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1、Better Your WritingBetter?How?Fuqiao Middle SchoolWang JingyuLead-inPre-writing What/How aboutLets We shouldWe shouldntGive advice in different waysWhat can we do to solve the problem?Its better for us toWed betterDont forget toDont 学校提倡环保运动。假如你是学校提倡环保运动。假如你是Amy，准备以，准备以“What Can We Do for the Enviro
2、nment” 为为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿 内容包含：内容包含： 1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋；在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋； 2.离开教室前应关灯；离开教室前应关灯； 3.最好走路或骑自行车上学；最好走路或骑自行车上学； 简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等 注意：注意：1.词数：词数：90词左右。开头和结尾已经为你词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。写好，不计入总词数。2.文章中不能出现真实姓文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名名和校名.参考词汇参考词汇:cloth bag ;plastic bag Hell
3、o, everyone. Im Amy. Thank you for your listening!While-writing While-writing话题话题篇章构成篇章构成（共_段）1._ 2._ 3._.体裁体裁_(A.演讲稿演讲稿B.书信书信C. 调查报告调查报告)人称人称时态时态字数字数Examine the topic.（审题）（审题）3BeginningMain bodyEndingAFirst Person(第一人称第一人称)90Simple present tense(一般现在时一般现在时)Protecting the environmentOutline sampleTo
4、picBeginning:Main Body:topic sentence:（主题句）（主题句）suggestion 1:suggestion 2:Ending :Tip1: Writing an outline helps to organize your ideas better.suggestion 3:Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment. do something to use cloth bagsturn off the lightswalk or ride a bike to schoolhopeSa
5、mple1 Hello, everyone. Im Amy. Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment. We can use cloth bags. We cant use plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. We should turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms. We should save energy. We can walk or rid
6、e a bike to school. It will be better. We should try our best to reduce pollution. We should reduce waste. Even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live . Thank you for your listening!句型应避免重复句型应避免重复While-wr
7、iting1.We can use cloth bags . We cant use plastic bags when we go shopping.2 We should turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms. We should save energy.We can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. Dont forget to turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms in or
8、der to save energy.Better your sentences.While-writingBetter your sentences.Tip2: Use better words and sentences.3.We can walk or ride a bike to school. It will be better.4. We should try our best to reduce pollution. We should reduce waste.It will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.It wi
9、ll be better for us to walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste. Hello, everyone. Im Amy. Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment. _, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. _
10、, dont forget to turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. _, it will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste. _, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I belie
11、ve we can make the world a better place to live . Thank you for your listening!What kind of words do we need to make the speech better? Linking words(过渡词过渡词) Linking words:表并列：表并列：表递进表递进: :表转折表转折; ; 表因果：表因果：表层次：表层次：表时间：表时间：表列举：表列举：表观点表观点: : 表总结：表总结： and, as well as, both and, either or, not onlybut
12、also, neithernorwhats more, besides, in additionbut, however, yet, after all, while because, so, therefore, as a result firstly, secondly, thirdly, next, at last before, after, while, when, then for example, such as, like,for one thing, for another thingin my opinion, I think that in all, in a word,
13、 in general Try to choose proper linking words _, the food we eat at home is cleaner and safer. _, eating at home doesnt cost much money. _, it helps family members become closer, _preparing food at home is _fun _ meaningful. _, it encourages more communication in the house.because , in my opinion,
14、first, finally, besides, not onlybut alsoFirstBesidesbecauseFinally but alsonot onlyIn my opinion Hello, everyone. Im Amy. Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment. _, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. _, dont fo
15、rget to turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. _ , it will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste. _ , even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we c
16、an make the world a better place to live . Thank you for your listening!Make the speech better by using linking words. (You can do it in different ways)FirstlySecondlyWhats moreIn a word _Firstly, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment.
