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1、 书面表达讲练书面表达讲练 之之 赢取高分策略赢取高分策略 2011高考英语二轮复习 要求考生根据所给情景，用英要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇语写一篇100至至120个单词左右的个单词左右的短文短文 情景包括目的、对象、时情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。形式有图画、图表、提纲等。 本部分满分本部分满分25分。分。1、先根据文章的内容和语言初、先根据文章的内容和语言初步步确定档次确定档次。第五档第五档. 2125分分第四档第四档. 1620分分第三档第三档. 1115分分第二档第二档. 610分分 第一档第一档. 15分
2、分 0分分v第五档第五档(很好很好);(21-25分分)v1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。v2. 覆盖所有内容要点。v3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。v4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。v5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。v6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。v第四档第四档(好好)：(16-20分分)v1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。v2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。v3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。v4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
3、v5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。v6. 达到了预期的写作目的。v第三档第三档(适当适当)：(11-15分分)v1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。v2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。v3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。v4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。v5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。v6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。v第二档第二档(较差较差)：(6-10分分)v1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。v2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。v3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。v4. 有一些语法结构或词汇
4、方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。v5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。v6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。v第一档第一档(差差)：(1-5分分)v1. 未完成试题规定的任务。v2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。v3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。v4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。v5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。v6. 信息未能传达给读者。v不得分：(0分)语言地道，语言地道，规范规范覆盖所有内覆盖所有内容要点容要点2、主要内容：、主要内容： 内容要点；内容要点； 词汇和语法的数量和准确性；词汇和语法的数量和准确
5、性； 上下文的连贯；上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性语言的得体性应用了较多应用了较多的语法结构的语法结构和词汇和词汇有效地使有效地使用了语句用了语句间的连接间的连接成分成分3、拼写和标点拼写和标点是语言是语言准确性的一个方面，准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考际的影响程度予以考虑。虑。4、如、如书写较差书写较差，以至影，以至影响交际，将分数降低一响交际，将分数降低一个档次。个档次。五个步骤1、审题、审题文字信息文字信息图画信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点题材、人称、时态、要点2、词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句、词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节
6、要点。话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。的词语扩展成句子。4 联句成文：联句成文：注意：注意：主语和谓语主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系逻辑关系开头与结尾开头与结尾语篇衔接语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写、检查修改，规范抄写给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3. Ending 小结；呼应主题 根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。
7、短文要写得连贯、完整。字数100字左右。审 题词句 文1、体裁：叙述Tom骑自行车的经历，为记叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故3、人称：第三人称Tom4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。 The other day, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast. He was so frightened that he quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. T
8、he car hit his bike and he fell off it. When the driver realized that he had caused an accident, he got such a fright that he took flight with his car. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately a passer-by happened to see what had happened and remembered the number of t
9、he car. He reported this to the police. Now the driver has been caught and will be punished for his wrong doing.1.“ ,”:Turn right, there is a building ahead.:Turn right,and there is a building ahead.It rained yesterday,he didnt come.It rained yesterday, so he didnt come.She failed in the exam,it mad
10、e her sad.She failed in the exam, and it made her sad.She failed in the exam, which made her sad.She invited a lot of guests, most of them were her friends. She invited a lot of guests. Most of them were her friends. She invited a lot of guests, and most of them were her friends. She invited a lot o
11、f guests, most of whom were her friends.一一.改为两个简单句改为两个简单句二二.恰当使用关联词恰当使用关联词(并列句）并列句）二二.使其中一句充当另一句的使其中一句充当另一句的成分（定语从句）成分（定语从句）She likes dancing、skating、surfing、boating and swimming.She likes dancing, skating, surfing, boating and swimming.He said he could play volleyball, basketball He said he could p
12、lay volleyball, basketball He said he is going to come tomorrow.He is very clever, so he thought of a good idea. 句式多变化句式多变化作文更优美作文更优美1?-2? 如何使书面表达更加优美流畅?1.学会不同方式表达学会不同方式表达2.适当使用高级词汇适当使用高级词汇3.注意句式结构变化注意句式结构变化4.合理使用连接用语合理使用连接用语Elegance1.The man didnt know what he should do next. =The man didnt know _
13、_ _ next. 2.Hurry up, or youll miss the train. =You wont catch the train _ you _ hurry. =You will miss the train _ you hurry.what to do if dont unless3.Too many people to the zoo will cause traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic ja
14、m . lead to result in 4.虽然他是个孩子，但他懂得很多虽然他是个孩子，但他懂得很多(一句多译)1) _ _ 2)_Although/ Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child as (though) he is , he knows a lot.5.5.这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。1)_2)_3)_4)_This book was so interesting that I read it again and again. This was such an inter
15、esting book that I read it again and again.So interesting was this book that I read it again and again.This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again.6.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom.= The teacher came into the classroom, _ _ _ _ _ _ (用with的复合结构) The t
16、eacher came into the classroom, _ _ _.（用独立结构）with a book in his hand book in hand 1.They believe a public park should be free . They believe a public park should be _ _ _.2. The railway in our county is being built.The railway in our county is _ _. free of charge under constructionusing complicated
17、/ advanced words注意使用词组、习语谚语、注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 3. We think the meeting is very important .= We _ _ _ that the meeting is_ _ _.4.The result is not satisfying at all.=The result is _ _ satisfying hold the view of great importancefar from Dont worry about your expensesfo
18、r university education, and we will try to help you. and we will make the greatesteffort /do our best / try every meansto help you.At that time the taxi driver had to ask the tourist for help.At that time the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to the tourist.I came up with a good idea.I had a goo
19、d idea.A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.丰富的句式：丰富的句式：( (常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can co
20、me if possible.3、 倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.5、 with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the s
21、treet with a handbag in her hand.6、 定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各种名词性从句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs
22、 help at present.8、 各种状语从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain w
23、as getting more and more heavily. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 5. I pa
24、ssed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式怎样使用较丰富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had hap
25、pened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He
26、 had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make
27、rapid progress.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. (NMET 范文)As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NMET范文)Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. (NMET范
28、文)三、怎样使用恰当的连接词三、怎样使用恰当的连接词 并列 选择 原因 结果 时间 比较 转折 递进 举例 总结and; as well as ; also;or; eitheror; or else; otherwisebecause ; owing to; due to ;on account of ; thanks toso ; therefore ; thus ; as a resultwhen ;soon after ; before; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally; afterwards.on the contrary ; on
29、 the other hand ; likebut ; yet; however ; although; in spite of ; instead ; besides ; moreover ; even ; in additionfor example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ;after all ; in short ; in general ; generally speaking in all, in a wordPractice 1 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1. Xiao Ming was walkin
30、g in the street _ he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west .3. It was not long _ the police came .4. _he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.whenin order thatbeforeAs soon as 5. Do you agree with my arrangement ?
31、_ , do write to me soon.6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80.8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhats worse 联合国教科文组织某考察团正联合
32、国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：的形式简要介绍这个村的情况： 1)大小：近大小：近100户人家，约户人家，约500口人。口人。 2)变化：过去很穷，变化：过去很穷，78年后变年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。现已旧貌换新颜。 3)教育：原来的学校很小，现教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费
33、就读。儿童在此免费就读。 注意：注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：）词数：100- -120之间。之间。Practice 书面表达：书面表达：Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before.
34、Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, We
35、lcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one w
36、ith/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . 书面表达：书面表达：Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now i
37、t has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school
38、. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. Ladies and g
39、entlemen, Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look
40、. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free educ
41、ation. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 高考满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the
42、evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.