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1、托福独立写作真题高分范文实例赏析之方便食物的利与弊托福独立写作真题高分范文实例赏析 ,方便食物的利与弊。今天小编给大家带来托福独立写作真题高分范文实例赏析,希望能够帮助到大家，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福独立写作真题高分范文实例赏析 方便食物的利与弊托福独立写作真题思路分析题目：Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use speci
2、fic reasons and examples to support your answer.思路分析：总体上，“食物变得越来越容易准备”是一种进步，所以自然会带来improvement。使人们的生活方式发生了一些变化。好的方面：节省时间，越来越方便，一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来。也有不好的变化：准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减少了，比如“速冻饺子”quick-frozen dumpling 快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是，人们普遍变胖了，尤其是孩子。托福独立写作真题高分范文People today can prepare the
3、ir meal much easier than has ever been before. To prepare a single dinner, provident housewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they had to buy home dirty vegetables which had to wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth. Each and every step of preparation was a time-consuming tas
4、k. But now, things are entirely different. Supermarkets provide vegetables and meat clean and neat, some of them even have relevant ingredients and need only a few minutes to be made into delicious meals. And this change has indeed greatly improved the way people live.In a sense, food preparation is
5、 no longer a tedious task, at least much easier to tolerate. Such a change has liberated many women and given them chance to do more meaningful things, for example, a higher pay job or a more respectful one. On the other hand, more men are becoming willing to do the thing that they once hated so muc
6、h, and in some cases such transformation of men brought dramatic positive impact on the family. Today, it s not hard to imagine a wife comes home after a day s hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has already prepared her several her favorite dishes Children can more easily be
7、come independentat least they can make themselves breakfasts or dinners when parents are occasionally not present.But such a change has also brought some unexpected consequences. Girls nowadays are becoming more and more reluctant to deem household work as their responsibility. The reason is quite s
8、traightforward: it was once really ridiculous to insist men do trivial household work rather than go work and earn money to support family, but conditions have altered now, girls might think: I can work as well, or maybe I can earn a higher salary than you do, dear boy friend, if you want to marry m
9、e, answer me one question first, will you prepare me breakfast and dinner every day? And some boys, on the other hand, are becoming hesitant to get married, or simply remain solitary, among miscellaneous reasons they do so is one thing: I can take care of myself, at least I don t really need someone
10、 prepare me dinner. Anyway, such a change is positive and it did improve the quality of people s life. At least it has brought girls, boys, husbands, wives, children and everyone else who has to prepare food an opportunity, no matter what kind of opportunity it is.托福考试复习攻略之写作语法常见错误托福写作常用语法有哪些?一、名词(N
11、.)名词是一个词，主要充当“主”和“宾”。其实，名词还可以是一个句子(即：一个句子充当主句中的一个名词)。由于名词主要用作“主”和“宾”，故常见的名词性句子有：“主语从句”和“宾语从句”。二、动词(V.)动词主要充当“谓”，在句法中，动词的主要表现形式是“非谓语”：ING(主动)、ED(被动)、To do(不定式)。三、形容词(Adj.)形容词常用来修饰名词，形容词也可以是一个句子(即：一个句子充当主句中的一个形容词)。由于形容词主要用作“定语”，故常见的形容词性句子有：定语从句(限定性 非限定性)。四、副词(Adv.)副词的基本功能是修饰动词(V.)和形容词(Adj.)，同时也可以用来修饰整
12、个句子，起强调、突出的作用。副词最大的一个特点就是：被删去后，不影响主句的完整。在英语世界里，也存在这样一类副词性的句子，叫做状语从句。托福写作常见语法错误1、不一致(Disagreements)所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等。2、修饰语错位(Misplaced Modifiers)英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化。3、句子不完整(Sentence Fragments)在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完
