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1、Welcome to Welcome to English class! English class! Drink water is good for health. I think drink water is good for health. I think that drink water is good for health. There are some students plant trees over there.There was an accident happened at the cross yesterday.There will be three boys ask t
2、o do the job by their teachers.Clothes make the man.人要衣装，佛要金装。Beauty is the combination of three-tenths of gift and seven-tenths of grooming.三分长相，七分打扮。 如何如何使文章使文章 起来起来“靓靓”What is a beautiful composition ?专家指点迷津专家指点迷津张老师张老师：在评阅书面表达时遵循的原则是：语 言第一 位（语言流畅， 自然， 得体；词汇多样；语法结构丰富），内容第二位（要点齐全无遗漏），结构第三位（自然分段）元老
3、师元老师：阅卷老师在评阅时最注重的是文章中的亮点，根据语言使用情况、亮点的多少而定出档次，所以考生在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得分的关键。亮点主要包括：一、语言地道，词汇丰富；二、语法结构多样化；三、文章连贯自然。Ex : 改正下列病句。改正下列病句。1. My favourite subjects including English and Chinese.2. Last week we hold a discussion about this topic.3. The future life will become more and more better.4. The fire destr
4、oied their houses.5. He spends two hours to study English every night._应改为应改为include_应改为应改为held_应改为应改为better and better_应改为应改为destroyed_应改为应改为studying6. we in order to success, we have to study hard .7.32% students thinked the nature disaster which is properly caused by our human activity .8.It also
5、 has 29% of the students care about the environment pollution .应改应改In order to be successful 应改应改32% of the students thought that the natural disaster is caused by our human activities . _9. There were 32% of students were concerned about the nature damage .10.Give us more time , we could do it much
6、 better ._32% of the students natural damage Give应改应改Given _ 技技 巧巧1. 1. 使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3. 3. 使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词2. 2. 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式 abundant sentence patterns proper conjunctions advanced words and phrases使文章“靓”起来的技巧 on the way / around the corner . The weekend is coming . Nowadays, people think ed
7、ucation is very important . be of great importance / significance attach great importance to 一、使用较高级的词汇一、使用较高级的词汇短语优先短语优先 Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.Thanks to the good weather，The students there neednt pay for their books.Books are free of charge for the students there
8、.You can find my house easily. Youll have no trouble difficulty finding my house. A good idea occurred to / struck me. I had a good idea.I came up with a good idea. 我想到我想到了了 一个好主意。一个好主意。二、使用较丰富的句式二、使用较丰富的句式用高级和多样化的句式来表达，用高级和多样化的句式来表达，能增加文章的文采。能增加文章的文采。在文章中设计双重否定的句子，就变成了亮点句，在文章中设计双重否定的句子，就变成了亮点句，起到强调
9、作用。起到强调作用。 I couldnt have made so much progress in English without his help. The postman never fails to come on time every day. The postman comes on time every day.I have made great progress in English with his help.一、肯定不如双否好一、肯定不如双否好倒装是一种简单易行提亮句子的方法。倒装是一种简单易行提亮句子的方法。The children wont come home unti
10、l it is dark . Not until it is dark will the children come home.You can improve your English only in this way . Only in this way can you improve your English.二、陈述不如倒装妙三、非谓语动词三、非谓语动词包括动词不定式，动名词和分词包括动词不定式，动名词和分词。非谓语动词的使用会使文章结构简洁明朗，信息量大，是非谓语动词的使用会使文章结构简洁明朗，信息量大，是英语作文中的英语作文中的最大的亮点最大的亮点，因此正确使用非谓语使高考，因此正确
11、使用非谓语使高考作文获得高分的一个法宝。作文获得高分的一个法宝。When he heard the good news , he burst into tears. HearingWhen it is compared with other cartoons, The Wolf and the Sheep is more interesting.C从句不如分词傲1.When it is seen from the hill, the park looks very beautiful .2. One wants to master a foreign language ,one must wo
12、rk hard at it .3. Because I didnt know his name , I found it hard to find him .4. It rained heavily , so it caused severe flooding in that place .请用非谓语动词改写下列句子请用非谓语动词改写下列句子1. When it is seen from the hill, the park looks very beautiful .2. One wants to master a foreign language ,one must work hard a
13、t it .请用非谓语改写下列句子请用非谓语改写下列句子改为改为Seen from the hill 改为改为To master a foreign language 3.Because I didnt know his name , I found it hard to find him .4. It rained heavily , so it caused severe flooding in that place ._改为改为Not knowing his name_改为改为causing severe flooding in that place 请使用非谓语动词翻译以下的句子请使用
14、非谓语动词翻译以下的句子1. 向窗外一看，我看到了我妈妈。向窗外一看，我看到了我妈妈。2. 尽管告诉了他很多次，他还是不记得那个尽管告诉了他很多次，他还是不记得那个电话号码。电话号码。3. 我来拜访他，结果发现他出去了。我来拜访他，结果发现他出去了。请使用非谓语的知识翻译以下的句子请使用非谓语的知识翻译以下的句子1.向窗外一看，我看到了我妈妈。向窗外一看，我看到了我妈妈。2.尽管告诉了他很多次，他还是不记得尽管告诉了他很多次，他还是不记得那个电话号码。那个电话号码。Looking out of the window, I saw my mother . Having been told man
15、y times ,he still doesnt remember the telephone number .3.我来拜访他，结果发现他出去了我来拜访他，结果发现他出去了。 I visited him only to find him out .四、合理使用复合句当中的定语从句四、合理使用复合句当中的定语从句Many boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health.Many boys learn to smoke, which does harm to their health.The house is beautiful . We liv
16、e in the house .The house in which (where) we live is beautiful .Soon they came to a farm house . Its roof was much higher than others .Soon they came to a farm house whose roof was much higher than others.请用定语从句或非谓语翻译。请用定语从句或非谓语翻译。(2010年广东年广东) 目标：所有室内公共场所无烟目标：所有室内公共场所无烟 ；实施时；实施时间：间：2011年年1月月1日。日。a.
