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1、 谈论你个人谈论你个人对网上购物的看法。对网上购物的看法。 ( (主题句主题句引入看法引入看法) In my view, we must ) In my view, we must have a positive attitude towards online have a positive attitude towards online shopping.shopping. On one hand, online shopping has its advantages. Firstly, it is much cheaper. As far as Im concerned, online s
2、tores offer lower prices to the customers and some dont charge delivery fee if we buy more than one. Secondly, it is more convenient as customers neednt walk store after store for what they like. And its easier for them to compare products online. On the other hand, online shopping has its disadvant
3、ages. In a way, it is unsafe to buy goods by credit card. In addition, it is impossible to check the quality. Sometimes the goods we receive are not what we want, so we may be cheated and waste money. ( (拓展句拓展句正反式正反式+ +列举式列举式) )列举式列举式一一方面利用正反式谈论其优点和缺点，另一方面利用列举式方面利用正反式谈论其优点和缺点，另一方面利用列举式分别谈其优点或缺分别谈其优点
4、或缺点。点。列举列举学校学校里的浪费现象里的浪费现象要点：要点：离开离开教室时教室时；吃饭时；吃饭时；吃完时；吃完时 ( (主题句主题句) ) We could see such kind of We could see such kind of wastewaste around us every day. around us every day. ( (拓展句拓展句) ) For For example, example, when when we leave the classroom, we leave the classroom, we just ignore the lights
5、and computers we just ignore the lights and computers and leave them on. and leave them on. WhenWhen we have dinners, we have dinners, we often order a lot and some food is left we often order a lot and some food is left uneaten. uneaten. WhenWhen we finish some drinks, we we finish some drinks, we
6、throw the leftover very casually. throw the leftover very casually. 列举列举式式 谈论谈论“互联网对人们生活带来的影响互联网对人们生活带来的影响” ( (主题句）主题句）The Internet plays a vital role The Internet plays a vital role in our daily life. in our daily life. （拓展句）（拓展句）It It not onlynot only provides people with amounts of latest provide
7、s people with amounts of latest information, information, but alsobut also changes the way changes the way people communicate with each other. people communicate with each other. Besides / MoreoverBesides / Moreover, the Internet enables , the Internet enables people to go shopping at home easily an
8、d people to go shopping at home easily and conveniently.conveniently. 递递进式进式提提供最新信息供最新信息; ;改变交流方式改变交流方式; ; 网上购物网上购物, ,方便方便快捷快捷说明原因说明原因 你你读完这个故事（目标的重要性）的感受。读完这个故事（目标的重要性）的感受。 （主题句主题句- -感受感受）I was I was deeply inspireddeeply inspired by such by such a story, a story, ( ( 拓展句拓展句- -原因原因 ) ) asas it make
9、s me it makes me realizerealize the power of a goalthe power of a goal in shaping ones in shaping ones success and gives me strength success and gives me strength to pursue my to pursue my goalgoal, , despitedespite the hardships I am to go the hardships I am to go through .through . 你你对国家对国家“禁止商场免费
10、提供塑料袋禁止商场免费提供塑料袋”的看法。的看法。（主题句主题句- -看法看法）It is It is necessarynecessary for for government to government to forbidforbid shops shops fromfrom offering offering free plastic bags. free plastic bags. （拓展句拓展句- -结果结果）With this ban, With this ban, shopping customers would gradually shopping customers woul
11、d gradually form a form a habit ofhabit of bringbringing ing environmentally friendly environmentally friendly bagsbags withwith them so that the consumption of them so that the consumption of plastic bags would be plastic bags would be greatly reducedgreatly reduced. . 说明结果说明结果 就就“诚信的重要性诚信的重要性”的主题发
12、表看法的主题发表看法，要点，要点1 1）你读后）你读后的感受。的感受。 （主题句主题句- -感受感受）After reading the story ,I After reading the story ,I feel it is importantfeel it is important to be to be honesthonest. . ( (拓展句拓展句) )Its Its obvious that obvious that an honest personan honest person will will definitely definitely winwin the resp
13、ect the respect fromfrom others, others, which is of great importance in our study which is of great importance in our study and daily life, and daily life, let alonelet alone in the business in the business world. world. HoweverHowever, , a dishonest persona dishonest person will will lose his fame
14、 and trustlose his fame and trust from others from others sooner sooner or lateror later. No matter how intelligent he is, . No matter how intelligent he is, dishonestydishonesty will ruin his future. will ruin his future.正反正反式式 勇于勇于认错和道歉的重要性。认错和道歉的重要性。 （主题句主题句重述要点重述要点）Since nobody is perfect Since
15、nobody is perfect and everybody may make mistakes , it is of and everybody may make mistakes , it is of great importance for us to deal with mistakes great importance for us to deal with mistakes properly whenever we are mistaken. (properly whenever we are mistaken. (拓展句拓展句）( (反面）反面）As people say, A
16、s people say, denydenying a fault doubles ing a fault doubles it. it. If we If we refuse to admitrefuse to admit our mistakes our mistakes when when we are wrong, we will not be accepted and we are wrong, we will not be accepted and forgiven by others. forgiven by others. （正面）（正面） On the contraryOn
