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1、英语作文讲评1、Help students how to organize a composition.2、How to make correct sentences.3、How to use conjunctions to make your composition more perfect. 假如你是心理医生假如你是心理医生Dr. Smith, 你收到学生你收到学生Cathy的来信。的来信。她在信中说自己很喜欢看电视，但父母担心影响学习不让她看，她在信中说自己很喜欢看电视，但父母担心影响学习不让她看，她有时和父母争吵，很烦恼，却不知道该怎么办。请你根据以她有时和父母争吵，很烦恼，却不知道该
2、怎么办。请你根据以下提示，给下提示，给Cathy回信，可适当发挥。回信，可适当发挥。70词左右。开头和结尾词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。已给出，不计入总词数。 解决方法：不要再和父母争吵；要学着理解父母；要和父解决方法：不要再和父母争吵；要学着理解父母；要和父母沟通想法。母沟通想法。Dear Cathy, Thanks for telling me about your problems._Best wishes! Yours, Dr. Smith本次作文展评：本次作文展评：1. Here are some advice for you. (王子嫣王子嫣)2. Im sorry to
3、 hear that you are unhappy. (孙程帅孙程帅)3. First of all, I dont think you should argue with your parents. You should understand them because they hope you to have a great future. You should say “sorry” to them. (徐洁徐洁)4. Your parents dont let you watch TV because they worry about your study. (李丽欣李丽欣)1. W
4、atching TV too much is bad for your eyes. (王子嫣王子嫣)2. You can make more friends. (王子嫣王子嫣)3. You should say sorry to your parents and tell them what you think. (高萍高萍)4. You should learn to understand your parents and dont argue with them any more! (林彦汐林彦汐)5. If you do that, I think your parents will l
5、et you watch TV. (徐洁徐洁)1. You should communicate with your friends and listen to your parents. Your parents hope you have a good future.(景腾景腾)2. You can tell them that you are under too much pressure. You need more time and freedom to relax yourself. (罗世虎罗世虎)3. Have a good time playing with your par
6、ents.(孙程帅孙程帅)4. I hope you will be happy soon! (管艺涵管艺涵)5. It can make you get on well with your parents. (孟德孟德嵘嵘)6. I think its important to talk with your parents about your ideas.(徐洁徐洁)1. I think you cant watch TV too much.2. I think you shouldnt argue with them.3. You should talking with them.4.
7、I hope my advices can help you.5. You should _ 理解理解your parents.6. You like watch TV.7. You parents dont let you watch TV.dont think you can dont think you shouldtalkadviceunderstandwatchingYour8. They want to you can have a good future.9. Have a good lucky to you!10. Dont upset.11. You know your pa
8、rents are love you.12. Your parents very love you.you to luckbe upsetlovelove you very muchDear Cathy, Thanks for telling me about your problems. Im sorry to hear that you are not happy. Here are some advice for you. First, you shouldnt argue with your parents. You should talk about it with them. Yo
9、u must know your parents love you very much. Second, you should understand your parents. You like watching TV very much. But watching TV too much is bad for your eyes. Third, you can tell your parents what you want to do. They want you to get good grades and have a good future. But you should tell t
10、hem that you are under too much pressure. Watching TV can make you relaxed. I hope my advice can make you happy and study better! Good luck to you! Best wishes! Yours, Dr. Smith根据下面的来信，写一封回信，词数根据下面的来信，写一封回信，词数80词左右。词左右。Dear Miss Sun, How are you? I failed my English test again.I thought I had tried
11、my best, but why? I dare(敢敢)not to tell my parents about it, So I was upset. Could you tell me what to do? Yours, Wei HuaDear Wei Hua,_ Yours， Miss Sun时态时态人称人称确定基本要素确定基本要素When, Where, Who, What, Why, Howfail your English testbe upsetworry aboutFailure is the mother of success.talk about it with Begi
12、nning:how to improve your English Here are some advice for you.in classlisten to teacher carefullyspeak English as much as possibleafter classdo your homework by yourselfask your teacher or friends for helplisten to the English songswatch the English moviesBody:I believe, Im sure, I thinktry ones be
13、st to study Englishget good gradesEnding:Beginning:fail your English testbe upsetworry aboutFailure is the mother of success.talk about it with Body:how to improve your English Here are some advice for you.in classlisten to teacher carefullyspeak English as much as possibleafter classdo your homewor
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