13、以后。4、悬垂修饰语(Dangling Modifiers)所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。例如：At the age of ten， my grandfather died. 这句中“at the age of ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明“ 谁”十岁时。按一般推理不可能是my grandfather， 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了。5.词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。6、指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronou
14、ns)指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。7、不间断句子(Run-on Sentences)什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。8、措词毛病(Troubles in Diction)Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。9、累赘(Redundancy)言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。10、不连贯(Incoherence)不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。11、综合性语言错
15、误(Comprehensive Misusage)所谓“综合性语言错误”，是指除了上述十种错误以外，还有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误。托福写作语法不会用怎么办?托福作文语法有问题，看语法书其实解决的问题有限。方法一：语法问题可以通过做翻译句子练习。可以找到新概念2册的课文，练习中文翻译成英文，可以帮助你理解语法。方法二：直接找好的托福写作范文，先翻译成中文，再翻译回去，把每个句子弄明白方法三：对于动词的用法，通常我们的学习是要大量背诵的。而且注意背诵的时候不要只背单词，要背词组。所以大家可以多背诵一些动词词组。方法四：你可以摘抄外国人写的文章里的动词词组。这是可以短期突击的。托
16、福写作解析:祖父母与年轻人托福写作题目及话题：祖父母The advice from grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world has changed a lot during the past 50 years.托福写作思路解析：题目大意：在过去的50年里，世界改变了太多，所以祖父母的建议对于年轻人来说已经没用了。此题目无论观点如何，想理由都不容易，所以解题的关键在于抓住题目中的抽象词“改变”或“建议”对其进行拆分举例。波波建议选择同意，然后爸改变拆分在工作和求学方面，主思路就是去说祖父母的建议在这两个
17、方面没有价值了。托福写作参考范文Throughout the gradual changes occurring to the whole human society, the value of advice from the older generation has become one of the most controversial issues among the general public. Many youngsters are the strong supporters of the claim that the huge changes in the past half c
18、entury has made the suggestions from grandparents useless. As far as I am concerned, the advice from the senior is not worth following, which is particularly true of hunting for an ideal job and receiving education.To begin with, consider the job-hunting. With the further specification of industries
19、, an increasing amount of new careers and job position are created, some of which are out of the understanding of the old people. For example, because of the remarkable booming of internet companies, the professional video gamers, which are considered inferior by the senior, has become a job which e
20、njoy great popularity among the young. As a result, the standard of judging whether a job is good or not has changed a lot so that the advice from grandparents about choosing a decent job is outdated. According to a survey conducted by a newspaper titiled China Daily among 1,000 people aged over 60
21、about the ideal job they consider, more than 95% of the surveyed vote for the so-called iron-bowl jobs such as teachers and civil servants, which has become obsolete to some extent. Therefore, the lack of knowledge about the modern job markets makes grandparents unable to provide feasible guidance f
22、or their grandchildren.托福考试复习攻略之写作同义词替换托福写作同义词替换：中性动词1.导致：v. cause, bring about, give rise to, lead to, generate, create,Be a contributing factor to2.认为：v. point out, argue, claim, assert, think, consider3.强调：v. emphasize, bring/call attention to, accentuate, heighten,strengthen4.集中：v. focus on, con
23、centrate on5.解决：v. combat, address, tackle, resolve, solve6.从事：v. carry out, conduct, perform7.承认：v. concede, admit, acknowledge, accept, allow, grant正向动词1.支持：v. support, advocate, agree with2.增加：v. increase, grow, rise, enlargen. increase, growth, rise,enlargement3.改善：v. improve, enhance, upgrade,
24、boostn. improvement, enhancement, boom4.扩张：v. expand, enlarge, extend, widen, broadenn. expansion, enlargement,extension5.提高：v. augment, increase, develop, intensifyn. augment, increase, development6.发展：v. develop, advance, grow, evolve, flourishn. development, advancement,growth, flourishing7.产生：v.