17、the contrary , if we admit mistakes and apologize sincerely, others will be likely to forgive us ,which makes us closer to each other. 正反式正反式 就就“如何减少交通事故如何减少交通事故”的主题谈论人们应该如何的主题谈论人们应该如何避免避免交通事故。交通事故。 What can we do to avoid traffic accidents? As to driversAs to drivers, careful driving is of great si
18、gnificance. Drivers should never try drunk driving. Moreover, they should keep their emotions under control and respect others. On On the other hand, pedestrians and cycliststhe other hand, pedestrians and cyclists should strictly obey the traffic rules. Besides, they should value their own lives.相关
19、式相关式相关相关式是指围绕决定事物的相关因素谈论问题的方法。式是指围绕决定事物的相关因素谈论问题的方法。我我们可们可以围绕造成交通事故的相关因素如司机和行人以围绕造成交通事故的相关因素如司机和行人来谈论如何避免。来谈论如何避免。 相关式相关式 / / 关联式关联式 (主题句) To rid ourselves of the terrible accidents, we should take some measures to change the situation. In the first placeIn the first place, wewe studentsstudents sho
20、uld be more aware of the importance of safety. Only by doing so can we protect us from danger immediately. On On the other handthe other hand , schoolsschools should educate students to promote their awareness of safety. FurthermoreFurthermore, more equipmentmore equipment such such as monitors as m
21、onitors should be installed on campus and management should be strengthened to guarantee the safety of teachers and students. . ( (拓展句拓展句: : 递进式递进式 + + 相关式相关式 ) ) 你你对考试作弊的看法。对考试作弊的看法。（主题主题- -明示观点明示观点）In my opinion, this In my opinion, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect phenomenon will have
22、a very bad effect on middle school students study habit.on middle school students study habit.（拓展句拓展句）（）（细化细化）Those who usually cheat Those who usually cheat in examsin exams will never treat study seriously will never treat study seriously again because they believe they will again because they bel
23、ieve they will always get good marks without working always get good marks without working hard. hard. Those who never cheat in examsThose who never cheat in exams will will consider its unfair for them, thinking consider its unfair for them, thinking studying hard is not necessary.studying hard is
24、not necessary. 细化主题细化主题 就就“如何看待如何看待外貌外貌”的主题的主题举例举例发表看法发表看法 要点：举例：某要点：举例：某某某 As the saying goes, “Never judge a man by his looks.” What makes a person beautiful is his attractive personality rather than his physical appearance(主题句主题句). In one of my previous classes, there was a beautiful girl named L
25、ucy who had almost a perfect face and slim figure. But she treated her beauty in a matter-of-fact way (平淡的方式平淡的方式) and she was kind to everyone. Her personality was accepted by others and it made her an outstanding beauty. (拓展句拓展句)类似故事或经历类似故事或经历故事归纳故事归纳 遇到遇到举例举例的写作要点，有时虽能将思路展开，把故事的写作要点，有时虽能将思路展开，把故事
26、的经过表述清楚，但往住的经过表述清楚，但往住缺乏生动性缺乏生动性，因此，表达时，因此，表达时可有意识地多一些人物的可有意识地多一些人物的心理活动的描写及情感态度心理活动的描写及情感态度表达表达，使之达到锦上添花的效果。如，使之达到锦上添花的效果。如： So upset was I that I was unwilling to make an apology to him. Fortunately, with the help of him, I gradually realized the importance of being honest. Much to my delight, due
27、 to my honesty, one year later, I became one of the popular students in my class.类似故事或经历类似故事或经历故事归纳故事归纳 请用上述技巧就请用上述技巧就“学生安全问题学生安全问题”发发表看法，谈谈应采取何种措施保护学生的表看法，谈谈应采取何种措施保护学生的安全避免交通事故的发生？安全避免交通事故的发生？ 即时演练即时演练 范文欣赏：范文欣赏： (主题句主题句) To keep safe and rid ourselves of terrible traffic accidents, we should take
28、 some measures to change the situation. In the first place, we students should be more aware of the importance of safety. Only by doing so can we protect us from danger immediately. On the other hand , schools should educate students to promote their awareness of safety. Furthermore, more equipment
29、such as monitors should be installed on campus and management should be strengthened to guarantee the safety of teachers and students. (拓展句拓展句: 递进式递进式 + 相关式相关式 )书面表达上下文如何衔接过渡？书面表达上下文如何衔接过渡？1）to begin with then furthermore finally 2）to start with next in addition finally 3）first besides last but not
30、least 4）on one hand on the other hand 5) for one thing， for another thing，1.1.顺序顺序 ：2.2.让步：让步：although ， after all, in spite of, despite, even if, whatever may happen. 3.3.转折：转折： however, rather than, instead of , unfortunately 4.比较比较: like/ similarly /likewise / in the same way / equally5.对比对比 : wh
31、ile / on the other hand / unlike/different from /yet /6.列举列举: for example, for instance, such as, take for example 7.解释解释: in other words/ that is /namely / in fact / as a matter of fact 8. 批判错误观点和做法批判错误观点和做法:1) It may be true that, but it doesnt mean that 2)It is natural to believe that. but we sho
32、uldnt ignore that 3) There is no evidence to suggest that on the contrary 9.提出建议提出建议: 1) Obviously, if we want to do something , it is important that显然显然,如果我们想做某事如果我们想做某事,很重要的是很重要的是 . 2) It must be realized that 我们必须意识到我们必须意识到 3) There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to .4) It is time I
33、t is time to put special emphasis on 5) It is high time that (we tried / should try our best to stop improper manners.)10.预示后果预示后果 :1) Obviously, if we dont control the problem, it will lead us to danger. 2) It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.3) No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that