

33、my pocket. The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket. into my pocket. The dictionary is not small enough to fit 这样训练写句的方法,可以帮忙同学克服心里先想好中文,然后逐字翻译的不良习惯,从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯;在平常的学习中,我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇,设计一些中译英句子,虽然对中学同学有肯定的难度,但长此以往可以有效地把握正确的句子结构,巩固所学词汇,做到活学活用,为中考作文作好铺垫;在牛津 7B 开头,我们针对所学的句型和同学日常学习生活的真

34、实情形,设计了许多中译英,如:1.尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80 多岁了,他们仍能每天早上坚持锤炼;although 2.你与其他同学不同,你总是喜爱独自一人呆在家里;be different from 名师归纳总结 3.去天目山参观是一件很高兴的事;It sfun 第 8 页,共 10 页- - - - - - -精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载4. 我有个建议,把我们旧的书报杂志送给班级阅览角,这样同学们就会有更多的书可以共享; suggestion 5.在暴风雨中,我们最好不放风筝,由于它可能让我们触电;because,get a electric shock

35、 6.新的隧道将把上海和崇明岛连接起来;linkup with7.这位驾驶员从这次事故中吸取了教训;learn a lesson 8.我们赢了这场竞赛,他们看上去很扫兴;win ,look 9.你们校运会预备工作进展如何?get on with 10.我们希望着 20XX 年的北京奥运会 .look forward to有了扎实的组词、造句才能,要写好一篇中考作文,就犹如裁缝做服装预备好了上等的面料,假犹如学对中考中可能出现的各种文体的格式,一般行文规律能明白把握,那么中考作文定能获得中意的成果;把握各种写作技巧把握各种文体的写作技巧,我们可以分两步走:考前预备分析类型纵观近年中考写作题,题材

36、一般是写人、写事、写景, 日记, 书信, 通知,广告,便条等文体;题型基本是:命题作文,应用文写作,看图写话;积存素材 平常留意日常生活观看,关注社会热点,关怀四周的人和事;准时记录 假如平常能有心准时写下所见所闻,或有写日记的习惯,写作水平会提高更快;动笔过程细心审题,细读题目中每一项提示,或观看每一幅画,弄清题意,明确中心,确定体裁;特殊是对于我们看来特别熟识的内容,更要认真推敲,有自己特殊的立意;依据所给的提示,依据肯定的规律, 如大事的先后次序,地点的更换等内在的联系排序,分出层次;假如是看图说话,留意文在图中,意在图外,抓住每一要点,使表达的内容有条理性;名师归纳总结 - - - -

37、 - - -第 9 页,共 10 页精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 学习必备 欢迎下载理清篇章结构,构成短文的整体框架;文章要素起 它是文章的主旨,或提出主题句,列出事情的要点对主题开展表达,争论收 是对全文的总结和概括有了框架, 就可以收集积存的材料,用最恰当的短语、句型把你要表达的意思逐句表 达出来,多用简洁句和有把握的复合句;为了使短文有浑然一体的感觉,优秀作文少不了的是恰当采纳递进、让步、转折、因 果等连词;同学最简洁忽视的是检查;时态的前后呼应,人称与动词的变化,单词拼写,标点符号,规定字数等,全部这些 都可以通过认真检查,防止低级错误显现;英语短文的提高,需要组词、造句语言基本才能的提高,多读文章,多加摸索,就能 在中考中写作取得抱负的成果;名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 10 页,共 10 页

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