17、 Secondly, dont forget to turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more, it will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste. . Try to use a topic sentence to make it better. We should do something to pr
18、otect the environment. What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone. Im Amy. Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment. We should do something to protect the environment. Firstly, We can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the enviro
19、nment. Secondly, dont forget to turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more, it will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste. In a word, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real differ
20、ence to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live . Thank you for your listening!Tip 3: Topic sentences and linking words help to make your composition well-organized. While-writingCheck for mistakes.1. Grammar ( tense, structures, )2. Vocabulary (spelling, usages )3. N
21、o missing points 4. Organization 5. Handwriting Correct the mistakes（Just for C&D in your groups ）1.I usually go to school by a bus. 2.There have many trees in the park.3.I just wonder what should I do.4.My father and my mother is all teachers.5.I believe my dream will come ture.6.He studies very ha
22、rdly.7. Do so many homework is my trouble.8.We have a computer class one week a time.9.My parents dont care me.by busareI shouldare both teachers.truehardDoing so much homework is my trouble.once a weekcare about me. “安全你我他，幸福千万家安全你我他，幸福千万家”，重视校园安全有助，重视校园安全有助于我们更好地学习，更幸福地生活。请以于我们更好地学习，更幸福地生活。请以 “Kee
23、ping safe at school ”为题写一篇英语短文。为题写一篇英语短文。 内容包括：内容包括： (1)上下楼梯要有序上下楼梯要有序 (2)运动避免受伤运动避免受伤 (3)了解更多安全知识了解更多安全知识 注意：注意： 1 1词数词数9090左右，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数左右，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数; ; 2 2短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3 3短文不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。短文不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。Keeping safe at school Its imp
24、ortant for us to keep safe at school Post-writingKeeping safe at schoolBeginning:Main body:suggestions:1. 2. 3. Ending:make us study better and live more happily my opiniontopic sentence:We mustdo like these. go upstairs and downstairs in ordertry not to be hurt when doing sportsknow about some know
25、ledge of safety Write an outlineKeeping safe at schoolBeginning:Main body:suggestions:1. 2. 3. Ending:make us study better and live more happily my opiniontopic sentence:Write your own composition according to the outline.We mustdo like these. Go upstairs and downstairs in orderTry not to be hurt wh
26、en doing sportsknow about some knowledge of safety作文评分标准：作文评分标准：第一档：第一档：16-1916-19分。分。写出所有要点，语言优美准确，行文写出所有要点，语言优美准确，行文连贯，层次分明，选用较好的句型。（错误不超过连贯，层次分明，选用较好的句型。（错误不超过3 3处）处）第二档：第二档：12-1512-15分。分。写出全部要点或缺一个要点，语言基写出全部要点或缺一个要点，语言基本准确，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚，文章较通顺。本准确，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚，文章较通顺。第三档：第三档：9-119-11分。分。写出大部分要点，语
27、言有较多错误，写出大部分要点，语言有较多错误，但文章成型，尚能表意。但文章成型，尚能表意。第四档：第四档：5-85-8分。分。写出写出1-21-2个要点，个要点，字数明显不够，字数明显不够，语言语言错误非常多，句子凌乱且不通顺。错误非常多，句子凌乱且不通顺。第五档：第五档：0-40-4分。分。只有个别句子可读或只写出几个相关单只有个别句子可读或只写出几个相关单词词组。词词组。 Its important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live more happily. In order t
28、o keep safe at school, we must do like these. Firstly, We should be in order when we are going upstairs or downstairs. Secondly, make sure to be safe when we are doing sports. Doing some warm-up exercise will protect us from being hurt. Thirdly, Wed better learn more about knowledge of safety. In ad
29、dition, its necessary for us to raise the self-protection awareness.（自我保护意识）（自我保护意识） In my opinion, if we follow the advice, well make ourselves safe at school. BeginningMainBodyEndingKeeping safe at schoolSummary a. 3 steps in writing a composition b. 3 tips that help to make a better compositionAssignment：1. Finish your writing and try to make it better.2. Read some compositions of showing ideas and learn how to write a similar one. 1.Its everyones duty to protect the environment. 2. Cherish life, safety first.