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1、苏州市2015届高三零模作文As is shown in the caricature, two men are painting on the canvas._ As is shown in the caricature, two men are painting on the canvas. They are looking out of the same window, but one of them has drawn nothing but the bars which block his view, while the other has painted the beautiful
2、 scenery in the distance. The message conveyed here is clear: “What you see depends on the way you look at the world.” Positive thinking leads to positive action and reaction. In order to experience more happiness, we may need to change our way of thinking. At the start of Senior Three, I woke up ev
3、ery morning feeling depressed, thinking of the much schoolwork to do. My friend Lee came to me and made me realize the best part about schoolingtime spent together with classmates fighting for dreams. Ever since then I have learnt to look at my daily life from a different angle and cherish what I ha
4、ve. Change the way we view the world, and well change our life. Standards of gradingGrade 5: (21-25)Grade 5: (21-25)Grade 4: Grade 4: (16-20)(16-20)Grade 3: Grade 3: (11-15)(11-15)Grade 2: Grade 2: (6-10)(6-10)Grade 1: Grade 1: (1-5)(1-5) Outer appearancehandwritingparagraphsBasic elements of a good
5、 compositionInnerqualitiesSentence patternsWords&PhrasesConjunction Step 1: Step 1: Describe the cartoon Step 2:Step 2: Interpret its implied meaningStep 3: Voice your opinions about the phenomenon Writing processWhats in the cartoon? Observe it carefully and find some key information:-People ; thin
6、gs; words ;actions; feelings . Useful sentence structures:As is vividly shown/ portrayed/depicted/ illustrated /indicated in the picture, .As can be seen in the picture, .Step 1 :Describe the cartoon A boy is occupied in chatting on the Internet. He refuses to talk with his mother. The mother can do
7、 nothing but stand behind the boy. She is depressed.Make at least four simple sentences. As is vividly portrayed in the picture, occupied in chatting on the Internet, a boy refuses to talk with his mother. The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy, depressed.Combine the sentences.Whats behi
8、nd the cartoon? Think twice.A picture is worth a thousand words. Reveal related factors.Step 2 : Interpret its implied meaning Some useful sentence structures: The picture shows/ indicates/implies /describes that What it describes vividly is a kind of common phenomenon among people who The caricatur
9、e vividly reflects a social phenomenon that Find out some solutions. Some useful sentence structures:As far as Im concerned, some effective measures should be taken. On my personal note, From my perspective, For my part,Only when people work together can we ensureOnly in this way can. Only with join
10、t efforts may we believe that the better market we are looking forward to is around the corner.Step 3: Give your opinions about the phenomenon Suggested version:Para 2 It is the exact reflection of lack of communication between parents and children. Several reasons contribute to it. First, the Inter
11、net provides us with a place where we can communicate with different people, in which case we are addicted to the virtual world and keep our distance from people around us. Besides, pressure from study drives us to seek excitement on the Internet. Also, parents, busy with their work, spare little ti
12、me to stay with their children, resulting in the less communication.Suggested version:Para 3 As far as Im concerned, some effective measures should be taken by parents and children. In terms of children, we should cut back on the time when we play computers and be aware of the importance of communic
13、ation with parents. In addition, parents and children should exchange their ideas and feelings regularly. Interesting topics are recommended so that both parents and teenagers love to talk about. Without any previous notice, a documentary dominated headlines and social websites on Feb 28. Under the
14、Dome, a 103-minute documentary self-funded by former news anchor Chai Jing, was released on websites . It has rapidly pushed the public awareness about air pollution and encouraged people to join in efforts to make a difference.Under the Dome最近中国的空气质量引起了广泛的关注。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英语写一篇短文。 内容要求： 1. 简要描述漫画内容；
15、2. 简要分析产生这种现象的原因；3. 针对以上现象谈谈你自己的看法（至少两点）。参考词汇：口罩mask； 雾霾haze One Possible Version：Para. 1 Recently ,the air quality in China has raised widespread concern. As is indicated in the picture, an old man and his grandson are taking a walk in the street with masks covering their mouths. As the haze is bec
16、oming heavier and heavier, they find it hard to see the buildings and trees around them clearly.Para. 2 What the picture conveys here is that air pollution is quite severe in China. Many factors account for this phenomenon. In the first place, vehicles sending large quantities of poisonous gases are
17、 a major source of air pollution. Furthermore, factories that release a great deal of smoke are also responsible for the poor air quality. Besides, burning materials like coal or oil for homes and offices is another major contributor to air pollution.Para. 3 Personally, to better the air quality, th
18、e government and the common citizens should make joint efforts. Riding and walking are wise options for public travels. Meanwhile, effective laws are supposed to be made to guarantee good air quality.Changeyourwords.Changeyourworld. Iamblindpleasehelpme. ItsabeautifuldayandIcantseeit.Polish up your
19、composition苏锡常镇苏锡常镇 一模作文一模作文【写作内容】【写作内容】 你学习或生活中面对怎样的压力；你学习或生活中面对怎样的压力；你正在或打算如何应对这些压力。你正在或打算如何应对这些压力。 We can watch TV and listen to music to reduce our stress. Appropriate to TV and music can greatly relieve our stress.exposure普通词汇亮点词汇thinkagreebe for, firmly in support of, be in favor of, approve o
20、f, be in total agreement with disagreebe against, disapprove of, be opposed to , object to take the opposite attitude thatargue;hold the view that; take the attitude that; harbor the idea that; put different interpretations on sth.; Its universally acknowledged that ; as far as is concerned ; from m
21、y point of view; on a personal note普通词汇亮点词汇goodimportantcauseBe of vital importance, be critical to, be essential to, be vital to, be indispendable to, play a decisive role, become top priority, attach importance to, put emphasis on , count, matter a lot,Give rise to, be responsible for, result in,
22、lead to, bring about ,contribute to,account for, be an invitation toAwesome,fantastic,superb, marvelous, impressive,outstanding,terrific, splendid,breathtaking,excellent, first-class2013年江苏卷年江苏卷 五档参考范文五档参考范文 People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on
23、a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. The message conveyed here is clear. “Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it？The answer is d
24、efinitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment. Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.Arrangement条理性Accuracy准确性Fluency流畅性