17、 The decision , which aims to make all indoor public places smoke free , will come into effect from the first of 2011.b. The decision , aiming to make all indoor public places smoke free , will come into effect from the first of 2011.高高 三三 学学 生生 现现 状状负担过重的原因负担过重的原因每天在校时间每天在校时间约约10小时小时1. 面临高考；面临高考；2.
18、 家长期望高。家长期望高。每天作业时间每天作业时间3-4小时小时每天娱乐时间每天娱乐时间几乎没有几乎没有每天睡眠时间每天睡眠时间不足不足某报设有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列出的信某报设有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列出的信息，以高三学生李华的名义给息，以高三学生李华的名义给Mr. HelperMr. Helper写一封英文写一封英文短信。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入五句话。短信。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入五句话。Dear Mr. Helper, Im a senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can
19、hardly stand the great pressure._ I am looking forward to your advice. Yours sincerely, Li Hua写作步骤：写作步骤：1 1 体裁格式体裁格式2 2 内容内容3 3 人称、时态人称、时态4 4 信息点的整信息点的整合和排列合和排列第第1 1步步 审题审题写信写信描述高三学生现状。描述高三学生现状。第一人称。一般现在时。第一人称。一般现在时。6 6项项运用刚学的知识运用刚学的知识, , 译成英语。译成英语。2) 每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。（倒每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。（倒装）装） Hardly can
20、we find any time to relax ourselves / for relaxation .3) 每天睡眠时间不足，不利于健康每天睡眠时间不足，不利于健康.(定从定从) a. We dont have enough time to sleep, which does harm to our health. b. We suffer from lack of sleep, which, in the long run, is not good for our health.高高 三三 学学 生生 现现 状状负担过重的原因负担过重的原因每天在校时间每天在校时间约约10小时小时1.
21、面临高考；面临高考；2. 家长期望高。家长期望高。每天作业时间每天作业时间3-4小时小时每天娱乐时间每天娱乐时间几乎没有几乎没有每天睡眠时间每天睡眠时间不足不足某报设有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列出的信某报设有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列出的信息，以高三学生李华的名义给息，以高三学生李华的名义给Mr. HelperMr. Helper写一封英文写一封英文短信。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入五句话。短信。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入五句话。Dear Mr. Helper, Im a senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help be
22、cause I can hardly stand the great pressure._ I am looking forward to your advice. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 技技 巧巧1. 1. 使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3. 3. 使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词2. 2. 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式 abundant sentence patterns proper conjunctions advanced words and phrases使文章“靓”起来的技巧Thanks for your attention!学会使用学会使用wit
23、h 结构结构With + 宾语宾语+adj.adv.prep.- phraseto dodoingdone1)她睡着了，灯还亮着。她睡着了，灯还亮着。She fell asleep_.2) 种了很多花，我们学校呈现出新的面貌。种了很多花，我们学校呈现出新的面貌。 _，our school took on a new look.3)不要满嘴巴食物说话。不要满嘴巴食物说话。Dont speak _.4)由于无事可做，我就看了一部电影。由于无事可做，我就看了一部电影。_ , I saw a movie. With many flowers planted with your mouth full W
24、ith nothing to do with the light burning将简单句改为强调句、感叹句将简单句改为强调句、感叹句2. He went there yesterday. (强调强调)He did go there yesterday. 简单句改为强调句或感叹句后语气更强烈、感情更充沛，简单句改为强调句或感叹句后语气更强烈、感情更充沛，是不可多得的高级表达方式。是不可多得的高级表达方式。 3.To prevent the pollution is very important.（感叹句感叹句） How important it is to prevent the polluti
25、on! 1. The children wont come home until 5pm. .(强调强调) It is not until 5pm. that the children will come home.名言警句别忘了名言警句别忘了我们应该充分利用时间了。我们应该充分利用时间了。It is high time for us to make good use of time.As the saying goes, It is high time for us to make good use of time.“Time and tide wait for no man.”常用谚语常用
26、谚语(Proverb)Action speaks louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。事实胜于雄辩。 Strike the iron while it is hot. 趁热打铁。趁热打铁。Think twice before you do. 三思而后行。三思而后行。Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。熟能生巧。When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。入乡随俗。 Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。 It is no use crying over spi
