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1、Writing in EnglishWriting in English你家乡在长江流域你家乡在长江流域,1998年你家乡发生了严重的洪涝灾害年你家乡发生了严重的洪涝灾害,请根据请根据下图讲述发生在你家乡的故事下图讲述发生在你家乡的故事,字数为字数为80左右左右. Tense: the past Place: my hometown Persons : the first and the third Key points: 1. Flood 2. Damage/destroy 3. What happened after the flood 4. Whats the result. rain
2、heavily flood/ rise very high carry away helpget into the boat terrible waves be in danger PLA men villagers It rained heavily. The river flooded./ The river suddenly rose very high. The water carried our houses / homes away. We/ Many villagers were in danger. The PLA men helped us get into the boat
3、s. Food, clothes ,school things and so on were sent to our village from all over the country. Soldiers helped us to rebuild our homes. Rows of new buildings were set up. sendto helpto rebuild food, clothes, school things rows of new buildings go back to school live a happy life feel happy, thankful
4、new school, new school bags The children went to the new school with new school bags. We could live a happy life again.it rained heavily .The river suddenly rose very high and carried our houses away. Many villagers were in the river and in great danger. At that time the PLA men came and helped us t
5、o get into the boats. We were saved. food, clothes school things and many other things were sent to our village from all over the country. The PLA men helped us to rebuild our homes. Rows of new building were set up. the children could go back to school with their new school bags. All the villagers
6、lived a happy life again. We lived on the Yangtze River. One night on 1998, The flood is cold , but the world is warm. After the flood, Before long,with the help of the soldiers and other kind-hearted people,We felt very happy and thankful.linking After the flood, Though , but Not a long time later/
7、 Before long With the help ofPeriods What to doBefore writingWhile writingAfter writingExamine the lines(审题审题):Key words sentences a passage1. Polishing (润色）润色）2. Checking(检查检查)tense， person （时态，时态， 人称）人称） place ，key points （地点，地点， 要点）要点）Lan Lan 把多年的积蓄捐给希望工程（把多年的积蓄捐给希望工程（the Hope Project），），并并寄去最美好的
8、祝愿。寄去最美好的祝愿。我要我要上上学学Writing practiceExample version: Yesterday the teacher told her students something about the Hope Project in class. It has been set up for helping the children in the village who cant go to school. After school, Lan Lan went home. She wanted to know if she could do something for
9、the project. When she saw money collecting box on the table, she decided to send her pocket money which she had saved for a long time to those poor children. She wrote a letter to them and hurried to the post office. Together with the letter, she posted the money and her best wishes to them.Thank you for your attending!