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1、gre满分作文汇总gre满分作文汇总为了辅助大家更好地来备考GRE写作，学习啦为大家整理了GRE写作的满分范文，让大家参考学习。希望通过这些范文的学习，让大家更好地了解写作高分的必备要素。下面就是具体的内容：gre满分作文1Boththedevelopmentoftechnologicaltoolsandtheusestowhichhumanityhasputthemhavecreatedmoderncivilizationsinwhichlonelinessiseverincreasing.Thetechnologicaltoolsweasasocietyhavedevelopedareno
2、tinthemselvespositiveornegative,theyarejustthat,tools.Theuses,however,aredefinitelyadifferentstory.Computers,Ibelieveatonetime,weredevelopedtosaveustime.Doourworkmorequicklyforussothatwecouldhavemoreleisuretimetospenddoingthosethingsweenjoy.Wehavefoundnow,especiallythoseofusthatareparents,thatalloft
3、heleisuretimewehavegainediseitherspentwatchingourchildrenlearnthingsonthecomputerorcreatingourownuniquesomethingonthefamilycomputer.Foronething,ithasbecomeaveryfunitem,thecomputershavebecomemorethanjustworkrelatedtechnologicaltools.Theamountofhumaninteractionislimited,becausepeopleingeneralarespendi
4、ngmuchoftheirleisuretimedoingsoloonthecomputer.Inthepast,itwascommonforthenewyoungexectutivetogetamembershiptotheexerciseclubasaperk,wherehecouldsocializewiththeuppercrust.Nowthenewyoungexec.getsacarphoneoraportablefax,sothathecanworkfromwhereeverheis,usuallydoingthatsolotriptosomewhere.Giventheseas
5、examples,Iwouldtendtoagreewiththestatementthatlonlinesshasincreasedasadirectresult.Comments:Thisresponseislimitedinitsanalysisoftheissue.Thewriterclearlyexpressestheideathatthetechnologicaltoolsweasasocietyhavedevelopedarenotinthemselvespositiveornegative.However,theresponseprovidesonlylimitedsuppor
6、tfortheposition.Thetwoexamplesarelooselyconnectedandundeveloped;forexample,therelevanceoftheyoungexecutiveexampleisnotclearbecausethereisnotransitionfromtheprecedingexampleofthecomputer.Theconclusion,onesentencelong,simplyrestatestheclaimmadeinthetopic.Theawkwardsentencesareevidenceofalimitedfluency
7、.Greateruseofcompoundsentencescouldhelpeliminatestructuralproblemsandfacilitatethecommunicationofideas(e.g.,sentences3and4couldbecombined).Forallofthesereasons,thisisnotanadequateresponse.Itreceivedascoreof3.gre满分作文2Boththedevelopmentoftechnologicaltoolsandtheusestowhichhumanityhasputthemhavecreated
8、moderncivilizationsinwhichlonelinessiseverincreasing.Computersofallshapesandsizes,p.c.s,laptops,faxes,phones,thelistneverends.Allconsideredbyoursocietyasgreattechnologicaladvances.Notmanywouldarguethatthedevelopmentofthesetoolshasnotadvancedourworldinsomeways.Howevertheycertainlyseemtobemakingourwor
9、ldoneinwhichcontactwithourfellowmanislessandlessnecessary.Thoughsomemaybemorecomfortablenothavingtoengageindirectcontact,itisquestionablewhetherthisisbeneficialtosocietyasawhole.Theveryleastresultcouldinfactbeaverylonelyworld,butitmayresultinmoresignificantproblems.Comments:Thisresponseisseriouslyfl
10、awed.Theanalysisoftheissueisextremelylimited,andthereareseriousproblemsinsentencestructure.Thewritersposition,neverclearlystated,seemstobethatasaresultoftechnologicaldevelopments,contactwithourfellowmanislessandlessnecessary.However,theimplicationsofthisstatement(andothers)areneverexploredordevelope
11、d.Furthermore,thelistoftechnologicaladvancementsdoesnotsupportorclarifythewritersalreadytenuouslyheldposition.Eachnewsentencecouldserveasaspringboardtoathoughtfulanalysisbutinsteadtakestheresponsefurtherfromtheapparentpremise.Thisresponsereceivedascoreof2,notbecauseoflanguageproblems,butbecausereaso
12、ning,analysis,anddevelopmentareextremelythinandinsubstantial.gre满分作文3Boththedevelopmentoftechnologicaltoolsandtheusestowhichhumanityhasputthemhavecreatedmoderncivilizationsinwhichlonelinessiseverincreasing.Thisstatementisstating.Themoreadvanceintecnologythatsocietybecomes,themorewedependontechnology
13、toliveoureverydaylives.Societyasawholewilloutdodailytasksanddependmoreonmachinesandcomputerstoaccomplishthosetasksforthem.Forexample;Iwastoldthattheyoungergenerationsusecaclatorsinclassesonaeverdaylevel.Wecounldntdothat.Wehadtoresolveaproblemonourown.Becausecaculatorsarebeingused,mathproblemsarebein
14、gadjustedaroundthecaculators.IfIdidntknowhowtouseacaculatortodaythenImostlikelywoulndtknowhowtoattempttotacklethemathoftoday.Computersoftodayareanotherexample.Writingaessaytookalotofthoughtandhardworkinpast.Today,Icantypesomewordsinthecomputerandthatcomputerwillspell,makegrammercorrection,anddictate