27、lt milk. 覆水难收。覆水难收。 All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。请加上恰当的连接词. 1）We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest. 2）I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80. 3）Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.In additionA
28、s a resultWhats worse三、使用恰当的连接词三、使用恰当的连接词使句子使句子“靓靓”起来的小结：起来的小结： 1. 1.简单句中伴有较高级的词汇。简单句中伴有较高级的词汇。2.2.用丰富和较高级的句式用丰富和较高级的句式 如：双否定；形式主语、形式宾语句型；如：双否定；形式主语、形式宾语句型；倒装句；被动句；分词；倒装句；被动句；分词；withwith结构；强结构；强调句和感叹句；各类型的从句调句和感叹句；各类型的从句; ;名言警名言警句等。句等。3.3.用恰当的连接词，使句子之间更紧凑，用恰当的连接词，使句子之间更紧凑，连贯。连贯。 . . 假设你是一名中学生，叫李华，请根
29、据下表内容用英语写假设你是一名中学生，叫李华，请根据下表内容用英语写信给某报社信给某报社Just Ask栏目主持人栏目主持人Ralph，请求帮助解决一个长期，请求帮助解决一个长期困扰你的问题。困扰你的问题。你的情况1. 学习成绩好 2. 爱母亲 3. 有点害怕母亲你母亲的情况1. 大学教授，工作勤奋2. 很少有时间和你说话3. 对你很严，易发脾气你的问题1. 很少交流 2. 希望互相了解 3. 不知如何沟通注意：1. 词数：100左右 2. 可是当增减细节，使内容连贯 3. 开始结尾句已给出，不计入总词数 4参考词汇：发脾气lose ones temper Dear Ralph, Im a m
30、iddle school student. I always do well in my studies. Im not happy. I cant get along well with my mother. I love her very much, but Im a bit afraid of her. I write to you. My mother is a professor in a university. She works very hard. She has little time to talk with me. She is strict with me . She
31、often works all day long and often loses her temper. Shes very busy . I seldom communicate with her . It is a big problem for us. I think we have nothing to talk about. I want to know her more. How can I communicate with my mother? Could you give me some advice? I hope well be closer. What can I do?
32、 Sincerely yours, Li Hua Im a middle school student. I always do well in my studies. But Im not happy. I cant get along well with my mother. I love her very much, but Im a bit afraid of her. I write to you. 段落优化段落优化 1 Im a middle school student, doing well in my studies. ButIm not happy because I ca
33、ntget along well with my mother. Much as I love her , Im a little afraid of her. So I write to you for some advice. As a professor in a university, my mother works so hard that she has little time to talk with me. Whats more, she is strict with me and frequently loses her temper easily. 段落优化段落优化 2M
34、y m o t h e r i s a p r o f e s s o r i n a university. she works very hard. She has little time to talk with me. She is strict with me. She often works all day long and often l o s e s h e r t e m p e r easily. Shes very busy . 段落优化段落优化3I seldom communicate with her. It is a big problem for us. I t
35、hink we have nothing to talk about. I want to know her more. How can I communicate with my mother? Could you give me some advice? I hope well be closer. What can I do?Lacking communication is indeed a serious problem between my mother and me. I am eager to know her More. What concerns me most now is
36、 how to communicate with my dear mother. I do hope well be closer. Id appreciate itif you could give me some advice.Dear Ralph, Im a middle school student, doing well in my studies. But Im not happy because I cant get along well with my mother. Much as I love her , Im a little afraid of her. So I wr
37、ite to you for some advice. As a professor in a university, my mother works so hard that she has little time to talk with me. Whats more, she is strict with me and frequently lose her temper easily. Lacking communication is indeed a serious problem between my mother and me. I am eager to have a chance to get to know each other deeply. What concerns me most now is how to communicate with my dear mother. I do hope well be closer. Id appreciate it if you could give me some advice. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 请注意标点和书写请注意标点和书写Thanks for your attention!