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1、初中英语书面表达初中英语书面表达Teenagerscolorful lifeWe study .We like listening to music.We play computer games for long.We like reading books.We often playSports.We go to KFC .Sometimes we travel.Sometimes we stay up studying.Teenagershealthy lifeWe study all day.We like listening to music.We play computer games
2、 for long.We like reading books.We often playSports.We go to KFC.Sometimes we travel.Sometimes we stay up studying. 认真认真审题审题，找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根
3、据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告, ,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文章要点。点。列列写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点子列出文章的要点 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel
4、A lot of people travel . A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.Enjoy your vacation.列列A lot of people travel . A lot
5、of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends Some other people visit friends or parents. or parents. A few people work.A few people work.How do people spend How do people spend their vacation? We made a their vacation? We made a survey and he
6、re is our survey and here is our survey reportsurvey report. .Come and enjoy Come and enjoy your vacation. your vacation. People who relax People who relax well work well.well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice body加加 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：1. Second , we should kee
7、p quiet in the library.2. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all.3. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.4. Whats more, we ought to return books on time.5. Our school rules are good f
8、or us, I will try me best to follow them.6. Third , we must do lots of homework.3 2 1 4 6 5 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or pa
9、rents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.连连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：1.1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both: and, as well as, bothand, and, not only not onlybut also, neitherbut also, neithernor;nor;2.2.表示选择表示选择: or, either: or, eitheror;
10、or;3.3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, : but, however, although, though, after all, 4.4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore: because, so, therefore5.5.表示条件表示条件: if , unless: if , unless6.6.表示对比表示对比: instead, not: instead, notbut, but, on the one hand on the one handon the other han
11、d;on the other hand;7.7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, : for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; that is to say, in other words;8.8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), : to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(lysecond(ly), next, later,
12、 since then, from then on, ), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;finally, in the end;9.9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, what: also, besides, whats more, actually, s more, actually, in fact, in fact, 10.10.表示结论表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, : all in all, altogether, in a w
13、ord, generally speaking, generally speaking, _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. How do people spend their vacatio
14、n? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连连美美 选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步： W
15、e interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit fr
16、iends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美美Skill One Make your sentences correct Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a
17、 meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekSavingbeachieveSkill Two Express in different ways Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study. The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shouldnt eat ju
18、nk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第四档第四档(1215分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合
19、言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。第三档第三档(811分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。的。第二档第二档(47分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。第一档第一
20、档(03分）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。分）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。 试题回放（试题回放（2006年上海市）年上海市） 以以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。标点符号不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型以下句型供参考）供参考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To
21、make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true I have a dreamHave you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider.I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think its danger
22、ous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That is!To make my dream come true, Ill practice more after middle school. Also, Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy
23、 the life I like best.Passage One I have a dreamAnybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams.Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do everything t
24、hey want.When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it wont be achieved any more.Its just a dream, in my heart.Passage TwoPassage Three I have a dreamMy dream is to be a basketba
25、ll player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream come true. I need try to do it. And I need take some time to do it. I need practice every day. If my dream come true, I will more try to do it.I Have A Dream My biggest dream is t
26、o see the reality through my own eyes but not through the books. Since I had the dream, Ive fallen in love with history and math. History is the truth and math will open a door. To make my dream come true, I shall study hard. Someday, a strange machine that can turn back time will be built by me. If
27、 my dream comes true, Ill sail across the ocean time. Ill watch Jesus rise if he ever did. What if its a fake? Ill come back as the fire to lead people whore blinded by the old beliefs. Ill be great because I have a dream and dreams will help mankind to reach the reality and be wise.All of us have h
28、olidays in our daily life, but how do people spend their holiday? We did a survey and here are the results. from Huang JingyiIts nothing better than having a rest after working ! So how do people rest themselves on vacation? According to our survey, there are several ways. from Meng Yuan All in all, different people have different ways to relax themselves. But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday, then we may work better. from Liu ChengSo this year, why not consider going outside? Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work or study. from Wu Yi