25、 develop, come into being/existence, come about8.获得：v. acquire, gain, get, obtain, attain9.执行：v. implement, execute, put into effect, performn. implementation, performance10.实现：v. achieve, fulfill, gain, accomplish, attainn. achievement, accomplishment,attainment11.开始：v. commence, begin, startn. com
26、mencement, beginning,start12. 促进：v. promote, further, advance, encourage, stimulate, fostern. promotion, advancement13.鼓励：v. stimulate, encourage, act as stimulus, motivaten. encouragement, incentive,motivation14.唤起：v. arouse, cause, induce, prompt, trigger, spark off15.需要：v. call for, demand, requi
27、re16. 取代：v. replace, take the place of, substitute forn. replacement, substitutionfor, in place of17. 加快：v. accelerate, speed up, quickenn. Acceleration, speeding up18. 减轻：v. abate, lessen, reduce, alleviate, mitigaten. abatement, lessening,alleviation, mitigation19. 保护：v. protect, preserve, conserv
28、en. protection, preservation,conservation20.保卫：v. safeguard, defend, shieldn. safeguard, defence, shelter21. 建立：v. establish, set up, found, constructn. establishment, foundation,construction22. 遵守(规则，法律)：abide by, comply with, follow, respect, act in accordance with23. 允许：v. allow, permit, give the
29、 means to, facilitate托福写作必背同义词_负向动词1.反对：v. object, raise objections, oppose2.减少：v. decrease, lower, reduce, cut downn. decrease, reduction, drop, decline3. 耗尽：v. deplete, exhaust, use upn. depletion, exhaustion, usingup,4. 阻碍：v. hamper, hinder, obstruct, impede, inhibitn. hindrance, obstruction,obst
30、acle, impediment5.限制：v. limit, curb, restrict, place a limit onn. limit, restriction6. 危及：v. endanger, imperil, jeopardize, put at risk7. 衰败：v. deteriorate, degrade, degenerate, rotn. deterioration, degeneration8. 恶化：v. exacerbate, aggravate, worsen, inflamen. exacerbation, aggravation,worsening9. 加
31、剧：v. intensify, escalate, sharpen, aggravaten. escalation, intensification,aggravation10.破坏：v. damage, destroy, ruin, devastaten. damage, destruction, ruin,devastationadj. devastating, destructive11. 污染：v. pollute, contaminaten. pollution, contamination12. 败坏：v. pervert, corrupt, deprave, lead astra
32、y, debase13.扭曲：v. distort, pervert, misrepresent, falsify, misstate, misreport14.削弱：v. weaken, undermine, impair, invalidate15. 干涉：v. interfere in/with, intervene in, impinge on/upon(侵犯)n.interference/intervention/involvement in/with16. 侵犯：v. encroach on/upon (time/rights/personal life)n. encroachme
33、nt on/upon =impinging on/upon17. 与相违背/相矛盾：run counter to = run contrary toContradict (each other)= conflict with =be at odds with sth18.误解：v. misunderstand, misapprehend, misinterpretn. misunderstanding,misapprehension, misinterpretation19. 逃避：v. escape, break out, evade, elude20.遭受：v. suffer from,
34、be stricken with, be afflicted with21.违反：v. violate, disobey, transgress, infringen. violation, infringement,contravention, breach22. 忽视：v. lose sight of, ignore, neglect23.疏远：v. alienate, isolate, become/get estranged fromn. alienation, isolation,estrangement托福写作必背同义词_其他重要的同义词代换1.大量的：enormous, mass
35、ive, tremendous, considerable2.重要的：significant, substantial, crucial, important3.严重的：adj. severe, serious, acute, drasticadv. severely, seriously,acutely, drastically4. 有害的：adj. hazardous, dangerous, harmful5. 贫穷的：adj. poor, poverty-stricken, destitute, impoverished6. 富有的：adj. rich, wealthy, affluen
36、t7. 差距：n. gap, disparity, divergence8. 积极的：beneficial, advantageous9.消极的：baneful, detrimental10. 明显的：manifest, obvious, evident, apparent11. 影响：impact, repercussion, effect, ramification12. 人类：the human race, human being, humankind, humanity13. 当代：in current society, in this day and age, in present-day society,in contemporary society14. 传统的：traditional, conventional, old-fashioned15. 健康的：healthy, vigorous, robust16. 有营养的：nutritious, nourishing, wholesome, healthy提升托福写作的终极秘诀是什么 提升托福写作的终极秘诀是什么?今天小编给大家带来了提升托福写作的终极秘诀 ,希望能 第 15 页 共 15 页