15、arightformtouseinmyessay.Inthepastwehadtoallthesethingsonourown.Imnotputtingdownmoderntechnologytotally.Ijustwanttostatethatifwetakeawaypeoplesabilitytothinkthenwewillslowlylooseourabilitytofunctionwithoutmoderntechnology.Comments:Thisresponseisfundamentallydeficientbecauseitdoesnotdiscusstheissue.I
16、nstead,itbrieflydiscussesthedrawbacksofspecifictypesoftechnology(e.g.,calculatorsandcomputers)intermsoftheeffecttheyhaveonanindividualsabilitytofunctionwithoutthem.Furthermore,theawkwardandimprecisephrasingofteninterfereswithmeaning(e.g.,Societyasawholewilloutdodailytasks?).gre满分作文4Ourdecliningenvir
17、onmentmaybringthepeopleoftheworldtogetherasnopolitician,philosopher,orwarevercould.Environmentalproblemsareglobalinscopeandrespectnonationsboundaries.Therefore,peoplearefacedwiththechoiceofunityandcooperationontheonehandordisunityandacommontragedyontheother.Cooperation-orTragedy?Thesolutiontotheworl
18、dsgrowingenvironmentalproblemsmayhavetowaitawhile.Ithasbeensaidthatenvironmentalproblemsareglobalandrespectnonationsboundaries.Unfortunately,pollutionanditsconsequencesstillfalltolargemeasureonthoseleastlikelytodoanythingaboutit:poorcountrieswillingtosacrificeanythinginordertositatthetablewiththewor
19、ldswealthy.Asfarastheindustrializednationsoftheworldareconcerned,theworldisabigplace.Environmentaldestructiontakingplaceoutsidetheirbordersmaysometimesbefodderforgovernmentpronouncementsofconcern,butfewconcreteactions.DeforestationoftheAmazon,forinstance,isofvitalconcerntoallthosewhowishtocontinuebr
20、eathing.Buttheonlyeffectivedeterrenttothisactivity,therestrictionofinternationalaidmoneytothosecountriesshowingnetdeforestation,hasbeenstalledintheUnitedNationsbythoseunwillingtointerfereintheinternalpoliticsofothernations.Becauseofthedifferentialimpactofpollutingactivitiesaroundtheworld,andevenindi
21、fferentregionsofasinglecountry,manygovernmentswillundoubtedlycontinuetopromulgateonlymodestenvironmentalregulations.Coststopollutingcompanieswillcontinuetocarryasmuchweightasthebenefitofapollution-freeenvironment.ParticularlyinthecurrentpoliticalclimateoftheUnitedStates,thewell-documentedexpenseofto
22、dayspollution-controlmeasureswillbestackedagainsttheunknownlong-termeffectsofpollutingactitivities.WhyshouldIspendmillionsofdollarsayear,whichcausesmetohavetoraisethecostofmygoodsoreliminatejobs,ifnoonereallyknowsifairpollutionisallthatharmful?Showmetheproof,anairpollutingcompanymaydemand.Realistica
23、lly,itwontbeuntilcriticalmassisachievedthatthehopedforchoiceofunityandcooperationwillbeaviableone.Onlywhentheearthasawholeissopollutedthatlifeitselfbecomesincreasinglydifficultforamajorityoftheworldspeoplewilltherelikelybethepoliticalwilltoforceglobalenvironmentallawsongovernmentsworldwide.Buttheopt
24、imists(read:environmentalactivists)amonguscontinuetobelievethattheworldcanbeshowntheerrorofitsways.Theycontinuetopointoutthattheskyisprobablyfalling-oratleastdevelopingabighole.Theworld,asawhole,ignoresthem.Onewouldhope,however,thatgovernments,perhapsthroughastrengthenedU.N.,couldsomehowbeforcedtore
25、alizethatwhentheEarthreachesthecriticalmassofpollution,itmaybetoolatetodoanythingaboutit.Thatwouldbeacommontragedyindeed.Comments:Thisexcellentresponsedisplaysanin-depthanalysisoftheissue,conveyedthroughtheskillfuluseoflanguage.Whileacknowledgingthatenvironmentalproblemsareseriousandofglobaldimensio
26、ns,thediscussionexploresthecomplexityofinternationalcooperation.Suchcooperation,thepaperargues,runsintoavarietyofproblems,andthewriterofferspersuasiveexamplestosupportthatpoint:-theunwillingnessofnationstointerferewithothernationsthroughpoliticalmeasuressuchasrestrictionofforeignaid-inadequateenviro
27、nmentalregulations,whicharecausedbothbythedifferentialimpactofpollutingactivitiesbetweencountriesandregionsandbythedifficultyofcomparingthelong-termeffectsofpollutingactitivitieswiththemoreeasilydocumented,short-termcostsofreducingpollution.Thepaperdistinguishesitselfinpartbyitsexcellentorganization
28、.Thefirstparagraphanalyzestheclaimandannouncesthewritersposition;thesecondandthirdparagraphsprovideclearexamplessupportingthatposition.Theskillfuluseofaquotationfromabusinesspersonvividlyillustratestheeconomicimpactofpollutioncontrols.Thelasttwoparagraphsbringasenseofclosuretotheessaybycontinuingthe
29、themeannouncedinthefirstparagraph-thatcooperationmustwaituntilmoredirecircumstancesproducethepoliticalwillnecessarytoreducepollution.Transitionalphrases-because,however,forinstance-helpguidethereaderthroughtheargument.Also,effectivesentencevarietyandtheuseofprecisevocabularyhelpclarifymeaningandconfirmthescoreof6.gre满分作文汇总