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1、高中英语复习书面表达作文课件高中英语复习书面表达作文课件City life or country life 人们经常讨论乡村生活和城市生活，一人们经常讨论乡村生活和城市生活，一些人喜欢乡村生活而另一人则喜欢城市些人喜欢乡村生活而另一人则喜欢城市生活。请你以生活。请你以Living in the Country or the City为题，按照以下要点写一篇英为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。语短文。 乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。 城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。 我喜欢的生活和理由。我喜欢的生活和理由。 注意：词数注意：词数100-1
2、20，文章的题目和开，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。头已给出（不计词数）。Living in the Country or in the City People are forever talking about living in the country and in the city. 文体与文体与时态时态。 抓要点抓要点 规定内容规定内容 开放内容开放内容审题审题明晰结构（分段）明晰结构（分段）,考虑连接考虑连接n(1)乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。n(2) 城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。n(3)我喜欢的生活和理由(1.2.)。1.(To begin with) Moreover
3、In addition Additionally Furthermore2.For one thing, For another 3. In the first place, In the second place4. First(ly) Second(ly) Finally段落间段落间连接过渡词连接过渡词On the contrary; however;段落间段落间连接过渡词连接过渡词PersonallyTo be honestTo be frankAs far as I am concerned段落段落内内连接连接规划规划表达喜欢的用语- like prefer to live in pr
4、efer living in enjoy living in be willing to would rather be fond of be attracted by be fascinated by避免单一 表达表达表达观点的基本用语- Some thinkothers think believe. feel claim state stress insist maintain避免单一表达规定内容- 空气清新、生活恬静 The air is fresh/clean. Life is quiet/peaceful. enjoy gentle way/pace of living 交通便捷、购
5、物方便 Its easy to go around/here and there. People can go from one place to another without much difficulty. People can buy anything they want. Shopping is convenient准确灵活语义不充分不连贯语义不充分不连贯 Some people like to live in the country. The air is fresh and clean. Moreover, Life is quiet and peaceful. Others,
6、however, prefer to live in the city. They can go from one place to another without much difficulty. In addition, shopping is much more convenient.下面段落有什么问题？下面段落有什么问题？要点要点适当拓展适当拓展-添枝加叶添枝加叶v1. The air is fresh.vObviously, the air there is much fresher than that in the city.vThey claim that the air the
7、re is fresher as there is less pollution.vThey think that the air there is fresher so that they can relax themselves both physically and mentally.v2. Life is quiet and peaceful.vThey insist that life is quiet and peaceful, which is beneficial for good health.尝试适当拓展以下尝试适当拓展以下要点要点vIts easy to go aroun
8、d.vThey feel its easy to go around as .vThey believe that its easy to go around so that vThey claim that its easy to go around, whichvThey can buy anything they want.vThey think() they can buy anything they wantHave a try表达开放部分- learn more social skills (getting along with different kinds of people)
9、 broaden our views () make my life more colorful () receive medical care more easily() get better education() brainstorm ideas富有思想精选能表达好且出彩的两到三点精选能表达好且出彩的两到三点抄写抄写 字迹清楚，卷面字迹清楚，卷面零涂改零涂改。 不用改正液、透明胶带。不用改正液、透明胶带。 注意大小写，注意分段。注意大小写，注意分段。 不超边框，不随意换行。不超边框，不随意换行。课堂小结 审题审题 规划规划 表达表达相同语义相同语义 表达表达规定部分内容规定部分内容 表达
10、表达开放部分内容开放部分内容 抄写抄写 抓要点抓要点 段落和连接段落和连接 避免单一避免单一 准确灵活，适当拓展准确灵活，适当拓展 富有思想，精选要点富有思想，精选要点 卷面整洁清楚卷面整洁清楚assignment Write the passage out and copy it down as neatly and clearly as possible.段落组织段落组织 1、写好主题句。、写好主题句。 Personally, I am fascinated by city life. 2、围绕主题句展开、围绕主题句展开2或或3点。点。 两点连接词用：两点连接词用： ? 三点用：三点用： first (firstly), second (secondly), finally (most importantly) 3、精选精选两点或三点理由。两点或三点理由。总总分分1-分分2